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It's ok brother, thanks for at least trying it out! I will make my notes, but will be honest with you - idk if I'll fix that.
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Yeah, I want to know that too, so thanks for your reply!
I have in plans project with a lot slower corruption and more detailed writing, but you know, writing needs experience, so when I started it, I was scared that I wil make a game both without good writing and without a lot of erotic scenes (which is easier to produce as you see).
So stay tuned and we'll see where it goes
My only concern is whether there's just a bunch of static images, or if the scenes are actually written out with detailed descriptions. If you're using AI art, at LEAST write something good. Most of these AI art ones don't and I increasingly tire of trying.
- Jun 7, 2020
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Nagatoro was smaller, this gyaru looks more like a highly polished version of Kitagawa (My Dres-Up Darling) - and not bad at all, imo.
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Good luck to your game leetw. I tryed your game because the nts tag but unfortunately I was disappointed. For the moment it is cheating and not nts at least for me. I try your game the next 1-2 updates to see if it´s contain nts or not
- Jan 19, 2025
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My boy, congrats! I was wondering when someone will guess second reference character. Yeah, in my multiverse this is Nagatoto's and Kitagawa's daughter.
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I prefer the tan skin but honestly I dig this too so kudos. Also I have been getting annoyed with NTR versions where the MC initiates it cause of some stupid idiotic issue or something. I'm glad your game is different ^_^
Sigh it's idiots like these 2 that cost us rookie developers all the time, people who bitch about AI when for all we know this developer is using it to test the waters.
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I was sure it was a reference to AIKA (JAV idol)
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Thanks for share, good luck
- Jan 19, 2025
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Nah, I understand these guys. As consumer I am the supporter of only masterpieces and polished diamonds all around in game industry.
But we live in society... Nowadays as I watched trends - your game and you as a developer have a lot more chances to fail if you try to polish this final masterpiece for a year or two.
And also a thing that I'm not a pro game dev - how am I supposed to give them here and now Akabur level of writing and some Demon Slayer animations? Only patience, my bros and sisters, this is my first step
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God this is what I call masterpieceI was sure it was a reference to AIKA (JAV idol)
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Ahh okay I'll wait for now then because I really like NTS and choices.
Thanks for the answers dude and good luck with the game.
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After playing the first update here's my review:
I'm a little dissapointed. Let's be clear, i'm not saying the game is bad, on the contrary. Images are top notch (AI or not) with no major errors which is not granted with AI generated cg. For a first release of your first game, it's very good, and i would recommend it to people who don't care about story or character build up.
But, given the title i was thinking it would a little like "NTR'd by clumsiness" with the female character being the one instigating the sexual encounter by her lack of awareness instead of the male mc. For example, she's being groped by her classmate when she bend over to search for her button, him telling her that her button is stuck on her ass, that kind of situation. Instead we have a girl who is not naive enough to trust her boyfriend about not being able to spend time with her but naive enough to be filmed by classmates while she expose her ass to them. It appear more like retaliation against her boyfriend than naivety.
On the same page, where's the corruption? After under 2 min of dialogue she's already asking a boy, who is not her boyfriend, if he like seeing her exposed ass, after 5 she's letting him fuck her and after 6 she's already telling her boyfriend through a video that she can't leave without their classmate's cock. Seems to me like she's already plenty corrupted. Maybe it was the direction you wanted to go for your story but if it's the case maybe you should try to modify your game title and your game synopsis because they seems deceiving considering the content.
If you think i'm too much feel free to ignore my comment, especially knowing that i'm not a ntr fan so i may not be the best advisor for this type of game, but know that if you think that my comments are pertinent i would be really eager to see what you will make of your game.
Thanks for the game and good luck!
ps: I totally like the female mc look and if everything should have 0 resemblance with something that has already been created we would create nothing. Just saying...
I'm a little dissapointed. Let's be clear, i'm not saying the game is bad, on the contrary. Images are top notch (AI or not) with no major errors which is not granted with AI generated cg. For a first release of your first game, it's very good, and i would recommend it to people who don't care about story or character build up.
But, given the title i was thinking it would a little like "NTR'd by clumsiness" with the female character being the one instigating the sexual encounter by her lack of awareness instead of the male mc. For example, she's being groped by her classmate when she bend over to search for her button, him telling her that her button is stuck on her ass, that kind of situation. Instead we have a girl who is not naive enough to trust her boyfriend about not being able to spend time with her but naive enough to be filmed by classmates while she expose her ass to them. It appear more like retaliation against her boyfriend than naivety.
On the same page, where's the corruption? After under 2 min of dialogue she's already asking a boy, who is not her boyfriend, if he like seeing her exposed ass, after 5 she's letting him fuck her and after 6 she's already telling her boyfriend through a video that she can't leave without their classmate's cock. Seems to me like she's already plenty corrupted
. Maybe it was the direction you wanted to go for your story but if it's the case maybe you should try to modify your game title and your game synopsis because they seems deceiving considering the content.If you think i'm too much feel free to ignore my comment, especially knowing that i'm not a ntr fan so i may not be the best advisor for this type of game, but know that if you think that my comments are pertinent i would be really eager to see what you will make of your game.
Thanks for the game and good luck!
ps: I totally like
the female mc look and if everything should have 0 resemblance with something that has already been created we would create nothing. Just saying...You beat me to it. That basically what i was trying to say.
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