BeingADikDik
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- Apr 17, 2021
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The bigger narrative issue is having bad end / game overs in a story that is being told by future MC to a bartender.In general, in my opinion, they also create a lot of confusion. I think for example of Cristian going from rapist, to victim to foster brother of the family.... Flashbacks that have immediate utility such as the experience in the mountains or the after party at the end of high school, or Mallory's childhood work . The rest I don't find so useful in understanding much about the characters.
And then I died. I am a scary ghost. ooooooooooo