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VN Ren'Py Cléo Torres: The Dance of Life [v1.1.3-snapshot.3] [Static Fast Art]

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gtpman

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I love the replay-ability value and the art. But I think that the amount of roads that the story splits to is extreme and will make the development exponential harder with each release. I am not an expert by no means, but maybe the developer needs to be a little more focused on his/her goals. Fills like each choice each mini game result leads to a wildly different path.
 

wildride69

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Corruption, as other things, can be avoided depending on your choices. It’s always a matter of choices here. That’s why you should try different routes and choices, because the game really changes. Corruption, in this city where Clèo lives, is everywhere and at some point she could even become the one corrupting others, always depending on your choices.
I'm not sure static, maybe we should drop the corruption tag altogether, add a Disney Princess tag, sell this story to Disney and you can make billions. It can be the next Marvel or Star Wars Universe! Change the title..
Cléo Torres: The Dance of Life -
Cléo Torres: Saved by the F95Zone White Knight society
:ROFLMAO:
You could be the next George Lucas, I'm pulling for you my friend! Trying out the update today, I've been a little busy, going to duck out of the thread for 1/2 a day to avoid spoilers.

Take care Static thanks for the update and good luck with the new non corruption Disney Path.;):LOL:
 

R1k0

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Too many branches in the story, the game is about a 20 year old virgin and all these branches don't fit with her character, and if you avoid those rushed sex scenes you just skip the whole game because very little is added to the story in the last update. I rejected a biker, avoided having sex in a bar and in the end all I saw new in this update was a scene with roommate and that was it. I can't imagine further developing this game with all these different paths, how the developer will handle it, the game will just fall apart into unconnected stories with no coherent plot.
 
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wildride69

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and all these branches don't fit with her character
How would you know what fits her character? This is a new VN on it's second update, the best we can do is assume some things in our own version of Cleo playing in our head.

The only one who truly knows what fits Cleo's character is the developer as it's the devs story to tell. It's not like we have years of knowledge and background on Cleo to even begin making a good assumption of her character, her morals or even her background.

To make suggestions is one thing but to get upset because the character does not live up to what you have built up in your head is kind of silly imo.

I played it through both ways and it was a great update, with most "choose your own adventure" stories eventually the two paths must meet so that the story can stay coherent.

Hell it may not go the way I want and I hope it doesn't I like to be surprised and to see a writers true creativity. The story can have a similar theme to other stories but the journey as long as it's well written and interesting makes a great VN.
 
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Johan_0000

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Are you being purposefully dense?

It's a multiple route game, you do realise not every route is going to be corruption and blackmail, right?

This shouldn't need explaining.
I mean from the overview I got the feeling that depending on the choices we make we could avoid that. But I didn't play the game b4 I know if we can actually avoid it. I'm here for the story and lesbian paths. Can I just go with that or are we forced to get with some guys.




THX
 
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