VN Ren'Py Confessions of a Sassy Girl [v0.3] [Huninn]

[Huninn]

Jessica is great and all, but, I want 0.1 back Had I known there would be an overhaul I would have permanently saved some of those renders before I deleted the game from my hard drive.
Do any kind souls still have it? Can it be put up on the main page please?

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[R1k0]

Thanks for the feedback! The game is all about "corrupting" an "innocent" girl (Ami) . I'm just taking my time to build the story toward that. Plus, there will definitely be more scenes happening outside of the main character's mind!

This is just the beginning of the story and it may not yet be clear how the story will develop further and I have drawn the wrong conclusion. The first version of the game is different from what it is now and I like the updated version better, but the mother was very attractive and it would be a shame not to see her in the game, only she looks very young, maybe make her the MC's sister, and would like to see the black guy in the game too. Jessica corrupting Ami, that sounds yummy.

 

[JenMistress]

Well, disappointed the teacher was really reduced down, and the parrot was completely removed. Hopefully that will return in future updates, because really liked them. However, new girl, not bad, I like her. And Kevin reduced down, OK, that one I can agree with you on. Guy was getting on my nerves. But still enjoyed it, thank you so very much for this, and looking forward for more!!!

 

[Huninn]

This is just the beginning of the story and it may not yet be clear how the story will develop further and I have drawn the wrong conclusion. The first version of the game is different from what it is now and I like the updated version better, but the mother was very attractive and it would be a shame not to see her in the game, only she looks very young, maybe make her the MC's sister, and would like to see the black guy in the game too. Jessica corrupting Ami, that sounds yummy.

Thanks for the feedback! I'm really happy to hear you enjoyed the updated version. Just a heads-up, Ami's mother is making a comeback in v0.3. I aimed to portray her as someone who got pregnant young, without pinning down an exact age. This gives her a more youthful vibe, which makes their relationship feel more like sisters than a traditional mother-daughter dynamic. I like your idea of turning her mother into a "sister" idea, but it wouldn't quite fit the context and plans I have for Ami's mother.

 

[Huninn]

Well, disappointed the teacher was really reduced down, and the parrot was completely removed. Hopefully that will return in future updates, because really liked them. However, new girl, not bad, I like her. And Kevin reduced down, OK, that one I can agree with you on. Guy was getting on my nerves. But still enjoyed it, thank you so very much for this, and looking forward for more!!!

Thanks for your feedback! I had a blast creating those two scenes—they were both spicy and hilarious! It's a bummer to see them go in v0.2, but I felt they were a bit crammed in too early and came off as "forced" in the story. I think it would be better to introduce them later, giving the narrative some room to breathe.

While I'm aiming for a more no-nonsense vibe with the reboot, I might find a way to bring them back if they fit into the overall narrative. It probably won’t be as over-the-top as in v0.1, though! I'm definitely open to suggestions

 

[rafa30]

I like

 

[Knight_of_the_lance]

I did not try 0.1 only 0.2 I must say that the few renders peps posted screenshot of I would have liked to see in the game. I liked the characters, especially the main one. She is so different from the ones I usually play, even rarer in the female lead role. She feel on the edge of unlikable, not falling on either side right now. Seeing all her thoughts in her journal help sympathise with her while if she was a stranger she would feel really difficult to get close to. She remind me of a particular girl in hi school.

I was not tempted to let go of the game despite it's wordiness, for now. I could see myself having difficulties with it if I was more tired or was less interested in the girl. It's a balancing act that feel difficult though since to sympathise with the MC her awkwardness and antisocial attitude we need to know a lot about her but the story still needs to go forward.

As for my taste in Female lead, I personally like to play them as Bi rather than pure lesbians or straight, but I also like to choose with whom the MC has sex. I personally dislike pushy characters that want the sex only for themselves and completely disregard the MC's will or are jerks. I have no problem to use sex to get back at them but I don't like, as a MC to give sex to characters I feel are undeserving. Unless it's to trick them and get something else out of it. So locking sexual growth and exploration ( I hate the term corruption for that with a passion) behind scenes with such characters generally leaves a bad taste in my mouth.

Up to this point though I like the game a lot, I find it has great potential. But at some point along with knowing Amy better the pace of the story will have to leave behind a bit more of the reflection in a journal kind of pace. doesn't need to ditch it altogether but make it a bit more rare. IMHO. You do you it's your story.

 

[Huninn]

I did not try 0.1 only 0.2 I must say that the few renders peps posted screenshot of I would have liked to see in the game. I liked the characters, especially the main one. She is so different from the ones I usually play, even rarer in the female lead role. She feel on the edge of unlikable, not falling on either side right now. Seeing all her thoughts in her journal help sympathise with her while if she was a stranger she would feel really difficult to get close to. She remind me of a particular girl in hi school.

I was not tempted to let go of the game despite it's wordiness, for now. I could see myself having difficulties with it if I was more tired or was less interested in the girl. It's a balancing act that feel difficult though since to sympathise with the MC her awkwardness and antisocial attitude we need to know a lot about her but the story still needs to go forward.

As for my taste in Female lead, I personally like to play them as Bi rather than pure lesbians or straight, but I also like to choose with whom the MC has sex. I personally dislike pushy characters that want the sex only for themselves and completely disregard the MC's will or are jerks. I have no problem to use sex to get back at them but I don't like, as a MC to give sex to characters I feel are undeserving. Unless it's to trick them and get something else out of it. So locking sexual growth and exploration ( I hate the term corruption for that with a passion) behind scenes with such characters generally leaves a bad taste in my mouth.

Up to this point though I like the game a lot, I find it has great potential. But at some point along with knowing Amy better the pace of the story will have to leave behind a bit more of the reflection in a journal kind of pace. doesn't need to ditch it altogether but make it a bit more rare. IMHO. You do you it's your story.

Thanks so much for the awesome feedback! I totally agree that some parts of the story can get a bit wordy, especially Ami's monologues. I've been working on trimming those down, especially now that I’ve introduced most of the major characters (just a couple left, including one small fellow and Ami's mom).

I’m really glad you liked the main character Ami is designed to be someone you might not warm up to right away. She’s pretty indifferent to others' opinions and often prefers her own company. More of her backstory and struggles will come to light in future updates, which should help players connect with her better (I hope).

You also make a great point about player agency in romance options. I definitely plan to include a system that gives you some control. I won’t force players into scenes or encounters that they’d rather skip. Most of Ami's interactions will however be male-female, with potentially some female-female encounters too.

Thanks again for your insights!

 

[bamachine]

Just found this game, missed the first version, so not sure about whatever was in it. I do hope that we can go down a lesbian only path with Ami and besides Jessica, she needs to get it on with her longtime friend. Maybe even become a lesbian domme and really punish her "bully" and both of her stooges. She needs to nail Mrs Henderson at the end of it all, as a graduation present.

 

[restrictive]

Great fun.
If by some strange coincidence have not yet watched "Dead like me" (show and movie both), you should rectify that situation ASAP.

 

[maxxyx]

Was pretty funny and fairly entertaining. Nice inclusion of BBC as well MC being bushy is also a +

It's very good that there will be a blacked content, it would be perfect to combine it with corruption and humiliation.

Red haired women look best with nicely trimmed bushes.

 

[Huninn]

It's very good that there will be a blacked content, it would be perfect to combine it with corruption and humiliation.

Red haired women look best with nicely trimmed bushes.

Hey there! Quick update about the scene – I know it might seem a bit puzzling. The blacked scene was in v0.1 but didn't make the cut in the v0.2 reboot. I'm definitely interested in exploring that type of content down the line, but for the next few updates, I'll be focusing on building out the story (and some great scenes). Stay tuned!

 

[maxxyx]

I'm waiting calmly

 

[windforce]

Hey there! Quick update about the scene – I know it might seem a bit puzzling. The blacked scene was in v0.1 but didn't make the cut in the v0.2 reboot. I'm definitely interested in exploring that type of content down the line, but for the next few updates, I'll be focusing on building out the story (and some great scenes). Stay tuned!

The scene looked poorly done and not only this, good thing you're fixing the models and let's hope the game will be much spicier. The idea is great.

 

[Huninn]

The scene looked poorly done and not only this, good thing you're fixing the models and let's hope the game will be much spicier. The idea is great.

Thanks for the honest feedback! A lot of what I'm doing is pretty experimental - I'm basically playing around with different lighting, compositions, and camera angles to see what clicks. But I'm learning and improving. The upcoming update is going to have some spicy scenes that are better (I hope) than what we had in v0.1 (and barely saw any of in v0.2 beta)

 

[kryanBR]

Im curious... What would a "sassy girl" be?

 

[bamachine]

Huninn I really like the game so far. Love Ami, Jessica and Brenda. I hope Ami gets naughty with both plus even her teacher, right after graduating(just like the Sylvia side story except no falling in love with Mrs. Henderson, just some hot, sweaty scissoring). Also, it would be fine, if some dude that isn't a total douchebag, gets jiggy with her, if she wants that. Maybe even have a threesome with Jessica and Nick, with the mean girls tied up and forced to watch.

One bit of criticism about the Bonus scene. I know those scenes are not part of the main story but I wish the dude's escape girl, after his essay, was not Jessica. I know she is free spirited but I kinda don't want her painted as a complete slut. She gets painted as his girlfriend but she cheats with one of his friends. No bueno, muchacho. Maybe use the mean girls cheerleader chick instead or just some one off chick that is not central to the main story. I am kinda selfish and want Jessica to be all Ami's, maybe they could have some threesome fun but I want them to become an actual couple. Not saying you have to take that path in the main story but I still don't like the idea of Jessica being cheapened in the side story.

Also, love the sex scene with Sylvia but don't understand why she, who first confessed her love, was the one to coldly walk away. I get that she might have felt like she was holding him back but why not discuss it. Maybe she could follow him to wherever he was going to college and get a teaching job in a local high school. Just my two cents.

 

[Huninn]

Im curious... What would a "sassy girl" be?

That's a wonderful question. I'd say that a "sassy girl" is someone who's confident, clever, and expressive - she communicates with style (sarcasm), humor (irony), and authenticity (not giving a f...). At least that's how I'm trying to portray the main character

 

[Huninn]

Huninn I really like the game so far. Love Ami, Jessica and Brenda. I hope Ami gets naughty with both plus even her teacher, right after graduating(just like the Sylvia side story except no falling in love with Mrs. Henderson, just some hot, sweaty scissoring). Also, it would be fine, if some dude that isn't a total douchebag, gets jiggy with her, if she wants that. Maybe even have a threesome with Jessica and Nick, with the mean girls tied up and forced to watch.

One bit of criticism about the Bonus scene. I know those scenes are not part of the main story but I wish the dude's escape girl, after his essay, was not Jessica. I know she is free spirited but I kinda don't want her painted as a complete slut. She gets painted as his girlfriend but she cheats with one of his friends. No bueno, muchacho. Maybe use the mean girls cheerleader chick instead or just some one off chick that is not central to the main story. I am kinda selfish and want Jessica to be all Ami's, maybe they could have some threesome fun but I want them to become an actual couple. Not saying you have to take that path in the main story but I still don't like the idea of Jessica being cheapened in the side story.

Also, love the sex scene with Sylvia but don't understand why she, who first confessed her love, was the one to coldly walk away. I get that she might have felt like she was holding him back but why not discuss it. Maybe she could follow him to wherever he was going to college and get a teaching job in a local high school. Just my two cents.

Thanks for checking out my game and for the awesome feedback, bamachine! I love your idea about a threesome with Faye 'tied up' and 'forced' to watch

I see what you’re saying about the bonus scene, and I totally get where you’re coming from. My main goal was to show Jessica in a way that highlights her own trauma and baggage, stuff that hasn’t really been explored in the main story yet. But maybe I should’ve thought more about how players felt about Jessica? I could technically have made it into a "pivotal" scene and added more player agency... in hindsight. I'll definitely keep this in mind for future updates

And yeah, I get your issue with Sylvia abruptly ending things. I wanted to leave a bit of an open ending so players could come up with their own interpretation of why she did what she did.

 

[voronkov]

Много комментариев к игре. Напишу и я свой тоже.
Сразу скажу. Не знал что написать так как не смог перевести игру для полного понимания. Много текста и без перевода мало чего понял.
Все писали что понравилась игра, после написали что обновление убрало почти всё что понравилось в этой игре. Скачал. Поиграл. Потом скачал старую версию и действительно в старой версии намного больше всего чем в обновлённой версии. Да прочитал в комментариях что возможно будет добавлено что убрали в будущих обновлениях. Выпустить обновление и добавить что убрали. Это не обновление. Это возврат старой версии. Даже если добавить немного нового материала.
Я про то что начало интересное и оригинальное и не только мне понравилось. Обновлённое версия ничем не выделяется.
Раз не могу написать ничего про текст раз не всё понял, то напишу про визуальную часть. Всё есть для интересной игры. Для большого количества изображений, музыки и озвучки она весит не так много. Видно что сделано много и долго делалось. Надеюсь будет продолжение в том стиле что и начальный выпуск игры.


There are many comments about the game. I will write mine too.
I will say right away. I did not know what to write because I could not translate the game for full understanding. A lot of text and without translation I understood little.
Everyone wrote that they liked the game, then they wrote that the update removed almost everything that they liked in this game. Downloaded. Played. Then downloaded the old version and indeed the old version has much more than the updated version. Yes, I read in the comments that it is possible that what was removed will be added in future updates. Release an update and add what was removed. This is not an update. This is a return to the old version. Even if you add a little new material.
I mean that the beginning is interesting and original and not only I liked it. The updated version does not stand out in any way.
Since I can not write anything about the text, since I did not understand everything, I will write about the visual part. Everything is there for an interesting game. For a large number of images, music and voice acting, it does not weigh so much. It is obvious that a lot has been done and it took a long time. I hope there will be a continuation in the same style as the initial release of the game.