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I enjoyed the story, pacing and quality.
confused about the main protag/world.
is face makeup his superpower, the inability to lie or are they just his preferences? I feel like the prologue should have explained the world in more detail regarding this.
confused about the main protag/world.
is face makeup his superpower, the inability to lie or are they just his preferences? I feel like the prologue should have explained the world in more detail regarding this.
MidnightKing
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Yeah I wouldn't mind a little more detail on some things. I'm assuming it's because of the jester/clown thing the MC has going on, but with how much they talk about Kings/Queens/Princes/Etc. I can't quite tell if it's an actual role system in the world or just metaphors to fit the theme
StrawberryCheese83
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Well...lets see what we have here! After Astreon..i have really,really high expectations. 
On it...
On it...
A kinetic vn with a synopsis ending on a question as if there are options.
Y'all gotta stop doing that
Y'all gotta stop doing that
Padorublad3
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Well,I'm not really sad about it being kinetic,because let's be honest,we always choose harem paths
,and as of actual choices that affect the game,tbh,I can remember just a few games that have itExactly im all for kinetics instead of poor choices or worse the illusion of those choicesWell,I'm not really sad about it being kinetic,because let's be honest,we always choose harem paths
Iamthegoldengod
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Omg what is this piece doing in a place like this!! Anyone else that enjoyed this piece, can you dm me some similar recs??
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KhunAguero
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KhunAguero
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Finally got to it. Honestly, loved it. Favorite girl so far is Beatrice, my mama always said to never stick my dick in crazy, but Beatrice is worth it, even if i end up with my dick cut off
The truth is, it's great that you already have another game planned, but you're not overloading yourself?
DyonisXX
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The dialogue feels like a fever dream or something, it's like they're saying words but the way they connect is so random; like you understand the gist of what they're saying but not what they're actually talking about
I also hate stories where the characters know what's going on but you as the reader don't so you're sitting there unable to actually get invested in anything that's happening because you have no frame of reference
I also hate stories where the characters know what's going on but you as the reader don't so you're sitting there unable to actually get invested in anything that's happening because you have no frame of reference
GreyKnightIOM
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Looks real promising. Interesting world, beautiful girls and a problematic clown that wants to be better and do right by the only friends that supported him. I mean, this is the making of a good character, I even dare say that this kind of motivation is relatable to most people.
The class and skill/power stuff is a little confusing to me, but I'm guessing that it's something that will be explained in deep later on.
Also, looking at the "I don't care about reviews" in the beginning and "go to discord and tell me why it's bad" in the end, looks like the developer has had some unpleasant experiences. But, as a creator you can't take these things to heart. I don't know how was the reception with your other game, but most comments on this thread are praising your work.
Anyway, great work so far, dev, wish you the best.
The class and skill/power stuff is a little confusing to me, but I'm guessing that it's something that will be explained in deep later on.
Also, looking at the "I don't care about reviews" in the beginning and "go to discord and tell me why it's bad" in the end, looks like the developer has had some unpleasant experiences. But, as a creator you can't take these things to heart. I don't know how was the reception with your other game, but most comments on this thread are praising your work.
Anyway, great work so far, dev, wish you the best.
SafeForSure
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Yeah agree developer doesn't seem to learn from mistakes he made with his other game. He is experimenting to much and should focus on making a good understandable story. Right now he's turning both his games into the ground.