VN Ren'Py Chronicles of Kartoba [Prologue P2 Fix] [SinisterSlick Games]

[JokerOfTorment]

Eh, tried the latest update and wasn't a fan.

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Wouldn't surprise me if this is the start of Mc becoming a little bitch in some way and the dev is going add in the dreaded swinging/sharing content they alluded at when they made the post before saying: As the player, you can trust that your LIs remain loyal, (unless otherwise directed by you).

So most likely the Mc is going to let his girl or girls sleep with other guys etc. and that other guy is the Mc's girlfriend's new guy she is sleeping with etc. and if the Mc is going to be a little bitch the girl will just get away with doing it.

 

[e6mill]

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Correct. That's not what happened at all.

 

[e6mill]

So most likely the Mc is going to let his girl or girls sleep with other guys etc.

Because (according to some dick who has it in for MC and who we have zero reason to believe anyway) your GF kissed her grandfather?

 

[JokerOfTorment]

Because (according to some dick who has it in for MC and who we have zero reason to believe anyway) your GF kissed her grandfather?

I haven't played the game at all I'm just going based on what everyone has posted so far at this point but yeah like I mentioned of what the dev posted themselves it very much looks like the game will go that direction of adding sharing/swinging content so yeah and if what spyder says is happening of the Mc sounding like a bitch instead of getting answers from the gf on stuff about who the guy was and why she didn't answer his calls and all that if it even was true if it happened or not etc. then sounds pretty sus to me of that stuff being added the swinging/sharing stuff.

 

[e6mill]

I haven't played the game at all I'm just going based on what everyone has posted so far at this point but yeah like I mentioned of what the dev posted themselves it very much looks like the game will go that direction of adding sharing/swinging content so yeah and if what spyder says is happening of the Mc sounding like a bitch instead of getting answers from the gf on stuff about who the guy was and why she didn't answer his calls and all that if it even was true if it happened or not etc. then sounds pretty sus to me of that stuff being added the swinging/sharing stuff.

Maybe wait for any of those tags to show up before you start complaining about them based purely on other people's speculation?

 

[oidex]

your GF kissed her grandfather

Pretty sure it was her brother, Marcus because:
1. Dude is described as "attractive"
2. I doubt the old coot would go out himself
3. She probably wouldn't stay calm if he himself just told her that he played her and her BF was about to knock up some other girl and form a bond with her.

He also didn't say she kissed him, but he gave her a kiss (not specifically on the mouth) to console her, as she was crying after hearing the news.

 

[JokerOfTorment]

Maybe wait for any of those tags to show up before you start complaining about them based on other people's speculation?

I'm not complaining btw I'm just stating something if I was complaining you would know

 

[NoMansMind]

Man! This generation and their effeminate approach!
Monica....
are you SERIOUS?
here is the path I would have chosen:

Monica: "I thought I'd help you through it, be there!"
"but YOU...." ....(some other bullshit"
MC: "but instead you decided to deceive me, manipulate me, poison me..."
MC: "leave me in the dark about EVERYTHING!"
MC: "and now you have the AUDACITY to guild trip me???"

MC walks close, till his lips almost touch her face

MC: "here is the last thing I have to say to you: stay out of my life or I f*cking KILL you!!!"
MC turns around, walks out of the door, slams it.

end of this path.

so: where is my choice? or is it to TOXIC? to much masculinity?

but I guess the usual "take the blame like a beaten dog" approach is also o.k.

 

[sisco1986]

Wouldn't surprise me if this is the start of Mc becoming a little bitch in some way and the dev is going add in the dreaded swinging/sharing content they alluded at when they made the post before saying: As the player, you can trust that your LIs remain loyal, (unless otherwise directed by you).

So most likely the Mc is going to let his girl or girls sleep with other guys etc. and that other guy is the Mc's girlfriend's new guy she is sleeping with etc. and if the Mc is going to be a little bitch the girl will just get away with doing it.

with that entire story that you wrote using your own ass as the source you forgot to mention that the main li is a cuckquean and that she's already thinking of the mc fucking other girls when she's fucking him so i don't know how can you think that he's going to end as a cuck

 

[aranata]

At first I was really mad at Monica because I thought she abandoned MC and may have been cheating but after talking it out with Hadrian, Marcus, and Monica I can see that's not what happened at all and I do feel bad for Monica because

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And to everyone saying Monica CHOSE all this when she drugged him and she deserves it,

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Anyways, I really loved the prologue. The graphics and animations are insane but they do sort of give me the feeling AI was used to assist in improving the quality a bit. Also loving the scifi vibe with the different planets and stuff.

 

[sigvar]

What? Another bait and switch AVN? Add shit then remove it the following update? Yeah fuck this crap, don't need another Ocean. I guess I should have expected this from the shitty Patreon link in the OP.

Maybe try getting pissy with certain Australian feminist groups or credit card companies rather than the dev, eh?

Ultimately it's the dev's choice/fault. If they can't make what they and everyone else wants then they prob shouldn't bother at all.

I personally don't GAF if I don't get to fuck my mom or sis, but thanks for speaking for me.

This whole fucking interaction reminds me of that poem from almost a century ago and its related adaptations. In this context it would probably be something like this:

First they came for the shota fans
And I did not speak out
Because I was not a shota fan
Then they came for the loli fans
And I did not speak out
Because I was not a loli fan
Then they came for the incest fans
And I did not speak out
Because I was not an incest fan
Then they came for the porn fans
And I did not speak out
Because I was not a porn fan
Then they came for me
And there was no one left
To speak out for me

If you think that the cunts like those Aussie feminists or the Jack Thompsons, or the (insert certain religious group)s, etc. of the world will be content controlling just the certain flavors or kinks that you don't happen to care about, you really haven't paid attention to anything in recent or past history.

 

[Pun1sh3r13]

Man! This generation and their effeminate approach!
Monica....
are you SERIOUS?
here is the path I would have chosen:

Monica: "I thought I'd help you through it, be there!"
"but YOU...." ....(some other bullshit"
MC: "but instead you decided to deceive me, manipulate me, poison me..."
MC: "leave me in the dark about EVERYTHING!"
MC: "and now you have the AUDACITY to guild trip me???"

MC walks close, till his lips almost touch her face

MC: "here is the last thing I have to say to you: stay out of my life or I f*cking KILL you!!!"
MC turns around, walks out of the door, slams it.

end of this path.

so: where is my choice? or is it to TOXIC? to much masculinity?

but I guess the usual "take the blame like a beaten dog" approach is also o.k.

Is this really something that happens? A choice that gives you a “lost game.”

 

[JokerOfTorment]

with that entire story that you wrote using your own ass as the source you forgot to mention that the main li is a cuckquean and that she's already thinking of the mc fucking other girls when she's fucking him so i don't know how can you think that he's going to end as a cuck

The sources I used came from the dev themselves based on what they posted here in this very thread and people who played already so yeah what I posted comes from valid sources so yeah

 

[FuhQ6969]

This whole fucking interaction reminds me of that poem from almost a century ago and its related adaptations. In this context it would probably be something like this:



If you think that the cunts like those Aussie feminists or the Jack Thompsons, or the (insert certain religious group)s, etc. of the world will be content controlling just the certain flavors or kinks that you don't happen to care about, you really haven't paid attention to anything in recent or past history.

As I mentioned awhile back on a different thread I'm actually hoping the Visa/Mc idiots do simply ban all porn as that's probably what it will take to get the stubborn masses on both sides to all move to crypto at once. It makes no sense to me spending man-hours policing only particular kinks anyway when they could just ditch all of it and let AI do the policing the way Youtube/Google did long ago.

 

[Simpgor]

People are honestly too happy to spam "spineless MC!!1!"/ "w00w Bettttta cuuuck" and the like on literally every game but on this one it already acitvely hurts the story (even when there isnt much) and inspires very little confidence.

Maybe if you only ever play FPS/gacha slop this story could seem interesting but its absurdly predictable, to the point that you'll dont need to read it just look at the (nice) renders and the less nice animations. After a single "normal"/believeable interaction (with the annoying male best friend ofc) the story turbos towards exclusively "cryptic" obviously coded conversations between the MC and Monica for the rest of the paragraph they interact. I guess at abosulte minimum the MC does call out shes being weird (for all of a single line)

At the party we are allowed to not punch someone but then the backstory between that person and MC makes much less sense. The MC blames himself (enough for him to allow the bully to bully him despite him getting mad at the bully every time), then he has the choice to punch him, only to turn around and then say "well yeah I feel bad so I let him bully me"? To the obvious "forced drama" in tit form (already forgotten her name the blonde chick)

Which brings us the worst part of the (acceptable length) prologue the fact that the entire story (and multiple girls/LI/characters you will deal with) force MC "into the game", force who he has sex with, force who he trusts, and the fact that at some point he WILL forgive all of them, or they will die for MC because its a porn game and the modren market doesnt allow for any non vanilla solutions to this issue, not that I think the Dev would take any of those options given the prologue. If this didnt have such good looking renders this would 100% be on the level of some generic HS1 k-slop wish fulfillment.

 

[Rozhok]

Is the AI tag missing? It looks like the images are "enhanced" by AI.

 

[Krytax123]

I really dont get all the bitching here

Monica is a young girl who got forced to 1) keep her nature hidden and 2) give MC the drink.

The drink didnt turn the MC into a vampire it just accelerated his development to be one.

Oh noooo, she was kinda conflicted, confused and hurt about her destined bondmate fucking another girl for reasons before she literally 3 seconds later gets so turned on by it that she begs the MC to fuck her silly

I kinda get the feeling most people bitching here are just frustrated incest fans or their fragile masculinity couldnt take the pegging joke

Hadrian forced her to keep her mouth shut and that was simply the best course of action, i wouldnt tell young stupid kids about this stuff either and wait until they are older. It was the safest and best approach. The MC is done with college now and got to have a "normal" life for a bit but now his real life is starting.

His special bloodline ability seems to be that hes able to bond with multiple women (unlike other vampires) so i really dont get how people get a idea that hes becoming some kind of cuck lol

The guy who picked her up and made her cry was her fucking brother and she cried because he told her that her boyfriend will have to impregnate another woman instead of her and you guys are jealous and insecure about it because some fucked up stupid idiot talks some shit, i just fucking cant lol

The MC (and player) lacked the ability to give consent with Clair because Hadrian decreed it, this happened because the MC is not and never was human and there rules/etiquete and vampire customs are different and the whole thing was politics.

One reason Hadrian did this was to keep the MC safe, anotehr to keep his own dynasty safe, you can blame him for that but imo the 2000 year old guy explained it reasonable and well, there are worse destinys than having an additional hot bondmate even if we couldnt make a choice (yet)

 

[srfsmrf_]

Having a look at updating the patch ATM. Will take some time still (not rushing it), for now a fix for an early bug preventing the intro music from playing, replace script.rpy:42 with:

play music "<from 0.0 to 65.0>2-Dark Fantasy Studio- Lost in space-quiet.opus" fadein 1 loop

(The referenced file was present in Pt.1, but not in Pt.2 package that comes with the -quiet variant instead.)

edit: oh, yeah, script files are in archive + compiled, see attach (extract in 'game' folder)

 

[bolonar]

Feels like the dialogues in the second part were written by AI there is so much unnecessary redundancy in the text.

 

[Juerhullycin]

so dev had the chance to fix his first release but instead decided to double down and make the MC a sub sissy bitch for his mistress?

I do feel bad for Monica because

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And to everyone saying Monica CHOSE all this when she drugged him and she deserves it,

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play shitty games win shitty prices


SinisterSlick you said big choices are coming, so when can we break up with Monica?