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Penitensary

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Solving the gender issue is next on my list.
If i may toss in a suggestion, Maika's name is consistently displayed as Kirimoto in the text, but the voiced dialogue refers to her as Kirishima. I think only in her Last Day ending is she actually called Kirishima in the text, throughout the game itself it's always Kirimoto. This includes the epilogue scenes.
 

wmna1984

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Well, that was a pleasant experience. My biggest regret is that we don't have more scenes with the time skip designs.
Also, gonna go against the grain here and say:
Shiori>>>>>>>>>>>Aoi>=Rin>>>>>Maiki
Admittedly, this is mostly because there are more normal interactions with her, especially in the epilogue. Would've been nice to have more development for the other girls, but I still quite enjoyed it.
 

Penitensary

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Is NTR avoidable? :p
Considering the whole objective is reaching the point where you get into a relationship, i'd say the only possible NTR would be in the epilogue :p

Also, Aoi. She's great, but her CGs are by far the worst of the bunch.
 

Ferghus

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Well, that was a pleasant experience. My biggest regret is that we don't have more scenes with the time skip designs.
Also, gonna go against the grain here and say:
Shiori>>>>>>>>>>>Aoi>=Rin>>>>>Maiki
Admittedly, this is mostly because there are more normal interactions with her, especially in the epilogue. Would've been nice to have more development for the other girls, but I still quite enjoyed it.
Hang the heathen.
 

dazedanon

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If i may toss in a suggestion, Maika's name is consistently displayed as Kirimoto in the text, but the voiced dialogue refers to her as Kirishima. I think only in her Last Day ending is she actually called Kirishima in the text, throughout the game itself it's always Kirimoto. This includes the epilogue scenes.
Names are still a mixed bag but I'm working on it. I've already managed to mostly fix the wrong gender issues so names are what I'll be fixing next.
 

Surgeon

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Not a bad translation, just needs someone to fix the grammar and pronouns but it's otherwise perfectly understandable.
 
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