idk how to use save files. i put them in the save folder but it doesnt work when i load up the game
nickelpower
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Bill Temple
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In the Meat Pit, "She feels the tip push past her esophagus and slide down the slimy wet confines of her throat..."
Somebody doesn't understand anatomy, eh?
TLDR: The esophagus is downstream from the throat. I think if one can't be bothered to verify the terms with an
The geek part:
The esophagus is the foot-long tube that ends at the stomach and originates at the pharynx in the neck. The pharynx is the passage that connects the nasal sinuses and mouth with the esophagus and trachea. "Throat" refers to the passage through the neck, so always the pharynx, often the trachea (windpipe), and rarely the upper couple inches of the esophagus. Regardless of the definitions of" throat" used, the throat always lies superior (above) the majority of the esophagus, so by the time a dick encounters the esophagus, it's already in or through the throat.
To "push past her esophagus", the tip would literally be in her stomach getting gastric juices on it: digested. The two actions in the sentence are joined with an "and", which doesn't require chronological order, but it is implied and is certainly the standard in writing action and sex scenes. "And" is understood to mean "then" in this situation. The only way for a dick to "push past her esophagus [then] slide down ... her throat" would be to initiate penetration from the stomach end of these organs and legitimately be over 13 inches, but the scene would have to be one of the game overs.
The obvious answer is the writer likely meant "uvula" instead of "esophagus". Maybe he meant "epiglottis", but then you're talking about some weird trachea-fuck situation, and again by the time a dick encounters the epiglottis, it's already in the throat. Or maybe a quick search for synonyms of "throat" yielded "esophagus"? But that doesn't make sense: you wouldn't write "push past her [throat] and slide down... her throat", right? I'm sure this sentence was written about 6-7 years ago and there's zero hope for it to be fixed, but bah! If anyone reading this is an erotica writer or will be someday, please either write anatomy in the ballpark of correctly or just use crude terms.
The concludes my stream-of-consciousness editorial rant, you will now be returned to your regularly scheduled thread comments.
Somebody doesn't understand anatomy, eh?
TLDR: The esophagus is downstream from the throat. I think if one can't be bothered to verify the terms with an
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, use colloquialisms, not defined anatomical terms. If you feel the need to use precise anatomical descriptions in your porn writing, many of us love it. It helps paint a more vivid mental picture, but it has to be at least somewhat accurate imo.The geek part:
The esophagus is the foot-long tube that ends at the stomach and originates at the pharynx in the neck. The pharynx is the passage that connects the nasal sinuses and mouth with the esophagus and trachea. "Throat" refers to the passage through the neck, so always the pharynx, often the trachea (windpipe), and rarely the upper couple inches of the esophagus. Regardless of the definitions of" throat" used, the throat always lies superior (above) the majority of the esophagus, so by the time a dick encounters the esophagus, it's already in or through the throat.
To "push past her esophagus", the tip would literally be in her stomach getting gastric juices on it: digested. The two actions in the sentence are joined with an "and", which doesn't require chronological order, but it is implied and is certainly the standard in writing action and sex scenes. "And" is understood to mean "then" in this situation. The only way for a dick to "push past her esophagus [then] slide down ... her throat" would be to initiate penetration from the stomach end of these organs and legitimately be over 13 inches, but the scene would have to be one of the game overs.
The obvious answer is the writer likely meant "uvula" instead of "esophagus". Maybe he meant "epiglottis", but then you're talking about some weird trachea-fuck situation, and again by the time a dick encounters the epiglottis, it's already in the throat. Or maybe a quick search for synonyms of "throat" yielded "esophagus"? But that doesn't make sense: you wouldn't write "push past her [throat] and slide down... her throat", right? I'm sure this sentence was written about 6-7 years ago and there's zero hope for it to be fixed, but bah! If anyone reading this is an erotica writer or will be someday, please either write anatomy in the ballpark of correctly or just use crude terms.
The concludes my stream-of-consciousness editorial rant, you will now be returned to your regularly scheduled thread comments.
nickelpower
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nickelpower
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i was there on another account while being non-sub but now cant find a workable link
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I was myself as well, and that server no longer seems to be around (or at least no longer in my list).
Seems to be a glitch in the Bar in Valos - Outer city, when I talk to this guy he directs me to go in and talk to the chef, except every time the dialogue with this guy ends, Claire gets trapped on the table and you need to reload your session.
Rsngo
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drdeath4h
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I've been seeing that in several places. Between that, and the random black screen, it's becoming unplayable.
SiegeCloud
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Which version is this? Steam or Patreon? I own the gold edition on steam, and I want to play patreon version.
Devs should probably transition off of patreon prompto before they inevitably get banned by some snitch.
Is there a list of bad endings NOT in the gallery? like the pregnancy rape one, or the bathhouse bad ending for the hunters? if yes, any tutorials on how to reach them?
BlinkyThe2nd
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Not sure. You could always look through the images in the game files to see which bad ends you haven't seen before, then ask specifically how to reach those ones.
Bill Temple
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I think it also happened when she's first sent outside for the street prostitute job in Rathpike before she becomes an indoor whore. There was another instance that I can't remember. Probably the map was changed and the coordinates of the scene transition weren't updated. In all cases that I found, I used the cheat menu to teleport to that island before navigating back to wherever I needed to complete the quest. I didn't see any ill consequences from using that cheat.