Man, this kind of LLM writing is really exhausting to read through. It's so cringe and they say stupid "witty" shit all the time.
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am i tripping and remembering the wrong game? wasnt there a choice at the end about warning her about a message you got about a club or something and that either made her mad or didn't? also a render called halloween was not found. still hyped for more
You’re not tripping, it was there at the end but idk if dev decided to delete it and not go with that story line
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Well, I tried to like it, but ultimately, just didn't hit the mark for me.
So yeah, wasn't for me. Just bipolar characters and no originality in the story (same thing we've seen a hundred times already), and no real choices to do anything about anything, just fell flat for me. Either way, best of luck with this and thanks.
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So yeah, wasn't for me. Just bipolar characters and no originality in the story (same thing we've seen a hundred times already), and no real choices to do anything about anything, just fell flat for me. Either way, best of luck with this and thanks.
W criticism, hope dev takes it into account, however its unlikely for devs to do chapter 1 reworks until later in the game (probably when they run out of ideas) so by then it becomes pointless to even go all the way back to chapter 1, and by then with the future chapters its also already pretty much set in stone.
although id hate for a future chapter delay, since i mostly just care about new content, with your criticism this could truly become one of the greats (not that it has no chance now of becoming one)
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beginnings of nts stories its not uncommon for characters to be off guard with confusion to the feelings they are realizing. still plenty of time for MC to be a dominate cuck when he sorts out some feelings. plenty of nts games have regular dudes that still absolutely dominate in the bedroom. this story has barely started. worth at least waiting for a ch2 if you are on the fence
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OK...that was enough internet for me lol
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never seen one or played a game featuring one? cause they def exist bro haha. terms stag/vixen exist for a reason
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I understand what you’re trying to say, but no. But I’ll admit you’re technically correct, though.
I’ve seen how some games and novels try to portray this idea but even when judging it within a fictional setting, with all the usual flaws in rules and world-building, the core concept still doesn’t really work. A character who is fine with everyone sleeping with his partners, isn’t mocked for it, enjoys it and somehow still earns male respect and female admiration as a “dominant” figure stretches believability in many aspects.
It’s similar to other common fiction extremes: people flying into space without protection, an unarmed woman defeating dozens of armored soldiers or a tank surviving an impossible hit. You can write these things, but they push suspension of disbelief so far that they start to feel ridiculous rather than convincing.
But since its fetish you can create them how you want, so im ok with it. After all -> Harem arnt possible in our day and age, but it still sells like cup cakes and im all for it.
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harem is possible actually you just cant marry them. and just cause you never hear about the stag cucks doesnt mean they arent a thing. just under represented cause its easier for story tellers to tell the same lazy beta cuck story. they do exist more in the swinging space of nts but there are some in the hotwife type spaces as well. these are games, so both sides get embellished though. same reason they always portray beta cucks as small dick dudes that cant please their women. its ok if you dont get it or like it though.
I really don't comment in general, but jfc this has to be the absolute worst LLM-fueled writing I've ever read. The art is nice and the overall story design is passable, but this has to be the laziest, most trope prone writing I've seen on this site.
What makes it even worse is that the tropes don't make any actual sense. It's really difficult to express if you haven't actually lived in Tokyo, but the 'culture' is just all fundamentally wrong to the point of being actively distracting, it's this bizarre projection of an American small town boy moving to Manhattan (or perhaps more directly, Boston) being projected onto a totally different set of characters and context, akin to the way Japanese games in the 90's just made up random English-sounding names that had the right letters arranged completely incorrectly.
I'm not going to leave a negative review because, given how few reviews are already in, that would absolutely nuke the game's overall score and I'd like for the developer to take all the criticism in this thread to heart regarding the writing and give it a real shot - even simply starting with editing - rather than throwing in the towel so early on.
What makes it even worse is that the tropes don't make any actual sense. It's really difficult to express if you haven't actually lived in Tokyo, but the 'culture' is just all fundamentally wrong to the point of being actively distracting, it's this bizarre projection of an American small town boy moving to Manhattan (or perhaps more directly, Boston) being projected onto a totally different set of characters and context, akin to the way Japanese games in the 90's just made up random English-sounding names that had the right letters arranged completely incorrectly.
I'm not going to leave a negative review because, given how few reviews are already in, that would absolutely nuke the game's overall score and I'd like for the developer to take all the criticism in this thread to heart regarding the writing and give it a real shot - even simply starting with editing - rather than throwing in the towel so early on.
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Well, that particular choice was a quick solution at the time, but now I have a totally different vision for how the story unfolds. The same scene concept will appear in Chapter 2, but it will play out differently and fit better into the new narrative flow.
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Thats fair. I was legitimately thinking i was mixing up my games for a second. Love the redone ch1 btw.
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The release was initially planned for late December, but complications with several route scenes mean it will likely be done in mid January.
About the 3 routes (Vanilla/NTS/NTR), is it roughly like this?
- Stay loyal, check on Noelle often/resist temptations -> Vanilla path/ending (keep loyal GF)
- Fool around a bit, agree to share her -> NTS path (maybe harem/sharing, but no fully loyal GF at end)
- Get tempted by Scarlett etc. -> NTR path (lose GF completely)