VN - Ren'Py - Completed - Christmas Eve [v1.0.0] [Jonesy]

  1. 5.00 star(s)

    NotNunyo

    A absolute masterpiece, even without animation.

    The Future:

    Since this game is so near perfect, I'd like to bend your ear on the future.
    • At some point, someone has to create a VN without the giant dick. Not that I'm aiming to see it, personally, but it's the only way for the plot to ever hold up on it's own.
      • If you really want to write a story without these 50-1000 lines of "Training Wheels", you will be creating a truly unique story because every single artist on F95 uses them, always.
      • There are way too many choices out there, and if you can't create a story so fantastical it could be delivered with a micropenis, this whole genre of Virtual Novel will soon die.
    • Why worry this much about the plot? There are scores and scores of better animated virtual porn out there. No matter how long you spend on animation and models, you will be dwarfed by these, readily available artirsts from Japan:
      • Yosino
      • Socrates K
      • Dream Dot
      • Moca
      • etc... (If people want hyper-realistic Loli content, your competing with these teams) What they do NOT have,, is a half-way decent story, even translated. I spend most of my time adding subtitles to these perfect animations, and it always sucks.
  2. 5.00 star(s)

    くもり空

    Absolute masterpiece. A pure daddy/daughter incest game that perfectly captures the essence of the kink and elevates it way above the standard. It's one of those games where you can tell that the author genuinely likes what he's writing, and it's a blast. Anything less than 5 stars would be criminal. Seriously, if you like this theme, just play it. I guarantee you'll like it.

    What? Still not convinced? Arrr, fine, you twist 'me arm... Let me elaborate more.

    Christmas Eve is a master class on how to use the character models, lighting, angles and scenery to create an intimate, immersive and wholesome atmosphere. Look at the cover picture. See that? Absolute cinema, fine art. The dev used those cartoony 3D models that came out a while back, and he nailed it flawlessly. Not only does it perfectly fit the theme, but also the facial expressions and lighting are done so well that everything just looks right.

    Despite the game being considered "short," there's a lot of condensed content here. None of the sex scenes feel like filler. They're all unique and well-developed, with a beginning, middle and end. The action picks up early on, so don't expect a slow burn. There's no dark, convoluted plot with tragedy and intrigue here, just an adult game meant to make you feel good. And while the game gets to the good stuff early on, the sex scenes don't feel rushed at all. They're written in a natural way that feels organic and believable. That's a difficult thing to do as a writer, but the result is an immersive experience that feels satisfying.

    Every sex scene is great, and a big reason for that is the dialogue. Eve is a sweetheart, but the dirty talk here is seriously hot. Eve is the perfect mix between sweet and naughty, basically the ideal balance. This isn't one of those games where you go through a bunch of dry sex scenes, edging yourself until you find one that is good. All the sex scenes are hot, so you can play this game in several sittings and enjoy it little by little.

    Some people might be bothered by the lack of "choices," but I honestly feel like kinetic novels are criminally underrated. In good hands, a kinetic novel can be a much more consistent and well-developed experience with no loose ends. It fits the type of game that this is, and it gives the author free reign to tell us a good story that feels almost cinematic.

    And while the title and cover art give focus to the main heroine of this entry, a large portion of the game is dedicated to the other girls as well. This isn't one of those pump-and-dump games that give you one sex scene based on the theme (Christmas) and then it ends. You get several sex scenes, plenty of foreplay, some pure cute moments and plenty of time to get attached to the other girls who are all adorable.

    And speaking of characters, every girl feels unique and full of personality. All the girls have their own quirks, and I liked all of them. Kay is too goddamn adorable, but I honestly can't pick a favorite. That being said, there's a bit of tonal shift at the end, and it definitely caught me by surprise. I hope the sequel can capture the good moments that made this one great. There's already too much sadness in real life, and too many depressing games on this website recently. 2020 really hit us hard, huh?

    In conclusion, great game. If you like the theme and want a relatively short but memorable experience, this is a masterpiece. 10/10, seal of approval, golden star.
  3. 4.00 star(s)

    Teyrna

    I like the story. It's sort of a healthy blend of A Petal Among Thorns and The Daddy Plan... the latter of which I believe initial released after this, so probably TDP took inspiration from this and not the other way around. I don't even mind that the women in this are little on the short side (adult women can be short)... but did you really need to render the girls like this is a Daz rendition of Sailor Moon? Those eyes are ridiculous.
  4. 5.00 star(s)

    Erostraus

    I need more stories with this format. Its great. Eve is hot and the dad is just enough reluctant/willing. having Eve have cosplay be a passion is great not just because the costumes are great but because it gives her more character outside "i want my dads cock"
  5. 5.00 star(s)

    artuar

    I liked very much the story and all the situations. It may be a little fast how the the daughter starts to have sex, but the story tells that she was preparing for it. The animations are right. I'm now reading the sequel New Year Eve, which is much more complex but I hope it will be as good as this one.
  6. 4.00 star(s)

    Fate_B

    This is not a game. It is a ilustraded story. There isn't even the ilusion of choice, except the name of MC and age of the daughter and friend. And NO animations. But it is a pleasant story. And it is short. And it is ok ilustrated. So 4 stars is stretching... but still for me it is worth the time...
  7. 5.00 star(s)

    Bingzhu

    I just finished Christmas Eve today and it's an almost weird mix of comfy and hot. At least in the top 5 of all erotic VNs I ever played, maybe even the best. Thanks for that.

    P.S. I played through it nonstop without breaks ;D
  8. 3.00 star(s)

    BillBaxter

    [Reviewed [v0.4.1]; Final version at the time of review]

    Christmas Eve is a good game that demonstrates the creator’s talent but is hamstrung by substandard production. It has a decent core experience but is rough around the edges. Unfortunately, one of those edges is the sex scenes, which brings the experience down considerably.

    Positives

    Story: You, a long-time widower, and your daughter are driving to a cosplay convention several days before Christmas when a winter storm causes you to crash. You are then forced to take shelter in an unoccupied house. As it turns out, the house is a frequent vacation spot for romantic couples. This makes it the perfect place for your daughter to reveal her hidden feelings to you.

    Like much of this game, the story first appears basic and easy to understand. However, as the story progresses, more elements are introduced, giving the narrative slightly more depth. The unique relationship between your daughters and deceased wife is explored through flashbacks; you and your wife’s long-time friend have an unspoken desire for one another and a young girl with a troubled family situation seeking stability and compassion. Sadly, the game does not capitalize on all these story elements; ultimately, you may leave unfulfilled.

    Characters: Solid all around. They are sometimes a bit one-note and bland, but they have distinctive voices and personalities. Their relationships with the MC and each other are well-realized and believable, helped by the writing quality.

    Writing: Functional at its weakest with some really great stand-out moments. This might seem like meagre praise, but writing is an oft-neglected aspect of production. However, much like modelling, animating, or any other creative endeavour, it requires much work to be average. The fact that the writing in Christmas Eve never falls to a mediocre level, while sometimes even managing some clever lines here and there, is worthy of being celebrated. Said cleverness is found in the dialogue, which is occasionally thoughtful and engaging and helps the characters endear themselves to the player.

    Mise-en-scène: This aspect punched well above its weight compared to the other elements. The creator was knowledgeable enough to arrange scenes in ways that were aesthetically pleasing or trying to embody a certain feeling. One such example is the use of close-up shots. Done poorly, they could be awkward and ugly, but they were executed in a way that created a sense of intimacy with the girls and the MC. Another stand-out moment is the Christmas gift scene, A simple scene with all the characters that show how lighting and composition can create a beautiful scene of people who love each other enjoying each other’s company.

    Neutral

    Setting: A mixed bag. There are two main settings. A picturesque lodge leased often as a vacation/getaway spot. And the house where the main character and his “family” live. Ironically, the lodge is a boring location. Its sterility and near-flawless interiors make it seem like a movie set, but it is not particularly impressive. On the other hand, the house seems warm, inviting, and lived in; pleasant, but not too much so, with all the furniture and personal touches that make me believe that this is a place where people live. Altogether a much more exciting place for our characters to interact.

    Negatives

    Sex Scenes: The fly in the ointment. What, ostensibly, we’re here to experience. And what, unfortunately, brings everything down. The sex scenes have two main components: images and animations. The single pictures attached to particular text are fine, but the animation is sorely lacking. It’s two images roughly switching back and forth, a poor simulation of moving imagery. It looks all the while like two wooden puppets smashing against each other. This ends up curbing much of the player’s enjoyment.

    Additionally, they are animations rather than scenes going back and forth, meaning it is difficult to skip through them using the “Skip” button or mouse clicks. This means you are forced to experience them in all their “glory.”

    Conclusion

    A valiant effort that falls at perhaps the most crucial hurdle. A good game marred by poor animations that make sex scenes awkward and unwanted, a near-death sentence for an adult game. It is only through the efforts of the character, story, and dialogue that a good experience can be found regardless of this deficiency.
  9. 5.00 star(s)

    wrs_supernova

    That was a good experience of a game.
    While not my favorite kind of model for the girls (Eve and Kaylee the most), it is overall very good in this department.
    Animations are simple but ok. The only thing I'd change here is for the loop to stop only when we'd choose to.
    Story is also good, has enough details for immersion.
  10. 5.00 star(s)

    KnightOwlSC

    Okay.. yeah.. it totally borrows STRONGLY from another certain game.. BUT the renders are amazing.. the girl is beautiful.. and the writing is nice.. it's not overly flowery like the source game was.

    I really really really hope that the dev continues on this borrowing material trend and we get to meet the sister on the phone in a future game :D
    Update: So I reviewed too early :D

    Looking forward to the next game and sub'd via Patreon :)
  11. 5.00 star(s)

    theickobicko

    It's a good game overall. Quite sexy.

    The negative thing for me was it's quite quick, and i don't mean short, although that is also kind of true, but probably because the dev wanted to split the story in different parts, while. take this one as chapter 1. What i mean is that the characters "move" quickly. at one point MC is like "what the hell have i done" (when making out with his daughter, acting like the world collapsed around him. and the next second he is like "ah, i guess it's fine". I don't mind games that moves quickly. it's just that this was quick and sudden. It distracted me a little from the story. Still it was enjoyable.

    as for positives - the models are sexy, the writing is ok/good, the daughter is kind of perverted.

    on a side note, i can not pass to mention that this seemed a lot like another game - A Petal Among Thorns - father daughter in a cabin alone, exploring their feelings. the name of the daughter is a word play, the name of his other daughter is another word play. the owner of the cabin have the same name. it has A LOT of similarities, even the models follow the same style - big eyes, cute faces. with one exception - that other game is quite slow. it's a slow burn and although i like slow burn games as well, i struggle with it, because of the filling - it feels like the author didn't know how to manage the slow burn so they kind of started repeating the same topic in the character conversations almost word to word. But enough talking about another game, i kind of slipped here :whistle:. So I'm glad there is a similar game without those issues.
  12. 5.00 star(s)

    dkabal

    Dude, this game is awesome, the models are very good, I think I have a thing for big eyes in AVNs and this is on point.
    The story progresses a little to quick at the end, but aside that, everything works perfectly.
  13. 5.00 star(s)

    graybluered1

    The story though not 'long' did not feel rushed. It actually didn't feel 'forced' which I must say is its biggest plus from me. The story flowed nicely into the scenes. which isn't something I can always say for this genre.

    Visually speaking, The Renders were very nice as well as the animations the BGA and audio wise the BGM fit nicely.
  14. 5.00 star(s)

    Uthuriel

    Christmas Eve [v4.0] [Jonesy]

    I played this gem with the incest patch installed and I really liked it.

    Really cute incest romance between a father and his daughter.

    I can't wait for the sequel, I would hope the dev makes the sequel true incest. Stepcest in itself is kinda meh and not necessary for the story.

    If you like wholesome incest romance I would recommend it. It's kinetic though which can be off-putting for some people.
  15. 5.00 star(s)

    skwada

    This game is really good. The graphics are amazing, the music fits the scenes, the renders clearly have a lot of thought and effort put into them, the girl is cute and sexy as fuck, the writing flows decently and comes across as being written by a native speaker, etc. etc. I could go on but basically you should just play it
  16. 5.00 star(s)

    Thrakull

    As many others mentioned, this is clearly inspired by Petal Among Thorns and I'd also say Single Again. Unlike those 2 games, MC quickly accepts his stepdaughters affection and get out of his own way. The characters are rendered ambiguously young and this game also lets you choose their age and there is nothing in the story that conflicts with your choice of low to high teens(like the girls having a job or discussing their grade in school) so you can play it as a early teen loli game if that's your preference.

    You aren't the biological father which seems to upset some incest fans so here's notice of that.

    Entertaining, well rendered, decent pacing, likeable characters, good english, and the dialog matches the characters.
  17. 4.00 star(s)

    save8lot

    So I just finished playing through this game and ultimately I ended up enjoying it. Although in the beginning I wasn't so sure I would. It started out with noisy renders with distracting white pixels, a slow start with the long car ride and then the image for the car crashed into the snow looked like a real image that didn't match the car they were driving.

    After they made it to the Cabin I couldn't help but wonder if this game was just a copy and paste of "A Petal Among Thorns" by Lockheart. It's impossible not to notice the similarities between the two games, especially since its even the same cabin interior.

    (I also think the whole spider joke was unnecessary, but I am biased there because I hate those damn things!)

    However the story got better and I ended up liking the daughter and enjoying it overall. The sexual progression between the two characters is pretty quick but clearly that is because it is a rather short game to begin with.

    I think the game could have easily ended after Chapter 3, but I am really glad it didn't because the 4th chapter ended up being my favorite. The scene at the dinner table, and the following scene in the bathroom (with the rest of the cast outside listening), had me laughing my ass off. The introduction of and interaction with the additional characters made the story a lot more interesting. Sure, most of the lewd scenes happen during the cabin chapters. However I am the type of person that likes a little sex content to go with the story, not a little story to go with bunch of sex content.

    I will also note that the end credits do mention "Lockheart", so apparently him and his games were being used as inspiration for Christmas Eve as apposed to a ripoff of them.

    Ultimately I am looking forward to the announced sequel by Jonesy. I might wait for it's completion first, but I will definitely play it at some point.

    If I were to have a "wish list" for the next game, I would simply ask for the dev to improve the render quality a little (at least get rid of those noisy white pixels) and maybe look into better animations for the lewd scenes. Other than that, I think there is a good cast of characters and a decent story to build on.
  18. 4.00 star(s)

    connor1518

    Nice little story. Decent writing that does the job without any glaring missteps. The pacing is faster than stories of this type usually are but it isn't bad.

    Nice to see the Dev made the girls without unrealistic ginormous boobs and butts not to mention pretty cute.

    The scenes and renders do the job just fine, not bad looking. It had the feel of a quicker paced Petal Among Thorns but still different enough not to be a copy.

    Interesting to see Ka-bars mentioned, we were issued those when I was in the Marines.

    I look forward to seeing what the Dev does with the sequel. I hope the relationship between Eve and the MC continues and she isn't pushed to the side.
  19. 5.00 star(s)

    rux

    Is it predictable? More or less. Is it realistic? Definitely not. But is it good? Hell yeah it is! The models are really cute and it's obvious that the creator put a lot of heart into making this. Just finished chapters 1-3 and I can't wait for the next one. Glad to hear the creator has a lot more story to tell because I'll for sure be looking forward to it.
  20. 5.00 star(s)

    mmwookie

    Very well done.
    Nice touch with the isolated and stranded in a strange but welcoming place.... where feelings blossom and inhibitions melt away as the two grow closer from shared loss, and the undeniable urge of attraction unable to restrain itself without the distractions from the outside world holding back desire... *chef's kiss*
    looking forward to future updates/projects. 5/5 easy