HTML Abandoned Charley's Chase [v0.25] [KlonHad]

[UncleVT]

Overview:
Is my first game trying to learn twine, I'm gonna put everything i can into it.
In the game you will take control over Charlie's life right after she moved into a new city, She'll need a job to pay here rent and other living expenses.
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Thread Updated: 2019-07-22
Release Date: 2019-07-22
Developer: KlonHad

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Version: 0.25
OS: Windows, Linux, Mac, Android
Language: English
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[Bumtzy]

You might want to move all the pictures and GIFs in a media folder.

 

[KlonHad]

Any feedback is welcome guys, Like it says in the developer notes, I'm a beginner and i'm looking to learn so any feedback is great! spelling errors and things i missed as well

 

[KlonHad]

You might want to move all the pictures and GIFs in a media folder.

Im a newb, When i did it the images wouldn't work

 

[Bumtzy]

Im a newb, When i did it the images wouldn't work

I don't know how twine works, but I looked at the code. When you enter the path to the picture you need to put "media/(name of the picture.extension)".
Maybe someone who used it can explain in more detail.

 

[Zurkei]

Im a newb, When i did it the images wouldn't work

Here is how you can fix that right now you are doing [img[Ci.jpg]]
Put the images into a folder (we'll call it media) and change what is above to [img[media/Ci.jpg]]
So basically it is [img[folder/file.extension]]

While I haven't worked in twine I do programming, if you have basic questions like that you can always send me a pm, you just might not get a response for a day or two, always glad to get more twine games going.

 

[Gromo123]

html + real porn +1

 

[e-disfunction]

Any feedback is welcome guys, Like it says in the developer notes, I'm a beginner and i'm looking to learn so any feedback is great! spelling errors and things i missed as well

Overview:
Is my first game trying to learn twine, I'm gonna put everything i can into it.
In the game you will take control over Charlie's life right after she moved into a new city, She'll need a job to pay here rent and other living expenses.​

Good luck & congratulations on your bravery, KlonHad!

Quick plot question : Are you going to force Charlie to have one, particular, sexual lifestyle (like slut, prostitute, welcome mat)?; or, a choice of only two radically different lifestyles (slut or pristine-something)?; or will there be a real choice of some combination of sexual lifestyles?

 

[Macari]

not even worth downloading yet

 

[shizzo]

Here is how you can fix that right now you are doing [img[Ci.jpg]]
Put the images into a folder (we'll call it media) and change what is above to [img[media/Ci.jpg]]
So basically it is [img[folder/file.extension]]

While I haven't worked in twine I do programming, if you have basic questions like that you can always send me a pm, you just might not get a response for a day or two, always glad to get more twine games going.

I am a lurker for a long time on this forum and i felt like i had to say something. Man, some of you guys are super supportive of new people and i respect that. There is not a lot of websites related to porn that have such a supportive community as this one.

 

[hotmike]

A game with Charlie... this for sure is interesting. Hope this will get loads of support!

 

[Halexx]

Well, keep it coming!

 

[bobjones9792]

Any feedback is welcome guys, Like it says in the developer notes, I'm a beginner and i'm looking to learn so any feedback is great! spelling errors and things i missed as well

Ok, I'm going to be perfectly blunt here. You are not ready. I don't mean this as an insult, I mean you need to do your basic research first and start gathering media before you post a game, especially before you start asking for money. You do have something here, but you should have a good grasp of things like file organization before you start or you might have to redo every display later on down the road. If that happens patrons are going to be rightfully ticked off at you when that causes delays.

Another thing is you are using gifs. Gifs are bad news for html games. They take up about ten times more space then something like webm, and they aren't any better in quality. There's a tool on the internet called WebMConverter. Try using it and start converting the files now before you end up with fifty clips that take up two gigs.

I'm not saying you need to know everything before you start, but you should be able to build a mini-game or at least enough of a game for someone to know you can finish the job. I'll prove I'm not all talk though, check the attachment to this post. I'm probably not going to revisit that game, as it was my first real project, and I left out the media files, but you should be able to get some idea of how to make a basic Twine 2 (with sugarcube 2) game with that. Be warned it has some serious fetish content (incest, hypnosis, male dom) in it, and its unfinished, even if it had the media files.

 

[Boobman4424]

Looks, interesting, I'm always willing to try a game

 

[KlonHad]

Ok, I'm going to be perfectly blunt here. You are not ready. I don't mean this as an insult, I mean you need to do your basic research first and start gathering media before you post a game, especially before you start asking for money. You do have something here, but you should have a good grasp of things like file organization before you start or you might have to redo every display later on down the road. If that happens patrons are going to be rightfully ticked off at you when that causes delays.

Another thing is you are using gifs. Gifs are bad news for html games. They take up about ten times more space then something like webm, and they aren't any better in quality. There's a tool on the internet called WebMConverter. Try using it and start converting the files now before you end up with fifty clips that take up two gigs.

I'm not saying you need to know everything before you start, but you should be able to build a mini-game or at least enough of a game for someone to know you can finish the job. I'll prove I'm not all talk though, check the attachment to this post. I'm probably not going to revisit that game, as it was my first real project, and I left out the media files, but you should be able to get some idea of how to make a basic Twine 2 (with sugarcube 2) game with that. Be warned it has some serious fetish content (incest, hypnosis, male dom) in it, and its unfinished, even if it had the media files.

Thanks for all the feedback i appreciate it, How do i go about making the media appear when they are in a folder? i tried that and they wouldn't show up.
i know its [img[filename.ong]] for something in the same folder but what would be the command for a file in a folder?.
I'll use webm no problem if its better, thanks for the tip!

 

[KlonHad]

Here is how you can fix that right now you are doing [img[Ci.jpg]]
Put the images into a folder (we'll call it media) and change what is above to [img[media/Ci.jpg]]
So basically it is [img[folder/file.extension]]

While I haven't worked in twine I do programming, if you have basic questions like that you can always send me a pm, you just might not get a response for a day or two, always glad to get more twine games going.

Thanks a lot, I will use it and try to make it better

 

[KlonHad]

Good luck & congratulations on your bravery, KlonHad!

Quick plot question : Are you going to force Charlie to have one, particular, sexual lifestyle (like slut, prostitute, welcome mat)?; or, a choice of only two radically different lifestyles (slut or pristine-something)?; or will there be a real choice of some combination of sexual lifestyles?

No, I'm currently thinking about making as many choices as i can while learning variables so i can one day create a more extensive game, I do intend to make as many lifestyles/choices as i can.
The adult modeling route would be a bdsm/sugar daddy situation, The secretary job would be a freeuse/office slut situation and getting over the breakup which will soon be implemented & would be a about partying/drug use and in those paths you will have idealy more then one choice

 

[Deleted member 131024]

It's a good thing that you started to make your own game but you have a long road ahead of you.
Some tips for the future:

• Remove dead links: Nothing is more frustrating then finding a dead end.
• Polish what you have: So far nothing seems rewarding or fun. Before you branch fill one path with more content.
• Check your design: "I give up" after failing to get one out of X jobs? That is a bad design choice.
• Set yourself apart: You are not the first game with a female protagonist in a new city. Why should people care or even pay you money for that?

Might sound a bit harsh but the competition is hard.

 

[zoomg]

Why still use gifs when things like webm exist ?

 

[KlonHad]

Why still use gifs when things like webm exist ?

Why still use gifs when things like webm exist ?

When i played html games i always assumed they were gifs,

Here's 0.2 -

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0.2 changelog:
Changed gifs into webm by your advice to significantly make the files smaller.
made a media foler by your suggestion as well .