BeastMaster59
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Joined today in hopes that there will be some Hot Action coming, otherwise I'm out, too many blu-baller Games out there.
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I DL'd your game, played some, and decided I didn't want to sit through another "Free Pass" fiasco while you try to find your wings in the VN world. Good luck in your endeavor.
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So Give the Dev a Chance, I sure will.
I think it will all about her partner unlike her husband (spoiler)
bamachine
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I was more commenting on his level of pigmentation. It is exceedingly rare for a black child to be that dark skinned when one of the parents is white.
Trasher2018
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Maybe she got it by double penetration. Or the dude was REALLY black ... who knows ^^
In its current state it is barely playable. The characters are talking, but they say anything.
I don't know how good the Russian wording is, but the translation feels very plain - maybe elementary school level.
Uhm - how should we know. Why "maybe"? You as the writer has to tell has how she is feeling and why.
Maybe something like this ...
"When the new day awakens, Christine wakes up and is still filled with sadness and longing because her husband has already had to leave her again."
"Even after getting ready to go jogging, her mood is dampened and she has to overcome herself to start the day."
--- Now I try my translator - I have no idea how this will sound in russian ... I have no clue
"С рассветом нового дня Кристина просыпается, все еще наполненная грустью и тоской, потому что ее мужу уже пришлось снова покинуть ее."
"Даже после того, как она собирается на пробежку, ее настроение портится, и ей приходится преодолевать себя, чтобы начать день."
Just as an example how I would word that instead...
In its current form it is just not fun to read and if you (the dev) wants to tap into the English speaking market, you have to find a proofreader or even a writer - as I said, I dont know if the original writing is better in its native language.
Nice suggestion!Maybe she got it by double penetration. Or the dude was REALLY black ... who knows ^^
In its current state it is barely playable. The characters are talking, but they say anything.
I don't know how good the Russian wording is, but the translation feels very plain - maybe elementary school level.
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Uhm - how should we know. Why "maybe"? You as the writer has to tell has how she is feeling and why.
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Maybe something like this ...
"When the new day awakens, Christine wakes up and is still filled with sadness and longing because her husband has already had to leave her again."
"Even after getting ready to go jogging, her mood is dampened and she has to overcome herself to start the day."
--- Now I try my translator - I have no idea how this will sound in russian ... I have no clue
"С рассветом нового дня Кристина просыпается, все еще наполненная грустью и тоской, потому что ее мужу уже пришлось снова покинуть ее."
"Даже после того, как она собирается на пробежку, ее настроение портится, и ей приходится преодолевать себя, чтобы начать день."
Just as an example how I would word that instead...
In its current form it is just not fun to read and if you (the dev) wants to tap into the English speaking market, you have to find a proofreader or even a writer - as I said, I dont know if the original writing is better in its native language.
Writting is a very difficult art that take a long time to master.
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Good luck with the game, will try it out.
Also don't put yourself down because you're not from an English speaking place and can't afford good hardware.
Can always join buy me a coffee etc and post the links on the main post (assuming that's allowed here)
And can always ask people for feedback on the game as you go.
Also don't put yourself down because you're not from an English speaking place and can't afford good hardware.
Can always join buy me a coffee etc and post the links on the main post (assuming that's allowed here)
And can always ask people for feedback on the game as you go.
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djv007
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I know u must be tired of ppl comparing this to AWAM. But this is better then AWAM. Great work bud
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