HTML Abandoned Company Wife [v0.1] [Bartezzzz]

[Blockout]

Hm well that's something.

Just don't use gifs.

Yes it's the 0.1 version but it looks like decision making isn't really on the agenda.
The writing is not that good. Things just happen and it's 0 to 100 in a second.
"Hey we are your new neighbours"
"If you want help show me your tits"

I mean it's your game and if that's the game you want to do that's fine.
Personally I think Fem Protag games do a lot through the corruption happening to her.
This has nothing like that.
At most probably in the beginning where the MC can deny to send lewd pics and later about stealing a ring.
But that's really it.

Also the characters might as well be cardboard cut outs.
They have no personality, you don't provide a short introduction to them.
Things just happen to them and the player is along the ride.

Why even have this story introduction to the Evelyn character?
It's a bit weird.

This is probably just me but I wouldn't rely so heavily on pro porn stuff.
It often doesn't fit the situation. Granted this isn't a Fantasy game where the scenes happen in modern day rooms, but it just feels off.
The first sex scene in this bright room in some mansion is an example of that.

So
- smaller file sizes
- actual characters
- writing
- decisions
- corruption over time

And idk I think it just helps if the game starts slowly only to descend into depravity.
The way this game is going Evelyn is in a gangbang by the next version.

 

[Crown98]

Just remove the fact that you have to wait for the end gif to pick a choice.
That's so terrible when you wanto to go back and look at other choices consequences.

 

[Gilraden]

Could i ask for a source of 6th gif (evelynmark2.gif) if anyone knows?

 

[Dragunav]

If i wanted to stay and watch porngifs that i can't skip, then i would head to pornhub and watch a video.

Should probably add blackmail as a tag, since you're forced into cheating on your husband and either choice demands that you return or they'll tell on you.

 

[Lednacek]

the background is very distracting

 

[piercednips]

I didn't make it through to the end of this update. The forced wait to click to the next page is too annoying.

 

[sandyknees34]

there was an attempt.

 

[fahahahasgdfa]

tnx

 

[xtrxx]

Is this already abandoned? The discord link is dead and there is no patreon page. I mean there are a ton of negative comments, but some are actually constructive criticism. Overall i think that this may have potential, but there are some issues. Like it was already said the timer thing is just stupid, at least tone it down, and shit goes from 0 to 100 real quick. Maybe add some "filler" days, where nothing extreme happens (maybe just you accidentally flash someone cause you're clumsy or something like that, mild). The characters are a bit dry but that is also cause by the pacing so i don't think it's a hard fix.

 

[XB1256262033]

加油，不错哟。

 

[mistafu]

First of all, never ever for the love of everything holy and unholy use a white wall... i can't stress this enough. It's just plain eye cancer. (talking bout the white background)
Than the waiting time on transitions is a real pain, many have tried, nearly all failed. Just don't do it!

 

[cmwj614036]

Whether it has been abandoned