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If we don’t take this genre into account, then I agree... I agree with this boring development of events... =))
I must admit, your answers almost convinced me ))
For now, I’ll accept it but leave room for the possibility of exploring the "Cheating" genre.

At least the beginning is good.
Sadly, not infrequently good novels end up unreadable, confusing, and just plain boring by the end.

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I like the idea of intrigue.
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I'd also like to add my thoughts (Captain Obvious style, haha)
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That's enough... or I'll get carried away now.
The last part is more like fantasy based on incomplete information, but you can outline several possible scenarios based on indirect signs. There's not enough space to cover everything, as they say.
Anyway, if anyone has more reliable information... or maybe the author himself will "drop" a grain of truth, shed some light on something... I'd be happy to read your comments.
Your whole theory is destroyed by the developer's answers.
2. Monica and the “cheating”
To be clear: there is no NTR in the traditional sense, meaning none of your love interests are taken from you or choose to betray you for someone else. Any moments that seem like NTR (such as what happens in the initial release) are purely for narrative tension. As the player, you can trust that your LIs remain loyal, (unless otherwise directed by you). It’s the MC who doesn’t have all the facts, and part of the story’s emotional drive for the MC comes from his limited understanding of the situation at the time.

For example, imagine one of your LIs is drunk at a club, and another character tries to make a move on her and she being drunk jokingly flirts back. You, as the player, know she would never actually betray you, but the MC doesn’t have that same certainty. From his perspective, it feels like a genuine threat, and he’s forced to step up, either to defend her or compete for her attention.

Scenarios like this are designed to trigger key moments of emotional tension or rivalry between characters. They're not about betrayal, they will be used to spark conflict and kick off new storylines or expand existing ones.

While this theme won’t play a major role in the overall story, it may pop up occasionally. So in the interest of transparency I think it’s important to give a heads-up to anyone who might be sensitive to that kind of content.
But as I said, Dev threw too much stuff together during the first release and wants to add imaginary elements like pseudo ntr and rivalry that will only be in the game for pseudo drama and in my opinion are not really needed by the game.
Again, in my opinion, the first release should have been dedicated to a more detailed disclosure of the MC environment and the story should have been moved forward from the second release, but it turned out as it did.
 

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I thought the same while reading the story.

I agree, this game doesn’t need NTR in any form. And the genre "Cheating" only confuses things. I believe the prologue could have been extended further but presented more smoothly.
Maybe the author will do just that. Maybe the author will expand the prologue.
In any case, thanks again. I’ll definitely keep an eye on its development.

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Was the whole Monica thing a setup. Monica actually set it up for him to meet Claire is Claire a top Hierarchy Vampire. Or has someone answered that yet if they have how far back was the answer. I am curious.
 

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Was the whole Monica thing a setup. Monica actually set it up for him to meet Claire is Claire a top Hierarchy Vampire. Or has someone answered that yet if they have how far back was the answer. I am curious.
I see one of two options - she's either a high-up and was part of Monica's plan, or she's from a rival family and took the opportunity to get in there first. For the second to be the case (and I'm only suggesting it because there was some talk about other families), I think maybe some others would need to be in on it, as I think she might have struggled to get him there for long enough to do it on her own if she was from a rival family - unless, of course, there were no other vampires at the party who would know this. I do think the house is owned by vampires though, and that's the secret behind how they have managed to acquire it and "donate" it to the girls of their family.
 

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Was the whole Monica thing a setup. Monica actually set it up for him to meet Claire is Claire a top Hierarchy Vampire. Or has someone answered that yet if they have how far back was the answer. I am curious.
She is not part of Monica's plan. Claire's own dialogue hints to it not being a good thing for us (it is for her).
 
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It could be that it was Monica's plan to turn MC but the clan had other plans that would explain the scene at Monica's house (she is crying after learning that Claire has been chosen to awaken her boyfriend) It would also explain why Claire knew that Monica and "the others" would be arriving soon...

The cheating it would appear is happening to Monica.
 

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It could be that it was Monica's plan to turn MC but the clan had other plans that would explain the scene at Monica's house (she is crying after learning that Claire has been chosen to awaken her boyfriend) It would also explain why Claire knew that Monica and "the others" would be arriving soon...

The cheating it would appear is happening to Monica.
Claire is cheating too (on her husband).
 

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Didn't know Claire was married, nonetheless could be Netori... Claire alluded to MC being some sort of higher individual and was happy that it was her that got to turn MC! I don't get that this is going to turn into some blasphemous NTR trope game rather it has a major harem feel to it...
When you're having sex with her she mutters to herself "So much better than my husband" or something similar.
 

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man, the art is soo good, looking for visual novel game with artstyle like this, anyone can reccomend me?
 

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2. Monica and the “cheating”
To be clear: there is no NTR in the traditional sense, meaning none of your love interests are taken from you or choose to betray you for someone else. Any moments that seem like NTR (such as what happens in the initial release) are purely for narrative tension. As the player, you can trust that your LIs remain loyal, (unless otherwise directed by you).
This sounds a lot like this will have sharing/swinging/ willing cuckoldry stuff and if that's the case, it would be wise to disclose it from the get go.
You will be surprised to know that people who don't like NTR don't like those tags either.

Again, just asking for you to clarify what's in your plans, not telling you to change anything.

For example, imagine one of your LIs is drunk at a club, and another character tries to make a move on her and she being drunk jokingly flirts back. You, as the player, know she would never actually betray you, but the MC doesn’t have that same certainty. From his perspective, it feels like a genuine threat, and he’s forced to step up, either to defend her or compete for her attention.
If someone makes a move on a LI and she goes along with it, that basically kills her character as a LI. No one likes to be constantly babysitting their women so they don't go around sucking other cocks, they are adults that can make their own decisions so if she decides she wants to flirt back I'm not going to step up or "defend her" . Defend her from what? Herself? She is the one flirting with another man, being drunk is not an excuse, or what, does the mc need to keep her on a leash everytime there's alcohol involved?

That sounds like you are sacrificing these LI, having them act "out of character" for some cheap drama and tension. If she is supposed to be a loyal LI as you describe her then have her act like that.

There many other ways to build rivalry, tension and conflict in a story, the ntr plot/bait is just the easy one and requires the women to act like whores, when they, supposedly, are not, and the MC to be constantly "saving" them from themselves, that's another aspect people dislike of ntr games so why would they want it in non "ntr games."

BUT, if you are planning to have sharing/swinging/willing cuckoldry then these scenes do make sense, since these "loyal" women would totally be open to fuck others (if allowed by the "alpha" :BootyTime:cuck MC), so them flirting with other men would be fitting, to show they are interested and not entirely opposed to it.

So yeah, it would be nice if you clarify what kind if game you are actually making so you can get the appropriate audience and avoid unnecessary discussions.
 
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Now that the initial release has been out for a couple of months, what is the expected (if approximate) periodicity of updates?
 

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