hablat
Newbie
- Jul 24, 2017
- 75
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When you go after Nora is the most infuriating dialogue. I know he's meant to be infuriating but it's so hammy. Who the fuck calls someone "champ"?he behavs like a complete ass
"I know Nora very well" you've existed in this universe for less than an update, no you don't. His reasoning is pretty ass, too, honestly. It sounds good if you turn your brain off but it holds up to absolutely no scrutiny. The MC could have followed up better:
"I've talking to her this whole time about the situation and I think I've got a good handle on when to listen and what advice to offer. Beyond that, I'm invested in her being okay. We straight up don't know you. Please take your drawn-on beard somewhere else."
You can ask to be her boyfriend in this update. It's optional.Wait When did the MC become Chloe's Boyfriend? Did i miss something -.-