Ren'Py Chat Noir [v0.0.12] [Joy Boy]
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The dialogue doesn't make any sense. Dan sends a picture of Evelyn fucking someone else, and the MC never brings it up. He doesn't confront her about it at all when it should have been the very first thing he mentioned the next time he talked to her. It just doesn't make any sense. The explanation that it's edited from Dan later doesn't mean he wouldn't have brought it up with Evelyn first. It should at least be an option to bring it up at the very least.
Also, after Dan sends the blowjob picture, my Gallery broke and nothing shows up anymore. It's completely blank.
Edit: After getting another picture, it comes back. There must just be some sort of error in the code during that period of time.
Another thing I noticed, Tiffany never sent the final promised photo of Evelyn with Ryan. Irritating, lol.
Also, after Dan sends the blowjob picture, my Gallery broke and nothing shows up anymore. It's completely blank.
Edit: After getting another picture, it comes back. There must just be some sort of error in the code during that period of time.
Another thing I noticed, Tiffany never sent the final promised photo of Evelyn with Ryan. Irritating, lol.
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This is promising, but I feel like it would be better to be given the choice of whether or not the Player wants to go down the sharing path. There was no inclination the MC was into sharing his GF with others until it was basically forced on him. That lack of agency is annoying.
I know it's a kinetic novel style, but it feels too forced. I think the story would be better if it wasn't kinetic and a choice was there. There's a unique story here that has a perfect setup already: NTR with "edited" photos. It feels like a missed opportunity.
The way I would do it is have the MC make a deliberate choice between actually wanting to share and keeping it as a fantasy. If the MC chooses to keep it as a fantasy, then Dan and/or others could send him edited photos with the MC's permission, but the catch is that they're actually real. The FMC would be trying to hide her cheating and lying to the MC, and the MC would think his "friends" are doing him a solid by fueling his fantasy.
I haven't seen any other stories do anything like that before, and it has a chance to set this story apart in that way. And all the building blocks are already in place.
I know it's a kinetic novel style, but it feels too forced. I think the story would be better if it wasn't kinetic and a choice was there. There's a unique story here that has a perfect setup already: NTR with "edited" photos. It feels like a missed opportunity.
The way I would do it is have the MC make a deliberate choice between actually wanting to share and keeping it as a fantasy. If the MC chooses to keep it as a fantasy, then Dan and/or others could send him edited photos with the MC's permission, but the catch is that they're actually real. The FMC would be trying to hide her cheating and lying to the MC, and the MC would think his "friends" are doing him a solid by fueling his fantasy.
I haven't seen any other stories do anything like that before, and it has a chance to set this story apart in that way. And all the building blocks are already in place.
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Jeez, fix the Gallery buttons. The hit-boxes are weird, they don't work right away, and it's just all over the place. Should also make it so that clicking on the images in the chat enlarges the photos so we don't have to go to the clunky Gallery every time we want to see the picture in full-size.
I really wanted to like this, but the facile conversations, and the complete lack of follow up questions just lead me to believe that none of these people liked each other enough to want clarity and a real relationship. NTR doesn't work if the people aren't actually in love with each other. The MC would happily just go off with Chloe, probably even Tiff too, and by extension any woman he's had a short conversation with. I have little reason to believe that his relationship with Eve isn't just a matter of convenience. Which might go a long way to explaining why she is so easily seduced by someone that pays her some attention.
Like some others have said, the small and infrequent images also majorly detract from engagement.
Like some others have said, the small and infrequent images also majorly detract from engagement.
it could be nice if we could see the photos bigger after they are sent in the conversation. Also a cheating path (without he mc knowing) loving the game till far