My thoughts on the VN so far. This is one of my favorite VN's atm but I have some reservations...
Minor gripe is the slider to select a choice, the slider in the bar is moving to fast for you to easily make a choice... it took me a few times to get it right so I could see the other path. The sliders cool but slow it down some, it should make the VN feel more interactive but not annoying where it takes you 5 min to click correctly imo.
I hate hate hate slow burn games with a burning passion BUT... the Marco scene was cool, it felt a bit unearned and dare I say it a bit to soon. It feels like something that should have happened to her in the 3rd or 4th update imo.
The Dylan scene was a bit better but still feels like it should be in a 3rd or 4th update.
So my main playthrough for Cleo at the moment shockingly is for her to remain a virgin.
The best scene for me at the moment was the bar scene with the 2 guys, the anticipation ramped up measurably, Cleo was overheating an horny as hell. She felt like she was just about to give in of her own free will. It was hot. Marco taking her on the bed while she was passed out drink/drugged lacked the heat I was hoping for.
Dylan's path was ok but it also lacked the anticipation and heat in a scene I personally would have liked to see. I guess drunk/drugged passed out chicks just don't do it for me. I would rather she be so overheated with lust she just lets it happen on her own.
None of these scenes upset me and I do want to see where they go, I would love too see the bar owners plan for her or what Vanessa has planned for her.
Hats off to you
staticfastart, this is a good update and I'm looking forward to what you have in store. Hopefully my comments are helpful and not annoying.
Wildride