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W4N73D

Formerly 'Br0wnH4ir'
Jan 13, 2018
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Downloading now.. looks promising.

From the looks of the renders i'm going to guess it's AI using iLustMix :)-)) checkpoint. I was just playing around with that the other day and love the results.

Anyway.. Going to check out your game.. as long as there is no Male POV that is cucked or humiliated. I will likely join your Patrion or SS. I'm OK with femdom if it's avoidable. OR not involving the Male POV as a sub. That said...Strictly female POV ( with No male POV I don't mind any level of NTR. just as long as I am not playing from the POV of the SIMP )

cheers.
Hi!
This is not an iLustMix.

Regarding the rest: I'm not planning any such scenes at the moment (so I plan to continue doing exactly the way I've defined it now, without simps).
 

W4N73D

Formerly 'Br0wnH4ir'
Jan 13, 2018
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OK I have played though the first installment.

NOT bad.

A) Female POV.. that opens the door for a lot of stuff that I would not find objectionable. ( Most NTR stuff is fine when the POV is the girl, and I am not lead to care about her BF )
B) Renders are stunning and look to be AI and i'd put money on iLustMix as the checkpoint.. it just looks good.
C) Story seems interesting so far.
D) Already hits on ( and in some cases nail ) a lot of my favorite Kinks so far, so.. keen to see more.

*DOWN SIDE*
1) I am less into the whole cut out doll over a static background presentation type... Granted the dev makes the speaker highlight nicely so you know who is talking. But I still prefer Scene composition over static cutout dolls. That said there are sex scenes that are composed scenes that are also done very nicely. but the majority of the story is popup dolls over a background. I find this less engaging. I will say the DEV does it better than I have seen else ware. so it's not intolerable :D

2) for the most part the cutout dolls are static. no changing express or body language as they speak. I get it it's difficult to do consistent characters with AI. especially with minor body languages changes. But if you going with cut out dolls over a static background for a majority of the narrative. having the characters emote visually would really improve the visual story telling.

I am going to reserve judgment on the sandbox elements so far. In general I feel that a game should be AVN if the Sandbox serves no real purpose in the story... I have seen a lot of games that are sandbox but the story is still VERY liniar. In those cases there is almost no point to the sandbox at all. In this first installment I was not seriously distracted by the shift from linear to sandbox. Nor did it slow the story down. But I din't feel there was any real purpose to the SBX.

ALL in a pretty solid start to what may be a great game/story.
Thank you so much for the detailed review. I'm glad that the story and setting came in, and that some of the scenes matched your tastes.

Regarding the visual: yes, the focus is now on the "cut-out" format, as I have already spent a lot of time developing it. I agree that emotions and the variability of sprites add a lot to engagement. I'm thinking about how to improve the presentation — perhaps I'll gradually add more options for expressions and scene composition, including various animations (at least animate static backgrounds)

As for the sandbox elements, they are still more of a sketch, I'm experimenting with the presentation. It's important that they don't break the plot, but I'll listen to the idea that if they don't give the player value, then they're of little use.

Thank you again for taking the time to describe your impressions in such detail.
 
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Haven't played this but it looks like a "Moonripple Lake" knockoff. The cop with the short blonde hair looks exactly like Suzie. I'll just follow the thread to see if it gets to chapter 3 or 4...
 

JoeTheMC84

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And can you have give us some future tags? You know for start NTR/harem.
I just want to avoid any misinterpretation from the start.
Same question. Because from description it looks like it could go either way, guy shows up and it's a bunch of cute chicks cops banging people already and he cuckolds out and just watches. Or he finds some dirty cops (maybe men who pray on female suspects or male and female cops who maybe trade drugs and stuff - since trading "certain favors " is kind of ambiguous and doesn't have to mean anything sexual - for information) and forms a team of honest female cops who help him take the bad cops down (while also becoming his exclusive harem), or it could try to mix the two (and we all know that will end badly). So an answer would be good, and the longer the dev keeps this information to themselves the worse it will get, since it will feel like he is lying to get players and since once the game is done everyone will know the tags anyway so saying them now isn't preventing spoilers because they tags get added eventually, might as well help the players who like the stuff find and it, and the ones who don't like stuff avoid it. It's just being an honest creator.

And if it is female protag, male protag, or multi protag needs to be said. It has to have some kind of protag tag, as far as I was aware that is supposed to be required isn't it?
 

Syrinfox

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I don't know if it's just a me thing since I don't see anyone else mentioning it but the dialogue seemed out of order in some conversations like Anna saying "it's fine I'll just walk" before Jane even offers her a ride and Amelia saying she worked with Will a couple of times before Jane asks her.
 
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Bobber Tail

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So far the girls meet up in uniform, go inside, suddenly in changing room getting into uniforms from street clothes. Not a good start.
 

L7Bear

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Fan of the core concept.
Kinda enjoying the output so far, but not sure.
It says AI CG, but feels like AI writing/dialogue as well.
ETA. (correction: Appears to have been written in Russian? and used AI to translate to English.)

ETA. Decided to give it a chance. Here are my notes:
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L7Bear

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You're BrownHair , the developer? If so, who's the protagonist in the game?
Looks like it doesn't have a specific protagonist, but seems to mostly focus on the 3 female cops, with particular focus on Jane.
ETA. As player we do see some scenes from other perspectives, so I'd guess it is .


note: Not the Dev, obviously. Not the user you were specifically asking either. Just another F95 member trying to help out.
 
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W4N73D

Formerly 'Br0wnH4ir'
Jan 13, 2018
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In order to eliminate misunderstandings, I added the multiple protag tag. At the moment, Jane is the protagonist, and the upcoming events will focus on her. But as correctly noted in the comments (L7Bear), my goal is to show each character together with others and separately.
 
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