Review of CH.8
This is another good example of a story so good you forgot to nut, I think it's an understatement that a lot of this comunity likes anime, I know I do, and I can appreciate all the comon tropes CoD(hehe) has, the writing has the kind of charm and cheese I love, but regarding the romance and erotic aspects I feel it falls short more often than not, the LI's personalities make up for that but I believe a revision on the writing and script since theres a good amount of gramatical erros here and there, a more ample vocabulary (not like it needs a thesaurus but theres I find a bit simplistic a good chunk of the charaters dialogues.) and more drawn-out scenes where the characters get more development, in a story where feelings are very important not all the girls get to grow on that, I know advancing the plot is important, but this is already a slowburn so more conversations could be nice. My reason to insist in this is related to the models and renders, they are about what you expect from HS, good and get the job done, I especially like the use of more "average" girl body types since it's pretty normal to use the more bustier side of character design so girls like Emma, Noel and Clara feel more special. Although the sex scenes improve with each chapter, they're the weakest part of this VN but it's funny cause i'm more focused on the story to crank one out. Theres room for more choices to be made b y the player regarding dialoge options, a bit more flavor to the writing i believe!! Last there's the fight scenes, they're cool, that's about it, maybe more dinamic camera angles could help, maybe a few adjustments in the lighting... love the cameos btw!!!