i Play the game i like it.It really a netoi game but with a nts route if you want to.I actually like how fast it get to the action sometime.
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It really a cuckqueen but the dev just made a nts route so swinging probably going to be add to that route.
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Some thoughts:
Great with a new game ! Hope you continue with it !
On the plus side:
- Interesting/different story, placed in a fantasy setting.
- Diverse characters.
- Sexy times.
- Good looking main characters.
On the minus side:
- Spelling. I found 15+ spelling errors, and two hardcoded names (will) within first 20 minutes of playing.
- Consistent style of images. I know it is tricky to have consistent faces and style using AI, but a little more effort could have been spent. But for starting out it's good enough and it is a craft you can improve.
- MC behavior. He goes from innocent farm hand to horny sexfiend very fast, and without us as players seeing the transformation in his thoughts and values. Could have been visualized better.
Great with a new game ! Hope you continue with it !
On the plus side:
- Interesting/different story, placed in a fantasy setting.
- Diverse characters.
- Sexy times.
- Good looking main characters.
On the minus side:
- Spelling. I found 15+ spelling errors, and two hardcoded names (will) within first 20 minutes of playing.
- Consistent style of images. I know it is tricky to have consistent faces and style using AI, but a little more effort could have been spent. But for starting out it's good enough and it is a craft you can improve.
- MC behavior. He goes from innocent farm hand to horny sexfiend very fast, and without us as players seeing the transformation in his thoughts and values. Could have been visualized better.
I thought nts was willing ntr instead of swinging. At least the nts i saw in hentai never really had fullblown and equal swapping but was just the dude happy to be ntrd
Works fine, and seems to be the first renpy game that I can rotate.
There's quite a lot of story here already, and good ai art- thanks dev!
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Great update, it's gaining momentum. Audrey is a hot treat, peeling back her innocence is fun to watch. Really looking forward to more content 
Wow, that was fast. Second update and saves are already broken, you have to start new game and 90% of texts read are as if they weren't read (so I can either use skip unread text and fastforward through it, or replay the game from the start to not miss anything changed). Can anyone confirm, that content of the first version is unchanged (except grammar fixes and such)?
You can safely skip the 0.1 content. It's just grammar and some cg fixes.
will the girls that have partners be shown or talked about in sexual scenarios with their partners? For me i am fine with the aspect of it beeing common sense that they did things but if there visuals/dialog about it likely woudnt be for me.
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I agree that the transition from "shy farm people" to "dominating sex fiends" is a bit too quick, but it doesn't bother me too much, to be honest. Bring on the depravity!
Also, Audrey (and her spontaneous behaviour) was hot as fuck. I hope content with the roommate's wife and the lord's son's fiance (the redhead who assaults MC) are also shortly in order. Especially the dickhead lord's son's fiance. Revenge is always the best part of these kinds of stories. Also, I can't wait for Cindy to get actual scenes with other guys (not just teasing).
Also, Audrey (and her spontaneous behaviour) was hot as fuck. I hope content with the roommate's wife and the lord's son's fiance (the redhead who assaults MC) are also shortly in order. Especially the dickhead lord's son's fiance. Revenge is always the best part of these kinds of stories. Also, I can't wait for Cindy to get actual scenes with other guys (not just teasing).
I removed the remaining Will's and combed through for more spelling/grammar errors. Was kind of an issue when your MC's name is the same as a commonly used word, made it tricky to just search and replace.
I'm going to look into getting a grammar checker plugin or something so I don't miss glaring errors in the script.
About consistency. AI it's very finicky and iterative, I'm constantly figuring out how to improve it. I could likely go back through and tinker with every image to bring them all into the same style. Which I have done already for some simpler character cg's. I figured it wasn't going to be worth the effort when I can instead focus on future content and take what I've learned into that.
Big part of why some of the scenes look different is simply because it's stuff I made months ago, vs stuff I've done recently. Some image were literally made in sd 1.5 about 6 months ago.
Although if there is particularly off looking CG, I'd like to know which. I need outside perspective for that kind of stuff. On a particularly productive day I've done over a thousand individual image generations which can really skew your perspective.
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User_68P
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If there is a tool that can correct the spelling mistakes it's probably worth getting, it just makes it better
Regarding images, I fully agree with you on the choice to focus on future content. That surely adds more interested people.
I had to play it through again to just to be more specific, and it was not that much that I reacted upon in a second viewing.
The taylor's daughter, the image on the frontpage here on f95 is the one where I felt it turned too much anime.
So in retrospect, not a very big minus
I like that you have some choices. Hopefully you have the inspiration to have a few paths without getting bogged down.
Maybe get a discord running - there are normally a lot of people that like to help out with bugs and errors - while trying to corrupt you into their specific interpretation of NTR/NTS/Sharing/hotwife
Regarding images, I fully agree with you on the choice to focus on future content. That surely adds more interested people.
I had to play it through again to just to be more specific, and it was not that much that I reacted upon in a second viewing.
The taylor's daughter, the image on the frontpage here on f95 is the one where I felt it turned too much anime.
So in retrospect, not a very big minus
I like that you have some choices. Hopefully you have the inspiration to have a few paths without getting bogged down.
Maybe get a discord running - there are normally a lot of people that like to help out with bugs and errors - while trying to corrupt you into their specific interpretation of NTR/NTS/Sharing/hotwife
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oidex
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I've been playing around a little recently myself, so I'm curious what's your pipeline now.
Comfy with flux/pony?
a1111 with ponyxl using mfcgdollmix checkpoint. I made a Gwen, Will and Cindy lora ages ago based on a 1.5 model and converted it to sdxl to work with ponyxl. I also use midjourney to generate complicated things that I don't necesarrily need to be consistant with. For instance the floating school, pony would just not be able to do that, or any stable diffusion model that isn't train specifically on floating islands with cities on them.
They're not exactly good lora's, I need to redo them. But every character is a combinations of different weights from those loras. The whole thing is finicky as I've had to learn which loras at better at doing what. For instance my Gwen Lora is really good at generating portraits, so I turn her weight up for portraits.
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oidex
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Thanks for the insight.
Shit's been moving crazy fast recently. New models, tools, techniques coming out seemingly every month and it's only accelerating. The future is looking bright. (Or grim, if you are a traditional artist
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Looks promising, I like this kind of art style, good job bro.
but the MC behavior does a little bit off, could have been done better.
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Mostly a great start. The AI art is pretty good (for AI art at least) and consistant and I like where the story and relationships are going. The one thing I didn't really like was how dumb the main character seems to be sometimes. Someone can be naive, but it seems that for some reason this main characters has no idea about anything in this world, even though most of it seems pretty common knowledge for other people. That just feels wrong.