The writing in this game is just bad. Using words like "him" and "her" in the wrong places just ruins the immersion. The "phone" interface is just as bad. You can't click on an image in the chat to see it full-size so it's a tiny thumbnail image in the chat and if you want to look at it you have to go into the gallery to look at it in a size that doesn't look super small like it does in the chat. The story could be interesting if the delivery were done better. In it's current state, however, it's just not that great.
I tried to like it, and have followed it through various versions, but I'm at the point now that, if they're not going to bother correcting those 2 key things, what's the point? All I find myself doing is fast clicking to get to the photos so I can look at them all at once in the gallery after I'm finished w/ the chat portion of the game. Just not very fun in my opinion, and immersion? Forget that, it's not there.