Thom3s

New Member
Aug 4, 2022
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This game is great. I know its artwork isn't quite as good as MRPL or MNGF but I'm still surprised there are not more posts.
 

Nate Kirk

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Nov 19, 2017
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This game is great. I know its artwork isn't quite as good as MRPL or MNGF but I'm still surprised there are not more posts.
Updates are smaller than those games and they focus less on building tension with the FMC. This game is good but trying to be multiple things at once makes smaller updates that take longer
 

phdusa1

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Aug 18, 2018
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SpyderArachnid

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Jul 31, 2017
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I ended up enjoying this more than I thought I would. The dynamic between Cindy and MC is just awesome. All their scheming is goofy, but enjoyable and fun. Plus, the overall story is rather interesting. I know AI gets frowned on around here a lot, but it wasn't too bad. I like the style you used at least.

So yeah, awesome job. Looking forward to how this one progresses. Thanks, and best of luck with this. ;)
 

slackster

Active Member
Feb 1, 2017
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Lots of spelling/grammar errors this update.

A couple of critiques-The full swap scene should have had more impact/ the after event talk should have been more fleshed out.

Looking forward to how this one develops
 
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