VN - Ren'Py - Abandoned - Come Inside [v0.2.1] [ttll]

I am rating this excellent to start but there are some caveats and I have some concern about where this game might end up. Probably spoilers ahead so if you don't want spoilers ,the short version is "great game so far, it is well worth your time.

I quite enjoyed the renders, except for the old man, I think that just gives you great incentive to support the real estate project HAHA. There are a bunch of threads to the story and you can't be sure where they are all heading, but the developer is making a story and there is complexity to it. So we have good renders and a story......that puts this way above a lot of games right away.

My fear for future development is that there are too many females and the story is going to get way too complex because of the numbers of characters involved. I am probably wrong and I love a harem as much as the next person but we already have the following possibilities ..... Mother; Sister; other sister; neighbour Kelly (I adore her already); Kelly's sister; Kelly's Mother; Cougar; Secretary; The Two Lesbian (Jen) Neighbours; The agent?. OK my count so far is 11 hot women and we have only made it to day 2. I see problems trying to hold all this together, but I have every intention of continuing to enjoy the ride and I sincerely hope the developer can make it work. If not though, it would be best to tone it down early, while it is still possible.

Edit..... Hell I forgot the Grandma...... I am sure the MC will be banging her too so that would make 12.

Awesome game so far, the CG is great and the characters are beautiful. The story is alright so far. I like the idea of the drawing mini-game, but i think it should be a bit easier to do it, it took me a few attempts to get the first one and then i gave up on the others. Overall, like i said it is great so far and it looks really promising, i will definitely keep checking the game's progress.

if i had to rate it, i would give it a 10/10

It was a really good first episode.

I really love the game so far the renders are high quality the game feels fresh the GUI and graphical stuff looks good i never saw that before in a renpy game I don't even knew renpy can do that

I really appreciate it that you let us get rid of the NTR stuff and I hope you keep it like that i really don't like to share the girls lesbian stuff is okay but I don't need any other dick in the Game besides the MCS

Okay a little critic I have to give for the option stuff to chose and so other scenes are not possible i don't really like that but it's only my opinion on it but it's okay.

The audio is not annoying it feels relaxing i like that.

I am looking forward to the game keep up the good work and don't overwork it would be sad if we lose a talented developer.

Edit: Warning, the game has pedo shota content, and let's be honest, the game makes no sense without the patch.

The storyline didn't progress the way I expected it to, just got more confusing.

Previous:
Visuals 7/10: Close to perfect, but too bleached and filtered. Feels like GoT's The Long Night but during the day.
Characters aren't unique at all though.

Story 2/10: Got me extremely bored. Bad bad writing.

C- for making me watch that old guy's hairy balls and cock. Those who hate NTR should be aware this gets close.

A++ for the UI, audio (though it made me drowsy), and overall visual presentation. Feels fresh, we need this in our lives.

This could be the first ASMR incest porn game.

Overall: 6/10 I'm a huge fan. Looking forward to the updates. Hope it lives upto the incest tag.

I am definitely impressed with how much work the author of the game has invested in the first version. The beginning of the story is very intriguing. The idea with the album of the protagonist is very original.

Review for the first version of the game

Unlike many others new games this one actually looks like good first version that provides enough information and content to get you around the created world and characters.

Renders are really good, grammar so far i think was alright(although im not native english speaker, so i probably won't even know if everything is perfectly written).

There are different paths, many different fetishes that may please few groups like despised by many NTR that is completely avoidable and dev said it will stay that way.

Will edit later, we'll see where this one will go, so far really good.

Okay this is only my second review of a game on this site , though I have been around for ages but I reserve my critique to stuff I really can endorse and this is one such game, now to the review.


Renders: Extremely well done and attention to detail is on point here.
Story : Rather short in this 0.1 release but what there is , is great.
Grammar: Very good and on point , I saw little to no errors at all.
Gameplay: Very refreshing breaking the old tried and done with new mechanics.

So all in all A great game done by ttll I for one will keep an eye on this.

I gotta say this really caught my attention. Not a lot of content but that was expected from a 0.1. Other than that the graphics are a masterpiece and the storytelling is really compelling (especially the SMS stuff)though the elevator music is a bit sleep inducing. All and all great job