- Apr 4, 2023
- 14
- 5
I really liked the story. Chapters have enough content in them to be referred as such. I don't mind developers releasing small updates, but when you are done in 10-15 minutes, I don't feel like it should be classified as a "chapter". This game doesn't have that problem, so good job on that.
I am not a fan of camera shaking like it's Woody Woodpecker's POV, but it doesn't happen often, so I guess I can live with that. One thing I would like to ask of developer: please, do something about Amy's face. That thing looks more like a sticker or a pin, rather than a mole. It also stands out too much. I'm pretty sure in one scene when you look at Amy from different angles the mole is not even in the same place. I hope you can make it look more natural so it's not the first thing you immediately see when Amy's on screen.
About the subway situation, where you can choose two out of three options: is this really necessary? As far as I have seen it doesn't affect anything. Just a couple of lines change, but aside from that it doesn't seem to matter what you choose, so I feel like there's no reason to limit players to only two choices.
Lastly, if you are paying your current proofreader, I strongly suggest finding a replacement.
Thank you for the game! I look forward to playing it again in the future.
I am not a fan of camera shaking like it's Woody Woodpecker's POV, but it doesn't happen often, so I guess I can live with that. One thing I would like to ask of developer: please, do something about Amy's face. That thing looks more like a sticker or a pin, rather than a mole. It also stands out too much. I'm pretty sure in one scene when you look at Amy from different angles the mole is not even in the same place. I hope you can make it look more natural so it's not the first thing you immediately see when Amy's on screen.
About the subway situation, where you can choose two out of three options: is this really necessary? As far as I have seen it doesn't affect anything. Just a couple of lines change, but aside from that it doesn't seem to matter what you choose, so I feel like there's no reason to limit players to only two choices.
Lastly, if you are paying your current proofreader, I strongly suggest finding a replacement.
Thank you for the game! I look forward to playing it again in the future.
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