VN Ren'Py College Stories. My Girlfriend is too naive!!! [0.18] [LeetW]

[LeetW]

Idk if I can advertise in comments of my own game (mods delete this if I'm wrong), but fellas, I haven't slept all night and released v0.15 on my dFans page. On F95 I'll release it next week

 

[deviousstorm]

Idk if I can advertise in comments of my own game (mods delete this if I'm wrong), but fellas, I haven't slept all night and released v0.15 on my dFans page. On F95 I'll release it next week

yeah... its your page man even make a signature.

 

[iainmore]

I will put it on my watched list in hope of lot more content in near future.

 

[LeetW]

Hey! I haven't slept for another night and posted new update. Check it out! I also posted it on Itch io, so you can now play in browser. GL HF bros and sisters

 

[BigTTiger]

I like ntr and I love mostly the build ups in those stories, where i got to say this game lacks it, I mean he tells his gf he got already plans with his uncle and right away she goes fuck his classmates like a dumb blond, even the guy got to watch it all in the evening at his computer, if that was me, the next day she could go to hell and I would dump her and show the vid the principal of school to get her kicked out. No overall i must say, the renders were well done, but you really need to work on a story, build ups and such, ease her into the cheating on her boyfriend and all. She plainly gave her virginity to some stranger, never met a girl that dumb, in worst case i known girls giving their virginity was to a rich guy who paid her alot of money for it. Will see in the future if you better up your game or just keep to straight fap game. For now i'll give it a 2 star out of 5. 2 stars alone for the images, other 3 are more for a real story behind it.

See I'm sort of on the same page as you but not quite all the way with these ntr games I don't love them, but I don't hate them either, but I would love to see a ntr game where the betrayed actually gets some kind of payback towards the betrayer whether that be publicly dumping them/and or humiliating them by sleeping with their parent and making them watch or sleeping with their other friends or even going to the extremes of revenge ie. torture or just killing them outright.

 

[FPcrab]

AICG is just a quality mark. Previously, in the old days it was the tag "real porn" and now this. This means that the game will not have a game. There will be no plot, there will be idiotic mini-games, a choice without a choice. There will be an incoherent set of pictures and no talent.

 

[Lizzardcheese]

See I'm sort of on the same page as you but not quite all the way with these ntr games I don't love them, but I don't hate them either, but I would love to see a ntr game where the betrayed actually gets some kind of payback towards the betrayer whether that be publicly dumping them/and or humiliating them by sleeping with their parent and making them watch or sleeping with their other friends or even going to the extremes of revenge ie. torture or just killing them outright.

100% agree. Cheating can be used as an amazing plot point. MC can learn he likes being cucked, or he loves the girl and cant bring himself to leave. He can leave the girl and get revenge or fall for someone else and the girl gets jealous. She can then try and get him back and it can corrupt him or just create a lot of drama. No emotional depth ruins all of that.

Also, just remove the virgin line. It's the most unbelievable thing in the game.

 

[Adhdclassic]

The game updates keep getting shorter and shorter.

 

[Kocheng Ero]

Is the girl naive or stupid?

I haven't played it yet but from the screenshots it looks like she's a slut rather than naive. I mean just look at her face, she's happy....

I've always avoided the AI CG genre because of the inconsistent background details. but this one the title intrigues me.

 

[Dantethedarkone]

Normally
I avoid any "AI CG" tags, BUT the whole Nagatoro/Marin fusion looking girl got me interested. Enjoyed the game and looking forward to the next update. What AI are you using that makes uniform characters across multiple images? Every image generator I try either wont make the same character twice, or give images with 8 fingers -_-

 

[Birdnman993]

What's this "stolen character" bullshit, here are many games with famous characters, several with Hermione alone, what's the problem?

Either you use the original character or you make a different one with some differences but that shows where you got your inspiration from, but not this brazenness that only changes the hair and eye color.

 

[notypapi]

Is there choices or is it a linear narrative?

 

[LeetW]

Is there choices or is it a linear narrative?

There are very few of them at the moment, but I plan to develop in this direction and move away from the kinetic novel

 

[LeetW]

either wont make the same character twice, or give images with 8 fingers

I can feel your pain bro. I'm using ComfyUI with PonyXL or some merges (AuthismXL, PerfectPonyXl). Lora's for little things like eyes and hands. For character consistency - its situational, but this one is working with names of heroines references like [nagatoro hayase|kitagawa marin] - mostly for face and hair (brackets and a stick are important - it switches prompt each step as I remember). And for clothes - I write them separately, like blue skirt, white shirt. But you see - these heroines in anime are wearing this most of the time - so it's not too hard to dress them like that.

 

[LeetW]

The game updates keep getting shorter and shorter.

This is the first update

 

[jaimeastorga2000]

As mentioned, the author kinda built in a bit of a joke path where you are confronted with actual algebra, otherwise you just gotta answer a few 2nd grade math questions to unlock the pictures and rest of the game.

That isn't algebra; it's differential equations, an undergraduate math course that follows after calc 2. Which instantly makes this my new favorite game; how many other titles integrate diffy q's into their gameplay? I have never been more hooked by a visual novel in my life.

The questions are easy to solve if you know calculus; just follow the example the book gives.

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[kaifin]

i like alice designer, i like the option ntr or sharing route, but i dont like AI thing, its pure shit. we dont know if its AI or real. work on Alice perversion slowly, like my new girlfriend. it has potential. good luck!

 

[Adhdclassic]

This is the first update

Meant games not just yours.

 

[LeetW]

The questions are easy to solve if you know calculus; just follow the example the book gives.

My God, you guys never cease to amaze me! I certainly assumed that someone would solve it out of persistence, but to also write a complete solution methodology... You're right that it's not one of the unsolvable problems in mathematics, but I didn't imagine that there would be a person who would solve it in my novel! You're definitely on my list of heroes now, jaimeastorga2000

And about typo, yeah, thanks for feedback! I'll fix in next update. Typed this at late night and missed, there supposed to be b.c. instead of "3.0"

 

[LeetW]

Meant games not just yours.

Ah, yes. From my perspective it could be to get people feedback as fast as possible and to fit in promotion system. On f95 there is a 2 week period between possible promotions on the latest updates page, so I'm trying to fit in this time to release new version. And for now I'm surely a novice in this field, so it's hard to keep this pace