VN Ren'Py College Stories. My Girlfriend is too naive!!! [0.1] [LeetW]

[LeetW]

After playing the first update here's my review:

Yeah, man, I'm very thankfull to you for this full review! You've correctly pointed out things that I misdirrected under development under rush conditions. I've tried to release until AI CG games are hated and forgotten and I'll just drop another copy no one asked about.
I'll definetly make notes from your review and will see what can be done out of this (bcs you know if I'll fully rename game and rewrite whole plot - then this is new game, not refactoring). But I agree with you, your suggestions of girl corruption looks promising

 

[anthony9915]

Is this actually animated? or just all pictures?

 

[LeetW]

Is this actually animated? or just all pictures?

Sadly only pictures

 

[k40235]

blonde nagatoro looks not bad ngl

 

[AdriH]

Netorare and Gyaru 2 of my favourite things have finally come together, if you put impregnation this will be my trifecta.

 

[Strong1]

I like AI art and the girl is hot, but the story is garbage. would be much better if the player had some choices and could possibly prevent the girlfriend from cheating. At least if you are going to make forced NTR give a little build up.

 

[Gudil]

I don't really care about AI, but... Honestly, not even 10 minutes of gameplay, even for a 0.1, is a terrible sign. And on the dialogues and plot, it looks like it was written by a 13yo virgin. There is no corruption, from naive to slut in 30 seconds.

 

[Cajun Fox]

Thanks for the share

 

[MinerfaVitu]

Nice game bro, i just love the visual and characters

 

[walkerjonny]

Sadly only pictures

Then remove the "animated" tag. Only add it once you implemented animations. Otherwise people might interpret your attempts to be deceiving. And that is not a good start.

 

[gestved]

What's this "stolen character" bullshit, here are many games with famous characters, several with Hermione alone, what's the problem?

also many games "steal" characters from other adult games and no one cares. Can't even use the Robin Hood argument

 

[Lophora]

So... Nagatoro's skin color changed.

and boobies

 

[Lophora]

Nagatoro was smaller, this gyaru looks more like a highly polished version of Kitagawa (My Dres-Up Darling) - and not bad at all, imo.

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Ai fusion of the two character?

 

[pepplez]

Ai fusion of the two character?

Just a sunburn, she'll survive
Joking aside, this is the first time i actually like ai-cg.. what's wrong with me?

 

[DumpTruckLover]

thx 4 share good luck with your project

 

[Satyrsfaction]

Yeah, maybe you are right. It took me some time to decide who is protagonist.

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That's why the title is -in my opinion- misleading. The title actually speaks from the first-person perspective; but if the woman is now the protagonist, then the title is no longer correct, because Anon is not speaking here.

 

[Vlbc]

It's kind of a mix of both.

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But does he like it?

 

[herbstpoet]

I see, criticism isn't allowed. So you're friends with one of the mods, huh? Wonder when the next mod with a god complex will delete this.