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VN Ren'Py Corporate Culture [v0.7] [sqwl]

4.30 star(s) 164 Votes

JuniorAT

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IMO every girl in the game is better looking than the coveted Alice character. For a main LI I dont find her all that attractive looks wise. Anyone else feel the same way?

Apart from that, ch 4 is great as always. The comedic timing and the framing of certain scenes is something I rarely see in other VNs. For instance, the scene where the mc wakes up with a hangover, then gets up from his bed revealing that Tommy is sleeping beside him the entire time, was impressive. There is clearly a lot of thought put behind not just the dialogue, but the positioning of characters.
Alice isn't bad but I just prefer Elsa immensely looks and personality wise. I remember the MC had a choice to flirt with Elsa through text and she didn't respond to his cheap flirting. Like bitch Elsa is above that shit! I find those kind of subtle humor and characterization very effective.

Going back to Alice's attractiveness, yeah she's like a distant third. Elsa is first. Then I actually think MC's boss (forgot her name) is hot; I always have a thing for office ladies even if they are bitches.
 

marspig

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The game has been released for nearly 2 years, you can only fuck the fat girl next door...
And it is quite difficult to achieve this "achievement".

Maybe after 2 years, you can kiss the lips of the two main heroines.
Currently it is Ver 0.4, may it be Ver 0.7 at that time?

Pure love or harem? I can't understand...
Just grinding the plot ~

At this rate of development and dragging, it may be more likely that it will be tired of not updating or not being able to make up the ending after 2 years.
How long do you think it will take to reach Ver.1.0? 4 years later?
 

Fap2766

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The game has been released for nearly 2 years, you can only fuck the fat girl next door...
And it is quite difficult to achieve this "achievement".

Maybe after 2 years, you can kiss the lips of the two main heroines.
Currently it is Ver 0.4, may it be Ver 0.7 at that time?

Pure love or harem? I can't understand...
Just grinding the plot ~

At this rate of development and dragging, it may be more likely that it will be tired of not updating or not being able to make up the ending after 2 years.
How long do you think it will take to reach Ver.1.0? 4 years later?
If you're not happy I'd ask for a refund from the dev.
 

Kionashi

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Jul 11, 2021
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The game has been released for nearly 2 years, you can only fuck the fat girl next door...
And it is quite difficult to achieve this "achievement".
fat chick? really?, is that fat for you?...

anyways, this is not a "porn game" this is an adult visual novel, so you can get tons of entertainment even if the characters are not having sex
 
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JuniorAT

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We're definitely still early on in the storyline but damn I can't really imagine if there will be an Elsa path or some kind of romantic scene with her at this point considering there's little to no chemistry between her and Edward. Essentially they're just close friends that often banter.

Lucy seems like she's done with Edward. The woman in the red dress might be the new Lucy. Emma Reid, as messed up as it will be, I'm kinda hoping at least for some kind of sex scene with her because I find her really attractive, just hoping it's not some cliché blackmailing scenario.

Alice seems like the only real LI. Not sure if the dev said she'd be the only one.
 

Antera

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Nov 19, 2017
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We're definitely still early on in the storyline but damn I can't really imagine if there will be an Elsa path or some kind of romantic scene with her at this point considering there's little to no chemistry between her and Edward. Essentially they're just close friends that often banter.

Lucy seems like she's done with Edward. The woman in the red dress might be the new Lucy. Emma Reid, as messed up as it will be, I'm kinda hoping at least for some kind of sex scene with her because I find her really attractive, just hoping it's not some cliché blackmailing scenario.

Alice seems like the only real LI. Not sure if the dev said she'd be the only one.
For me Elsa feels like a real LI. From best friends to love of your life.. In one of the scenes if you remember Alice fixes MC's hair. some time later Elsa notice and fixes again but for her liking. At that moment we know that She Is The ONE..
 

JuniorAT

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For me Elsa feels like a real LI. From best friends to love of your life.. In one of the scenes if you remember Alice fixes MC's hair. some time later Elsa notice and fixes again but for her liking. At that moment we know that She Is The ONE..
There's something else I noticed. When Edward was daydreaming Alice was standing in front of him and when he wakes up to reality Elsa is standing in Alice's place. Could be foreshadowing! Either way I found that transition cute. :LOL:
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lukrame

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Maybe y'all don't have eyes or something. Alice looks insanely good and is at least top 2 girl in the game looks wise.
 
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This was cool but I find it lame that Edward is only able to become a better person after going full Smeagol on a girl he doesn't even know. Also I hope we can make a true villain out of him. I'm tired of games where people screw you over and you can't do anything about it and the most evil thing you do to them is blackmail them into being nice or some other fairy tale shit. It's time for some of these MC's to start acting like me. You don't want to know what I did to girls who bullied me and you REALLY don't want to know what I did to the boys.

P.S. This loser better stop pulling out.
 

Kionashi

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This was cool but I find it lame that Edward is only able to become a better person after going full Smeagol on a girl he doesn't even know. Also I hope we can make a true villain out of him. I'm tired of games where people screw you over and you can't do anything about it and the most evil thing you do to them is blackmail them into being nice or some other fairy tale shit. It's time for some of these MC's to start acting like me. You don't want to know what I did to girls who bullied me and you REALLY don't want to know what I did to the boys.

P.S. This loser better stop pulling out.
yeaaah....you seem like an awful person, please seek help
 

Canto Forte

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Jul 10, 2017
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Psycho people make the majority of serial murderers because they shit on everybody.
Then they pool their resources and drink the blood of their victims right form their
severed necks. In big chunky gulps where they feel happy to crush and consume everyone.

Quite a good observation as how the so called strong babe is actually a spoiled brat
money is no object kinda skank who spends all her so called quality time in bars and with her girls
who are easy and she likes to spoil their hook ups just for kinks.

Remember, she fkked her babe”s night out when she assaulted the guy hitting on them,
while her babe wanted to be hit on and was actually looking for a hook up.

There you have it: the babe who knows how shitty of a friend she is gets mad and
leaves her, while our lost dumb puppy MC is tagging along to elsa like some shadow.

Fun fact, we all step in our shadows, we slam them into walls and doors and other people,
we cut them in multiple pieces during the day and we molest them all kinds of creepy
during the night. That is the kind of creep MC is to Elsa.

As well documented in this game, MC has real friends, the dudes he keeps blaming
for his disasters, but they stick by him, they ask him out, they want to see him a
better man.

Elsa is no friend. She is stuck with this lunatic MC who actually managed to get his
persona into a good place, good enough to be the asshole to bang a babe
without caring about anyone else. Just him and his neighbor having a blast.

Then every time he goes to Elsa, he regresses to this maniacal incapable freak,
being censored by her and beaten into nothingness, just like her shadow.

IMO every girl in the game is better looking than the coveted Alice character. For a main LI I dont find her all that attractive looks wise. Anyone else feel the same way?

Apart from that, ch 4 is great as always. The comedic timing and the framing of certain scenes is something I rarely see in other VNs. For instance, the scene where the mc wakes up with a hangover, then gets up from his bed revealing that Tommy is sleeping beside him the entire time, was impressive. There is clearly a lot of thought put behind not just the dialogue, but the positioning of characters.

The recurring gag where the mc has to rearrange his room every now and then is also really growing on me. It's funny and the lack of dialogue fits perfectly. On that note, it's interesting that the entire bar sequence was devoid of any dialogue. I think it's a missed opportunity for some witty dialogue but I guess it was a conscious decision by the devs to do it? Or was it a last minute omission? :unsure:

Finally the intimacy in the Lucy sex scenes is great and consistent with previous chapters. More devs should take notes from this game on how to do sex scenes. It's crazy that is without any animations whatsoever.

Either way Im really excited for future chapters. This is a sleeper hit.
Alice isn't bad but I just prefer Elsa immensely looks and personality wise. I remember the MC had a choice to flirt with Elsa through text and she didn't respond to his cheap flirting. Like bitch Elsa is above that shit! I find those kind of subtle humor and characterization very effective.

Going back to Alice's attractiveness, yeah she's like a distant third. Elsa is first. Then I actually think MC's boss (forgot her name) is hot; I always have a thing for office ladies even if they are bitches.
We're definitely still early on in the storyline but damn I can't really imagine if there will be an Elsa path or some kind of romantic scene with her at this point considering there's little to no chemistry between her and Edward. Essentially they're just close friends that often banter.

Lucy seems like she's done with Edward. The woman in the red dress might be the new Lucy. Emma Reid, as messed up as it will be, I'm kinda hoping at least for some kind of sex scene with her because I find her really attractive, just hoping it's not some cliché blackmailing scenario.

Alice seems like the only real LI. Not sure if the dev said she'd be the only one.
For me Elsa feels like a real LI. From best friends to love of your life.. In one of the scenes if you remember Alice fixes MC's hair. some time later Elsa notice and fixes again but for her liking. At that moment we know that She Is The ONE..
Elsa is also kind of creepy to me. She's like a female Patrick Bateman from American Psycho. She places high priority in money, status, appearance and wealth.
This was cool but I find it lame that Edward is only able to become a better person after going full Smeagol on a girl he doesn't even know. Also I hope we can make a true villain out of him. I'm tired of games where people screw you over and you can't do anything about it and the most evil thing you do to them is blackmail them into being nice or some other fairy tale shit. It's time for some of these MC's to start acting like me. You don't want to know what I did to girls who bullied me and you REALLY don't want to know what I did to the boys.

P.S. This loser better stop pulling out.
MC is a puppet on a string.
Real writing skills show when the narrator does the puppeteerig without beating MC to a pulp.
This game is not doing any of that. Fate is the one just hitting and hitting MC over and over.

There is nothing he can do in front of Elsa. No real option, his brain is mush as a plot device.
Wonder how much MC needs to be made into nothing in this game until we start to see actual
plot going somewhere. Every step MC makes, in any direction, is mamed and busted.

Next day MC is back to below 0 capabilities, here comes the shitting on him,
then he gets some piece of a chance from some other NPC, fate gets him failing,
that NPC gets what she wants outta him and leaves,
while we are left with MC back into disaster zone.
 
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