The story and world is interesting and engaging, which for me is the most important aspect. Needs an editing pass lots of sloppy errors, the story and overall voice was good enough to keep me going despite that.
Biggest personal bummer is the LIs are all on the waifish side of things, but again story kept me clickin'.
Biggest personal bummer is the LIs are all on the waifish side of things, but again story kept me clickin'.