Ottoeight
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- Mar 13, 2021
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A good writer should know that characters shouldn't explain anything or preach sermons.Guys as a computer person I want to share this simple "trick" hacker movies taught me. Whenever a fictional character explain something from your area of expertise, replace that explanation with "blabla" or "magic" and you'll suddenly be able to enjoy whatever you're reading.
Oh, that guy just said "dark web"? Let me just turn off my brain for a minute. It works quite well.
We don't need/want to read a novel or watch a movie to learn science/history/geography/philosophy/whatever and if we feel the need of a sermon we have our priests.
Anyway, I don't feel this is the case of Chasing Sunsets.