Ren'Py Club Detention [v0.084 Hotfix 4] [Yorma86]

[Gamesstar]

Umm, there's some femdom content so far, but not terribly much. It's going to be a mixed bag of femdom and male dom in the future as well.

Nice

 

[AL.d]

Can a whorehouse be a harem?

What does people think?

Debate…

Don't know about a whorehouse being a harem, but historically harem owners could (and did) "gift" a sex slave for a certain amount of time to a guest. They weren't considered prostitutes though, since that would be illegal. Just...sex slaves.

In the context of our silly porn games, you can have 10 characters in a game. Of those 10, MC might choose to have a harem of 7 exclusive to him and then pimp out the remaining 3. So this game has both harem and whores....

 

[Behindflayer]

Eh, just drop the "harem" aspect and make this babyfaced guy one of the "girls" in the brothel, he already got to taste cum so just make him go full trap.

 

[Gosamr]

Pimping + Female Domination + Schoolgirls? Seems like an odd combination
I'll try it!

Well, as gregers quite rightly said "if the game is to include elements of a business management sim, those often go well"

 

[Harem Trooper]

Oh boy, if even BaasB comes into the NTR debate this early on I really have my doubts now.
I mean Dev. mentioned its "totaly optional" but then "its not really NTR" (which I heard thousands of times). So what it is now ?
I agree that Harem and NTR dont mix well, never did and never will tho.

I played it and the models are good. So are the Renders. MC dosent look like a Teacher at all but it wont bother me much. (Perhaps he is a fresh new Teacher ?)
Story is decent one and has some nice elements like the first "character" creation.
- Reform the Deliquens (Gyaru only ) + Romantic Relationship with students (plural )

Spoiler: Holy Damn, Yandere Ex-Student is best Student

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Nice Sandbox game as it is. Nothing what I can hate about this specific part but I didnt progressed where it was mentioned or introduced that you have to create something like a Brothel ? Did I miss something ?

I hope its not something like Secret Care Cafe punisher2099 mentioned because this is a cuckhold cafe in its best. (Dont know the movie Breakfast club so I dont understand the reference.)
The game dont take itself serious here with these much puns, so even if the NTR will come, its probably just netorase without any bad feelings attached. I hope that at least, somehow, you can stop "your" girls from fucking others but I dont see it happening... you know, how the game is going.

AL.d mentioned that we have like 10 girls and can only pick 7 ? What ? "Harem" definitions these days get weirder and weirder but it seems stopping them from whoring them out is not possible.

Holly already fucked Roy and Catherine if you didnt choose to follow them so it wont be a Harem so who are we even kiding here. I doubt they will come back which is a shame since both of them, Holly particular is a hot piece of ass.
IMO, just drop the "Harem" setting here and the tag since this game wont go this way what so ever but what do I know, if people want to experiemnt they are free to do so.

Just for curiosity sake, what is for people the last "red line" where you would allow your girls to lewd act with their customers ?
Hand holding ? Kissing ? Ear liking ? Handjob with protection + gloves ? Sex with condom ? Sitting on the lap ?
Asking because I think you still can have a Brothel type of game without going deep the rabbit hole, depeing of Players choice of course.

 

[Yorma86]

Oh boy, if even BaasB comes into the NTR debate this early on I really have my doubts now.
I mean Dev. mentioned its "totaly optional" but then "its not really NTR" (which I heard thousands of times). So what it is now ?
I agree that Harem and NTR dont mix well, never did and never will tho.

I played it and the models are good. So are the Renders. MC dosent look like a Teacher at all but it wont bother me much. (Perhaps he is a fresh new Teacher ?)
Story is decent one and has some nice elements like the first "character" creation.
- Reform the Deliquens (Gyaru only ) + Romantic Relationship with students (plural )

Spoiler: Holy Damn, Yandere Ex-Student is best Student

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Nice Sandbox game as it is. Nothing what I can hate about this specific part but I didnt progressed where it was mentioned or introduced that you have to create something like a Brothel ? Did I miss something ?

I hope its not something like Secret Care Cafe punisher2099 mentioned because this is a cuckhold cafe in its best. (Dont know the movie Breakfast club so I dont understand the reference.)
The game dont take itself serious here with these much puns, so even if the NTR will come, its probably just netorase without any bad feelings attached. I hope that at least, somehow, you can stop "your" girls from fucking others but I dont see it happening... you know, how the game is going.

AL.d mentioned that we have like 10 girls and can only pick 7 ? What ? "Harem" definitions these days get weirder and weirder but it seems whoring them out is not possible.

Holly already fucked Roy and Catherine if you didnt choose to follow them so it wont be a Harem so who are we even kiding here. I doubt they will come back which is a shame since both of them, Holly particular is a hot piece of ass.
IMO, just drop the "Harem" setting here and the tag since this game wont go this way what so ever but what do I know, if people want to experiemnt they are free to do so.

Just for curiosity sake, what is for people the last "red line" where you would allow your girls to lewd act with their customers ?
Hand holding ? Kissing ? Ear liking ? Handjob with protection + gloves ? Sex with condom ? Sitting on the lap ?
Asking because I think you still can have a Brothel type of game without going deep the rabbit hole, depeing of Players choice of course.

Wow, thanks for the feedback!
But yeah, you probably missed the part where the brothel is formed. Visit Amanda's office during the week during dusk or night to trigger the storyline event for it.

 

[Yorma86]

Harem and NTR don't mix.

(To avoid a NTR meltdown)
You better post something about, what your plans are for this game, future tags...kinks

Done, I added a future content disclaimer where pimping out your all or any of your students is totally optional.

 

[adawdawdwa]

Are there any animations in this game?

 

[TrueBloodAmurca]

Really promising start and love the premise. If you're really worried about age appearance, I think MC needs to age up a bit, maybe grow a beard. Olivia looked fine and it's more plausible to be a slight girl with a small frame at 18 than to be the absolutely jacked girl, imo.

wish we didn't hit so many "this hasn't been created yet" parts, but the renders are so good that I'm not hugely concerned for the future

 

[rogosh]

What is the money code for this for Unren?

 

[gregers]

If you're really worried about age appearance, I think MC needs to age up a bit, maybe grow a beard.

His face is one thing (a chin, some lines, maybe a beard would all help), but crucially his build is that of a prepubescent child: Short, slim, narrow-shouldered.

(Of course I'm judging solely from the screenshots in the OP, so maybe they're just unfortunate angles.)

 

[Nelson4ever]

Done, I added a future content disclaimer where pimping out your all or any of your students is totally optional.

Well you say it is optional and in the planned content you see something like this
" You'll be able to pimp out the girls of your choosing. Or none of them if you want to keep them all to yourself, but you'll miss on a lot of lewd content "
If you are going to miss a lot of content if we don't pimp out girls , then guess this game is just not for me as it seems pimping girls is the main theme .
But nevertheless good luck to you , Kudos to you dev for letting us know in the beginning rather than unwanted surprise in the middle of the game .

 

[Harem Trooper]

Done, I added a future content disclaimer where pimping out your all or any of your students is totally optional.

Spoiler: This me right now

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And there goes my hope. So its basicly Secret Care Cafe 2.0.
I suggest to remove the Harem tag if you want to safe yourself from a further shitshow. Dosent mean if you want to mix things you have to stop, but when its tagged like this and that will be your product, people will start another NTR flame war.

 

[Simulacrum29]

once again a pseudo-harem game -> ignored

 

[Jdubya]

Honestly is it really NTR if the women are just doing it for the money? Like they aren't your romantic interests. I thought netorare was more losing your love interest to another man, not pimping a slut out for some money. Its not like they develop any romantic connection to other people either - you're their pimp, and the focal point of their romantic attention.

What I've observed on this site is that any female npc interacting at all with another npc (male or otherwise) is the NTR boogieman and will be brigaded as such. Whether or not that female npc is romanceable (apparently they all should be), blood related, married to someone else, gay, you name it, it's all NTR and we're all "beta cucks" for not minding the fact that sometimes story and immersion require that female npcs not be one dimensional virgins frozen in statis until they can join our harem.

Regardless, I haven't tried the game yet, but the renders look good and I do enjoy a good corruption/brothel management game. Looking forward to seeing where this one goes

 

[Chimba]

ll balance the stuff to the best of my ability. The end result may very depending on how good analytics/feedback I'm getting.

You'll be able to pimp out the girls of your choosing. Or none of them if you want to keep them all to yourself, but you'll miss on a lot of lewd content.

Spoiler

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You say that you are going to try to make balanced content depending on the feedback (I guess that is depending on polls on patreon, we already know how this ends), but right away you say that if the player does not want to prostitute the girls, he loses a lot of LEWD content, then the content will not be balanced,it will be more prostitution than content with the mc....

 

[gregers]

The amount of people surprised that a game where the core premise is managing a brothel will involve prostitution.

 

[Yorma86]

Are there any animations in this game?

No, at least at the moment. Making animations in DAZ is super painful, at least for me personally. I'd love to master them one day though.

 

[Harem Trooper]

Not specific about this game but in general:

Honestly is it really NTR if the women are just doing it for the money? Like they aren't your romantic interests.

-Yes. If she fucks even offscreen someone else for what ever the reason is, its NTR.
-If they are represented like LIs, they are LI no mater the circumstances.
-If they just some background pieces which just works as a game mechanic, then its a different topic.

I thought netorare was more losing your love interest to another man, not pimping a slut out for some money.

-Yes NTR is losing your love interest(s) by someone else. Selling them for money where you see their Sex scenes is more involved in the Sharing/Netorase fetish, which it seems the game is heading to.

Its not like they develop any romantic connection to other people either - you're their pimp, and the focal point of their romantic attention.

-Perhaps the MC but not the Reader/Player. Hence the tag.
A MC can still feel good and have no bad feelings attached when even he tortures LIs, that dosent mean people who are reading/watching/playing it wont, hence they tags.

 

[loikl]

Once more content will be added, there will be an option for each character to set them for private use or allow them to engage in lewd actions with the club guests. Basically, reserve the girls you really like for yourself and pimp out the rest.

Interesting, first good luck with your game, it looks great, second, for what you mention this is more of a trainer, similar to Something Unlimited or Public sex life, that is, the MC has total control of the girls, but he can prostitute them to make a profit, so you don't lose them (IT'S NOT NTR), and you just end up in prostitution with npc randoms, right?

If this is so, I don't think there's much of a problem, for most, as long as you avoid the "romance" part a bit (nobody sane wants to see a love interest prostituted), while on a corrupt path it's perfectly fine.