VN Ren'Py Corrupted Hearts [v0.5 Part A] [Sinful Studios]

[ItsNotUs]

You dont even seem to get the important points of the game but focus on a short term event. It would be foolish to base her ntr event on a single kiss.

Clara was bound to cheat no matter what and had been warned since the beginning. Their relationship was strained even before the mission started with Alan wanting Clara to stop doing such risky jobs while Clara wanted Alan to believe and trust her.

Even in this "loyalty" path you termed yourself (its penalty path btw) , Alan supports in a way that still doesn't consider her feelings.

For the first penalty, during the meeting he ignored her requests to just be silent and trust her and almost made themselves look suspicious.

For the second penalty, he could have just indulged her for the moment since he already did it instead of stopping all of a sudden and hurting her feelings.

I am not saying what Alan did is wrong but to Clara she expected more from him. She seems to want someone who unconditionally supports her and Leon seemed to do that.

So after everything, in her most vulnerable moment, she fell to the devil whispering in her ear. She then realizes the horrible mistake she made and doubted herself including her relation with Alan which is why she talked to him to reassure herself.

The NTR of Clara is the least important point since it was always supposed to happen and the whole plot seems to be made surrounding that.

But I am glad this update happened. The haters can leave and let us enjoy in peace

What is the point of making different paths and choices - in order to lead a flock of sheep - because they actually have no choice!

 

[truthpolice]

What is the point of making different paths and choices - in order to lead a flock of sheep - because they actually have no choice!

Funny you are asking when game is far from finished and still don't get what the plot is about

 

[Wolf_4D]

The hare and the hedgehog came to visit the turtle. Turtle says: "You sit here, and I’ll run off to get some cake".
An several hours passes, the turtle is gone. The hedgehog began to be indignant: "WTF! Where did she go?"
Then a turtle’s voice comes from behind the door: "If you swear, I won’t go anywhere at all!"

 

[gedads]

I quite don't understand the problem with the current update, it was stated that the betrayal has to happen for the game to start, it's done. That's now when people should wait for next updates instead of rejecting the game. As for now, there's no way to know how the MC will react once he learns what she did and more importantly which choices will be given to the player at that point. In all NTR games, that's at that turning point when you can choose to either put it in the recyble bin because that's another bbc gay cuck fetish game or if it's a "normal man" writing it and gives his MC the "right" to act as a man or just to defend himself / retaliate / turn his back. What's weird with those ntr games, while i actually enjoy the drama it can lead to i but never go to the end because of unbearable weak male MC representation, is that their author are males, but it seems that they hate women ( they want to make sluts of them ) and also hate being males almost like they never listened their instinct in their life seeing the choices given.

 

[UpravDom]

What is the point of making different paths and choices - in order to lead a flock of sheep - because they actually have no choice!

The developer warned that the NTR is inevitable, but there are several endings of the game, including when the pair is saved! Apparently, the continuation of the game will be influenced by the mood with which Clara has sex with Leon! In the first case, Clara restrains her desires to some extent! But in the second case, Clara completely surrendered to the desires of the flesh and even took the initiative herself! Apparently, the resentment against Alan for refusing to help was influenced! This is confirmed by the screenshots posted here, which are missing in the first case! In the first case, it is possible that the love of Clara and Alan will remain! There is a hidden choice hiding here! The developer has come up with such tough tests for his characters according to his preferences! I am sympathetic to this choice.

 

[Eye-switcher]

Love it, absolutely love it, good work!

 

[ItsNotUs]

Funny you are asking when game is far from finished and still don't get what the plot is about

Funny? It’s funny when, without long corruption and plot development, Clara cheats on her husband because of a simple kiss, although she herself went through a lot!
You have a choice that at key moments does not affect anything! Is this really funny?

 

[DIRTY Filthy RAT]

Read through the whole sequence(update, I mean). Meh.
How to mess everything up with one update.
Leon is the mole, his "dead" daddy is the one pulling the strings/helping him.
Unless the developer decides to put out Deus Ex Machinas here and there.

The reader, who can figure 2+2, got all of the questions answered in here and first act is not even finished yet.
I'm not Shakespeare of any sorts, but how to take susceptions of peeps off of Leon, but get him to be the one who Clara cheats with?
Give her an impossible task of sorts, alongside Leon. No? Okay, she's drunk, right? Get her to come to Leon, who's also drunk and upset of something(friend's death, I dunno) instead of him coming to her. Let them get drunk together and things to spiral out.
But nah, Leon conveniently comes to her right away)

I get it, it's NSFW VN, not great tragedy. But if you build it up with putting emphasis on a story - you've gotta do something differently.
Guess what will happen from now on? Leon will get to grope Clara here and there in front of Alan, kissing and shit with "Sorry, I couldn't hold myself off" with signs of blackmail.

So, instead of story-driven stuff with plot twists and mystery(yup, it would've still been Leon in the end, but with characters having "Red Herring" roles). We've got typical NTR story instead. Disappointed.

Sooo i just finished playing the update and it was amazing especially the part where Clara gives into her slutty desires and has sex with Leon now that entire scene was really hottt..also for all the crybabies out here crying and whining about NTR remember you fools arent Alan and Clara isnt your wife lmaooo so stop fake imagining yourselves as Alan and getting pissed off about the fact that Clara is cheating on you lol..kindly get a grip on reality coz this is a damn porn game and stop complaining about NTR coz this game is all about it and if you dont like it then plz stop playing and F off lol..

Alan is such a wimpy little simpy Cuck character with no backbone, no wonder he was bullied atleast Anna is tougher and can probly get Leon killed and steal Alan away.
I wouldn’t be surprised if we find out that Mr X is either Leon or his dad, he’s definately the mole and for Clara to be this dumb not to see it, (I think she shares the same brain with her doppelgänger Anna from “Perfect marriage” game)
And now that she’s had some bbc, Alan the simp Cuck won’t even be able to compare or satisfy her, it’s time to end this relationship with that whore before this happens

 

[truthpolice]

Funny
It’s funny when, without long corruption and plot development, Clara cheats on her husband because of a simple kiss, although she herself went through a lot!
You have a choice that at key moments does not affect anything! Is this really funny?

What's funnier is still not getting the point of the story after the game literally showed it from start to the end of latest update. Is there a written rule somewhere that ALL choices need to have a immediate effect? If that is the case all VN games need to close shop

Obviously a choice at key moments carries hidden points and need not necessarily cause an effect rightaway. The kiss is only meant to be a catalyst when Clara didn't even stay long enough to see the aftermath of the choice. You are playing as Alan and not Clara in case you forgot that too.

 

[ItsNotUs]

The developer warned that the NTR is inevitable, but there are several endings of the game, including when the pair is saved!

How can this couple be saved?
Is this a short game with a couple of updates left?

At this rate, Clara will cheat on Allan more than once, the next time she will see how Anna supposedly accidentally grabbed Alan’s hand and he, not wanting to offend her, will hold on to her. Clara will again feel a sense of jealousy and she will drag Leon to the toilet and blow him no longer being drunk!
I would understand if this scene was at the end of the game where throughout the entire story Clara struggled with herself, but at the last moment she could not control her feelings and then Alan would have the choice to forgive her for betraying or not! But she will get f@cked repeatedly, while we, as players, cannot influence at this at all - how in such a situation should Alan forgive her and save their marriage?

At the same time, again, if NTR cannot be avoided, why make different paths?
Choice whitout choice for the sheeps?

 

[Eet_Fuk]

So, is the game good now? Content wise I mean, is there enough content atm?

 

[ItsNotUs]

What's funnier is still not getting the point of the story after the game literally showed it from start to the end of latest update. Is there a written rule somewhere that ALL choices need to have a immediate effect? If that is the case all VN games need to close shop

Obviously a choice at key moments carries hidden points and need not necessarily cause an effect rightaway. The kiss is only meant to be a catalyst when Clara didn't even stay long enough to see the aftermath of the choice. You are playing as Alan and not Clara in case you forgot that too.

What are you talking about, what the hell is this hidden point counter?

We don't trust Clara, don't help her - leads her to more cheeky behavior with mission goals! Such as footjob to the boss and blowjob to Gunar!
Trusting and helping Clara leads to the fact that she avoids this moments with mission goals (there is no footjob or bj) and i remember the scene when Leon was giving her a massage, she stopped him! This is how it should have happened this time, on the path of fidelity, she should not have allowed him to fuck her - but on the path of betrayal, she freely allowed him to do this - this is the meaning of the choice! Otherwise, it’s a waste of time to divide the game along the paths without allowing it to influence in key events such as cheating!

And the worst thing is that this is just the beginning! What's the point of playing further along the path of fidelity?
If the dev had not divided the game along the paths, i personally, would not have had any questions, but we get that we are faced with a false choice that, in essence, has no effect on anything!
Kapish!?

 

[AL.d]

At the same time, again, if NTR cannot be avoided, why make different paths?
Choice whitout choice for the sheeps?

I might be wrong since I haven't followed it for some time, but I think this one never claimed to have avoidable NTR. Dev claims the choices affect how characters deal with it.

Of course, if the extent of choice is having MC staying married to a slut like a willing cuck, or jerking off alone in a basement to her gangbang videos, there is not much point to it. It will be just another pick your cuck flavor type of resolution like most games of this type do.

I think the outcome of these choices will be more obvious when the paths become more concrete, closer to the end of the game.

 

[truthpolice]

How can this couple be saved?
Is this a short game with a couple of updates left?

At this rate, Clara will cheat on Allan more than once, the next time she will see how Anna supposedly accidentally grabbed Alan’s hand and he, not wanting to offend her, will hold on to her. Clara will again feel a sense of jealousy and she will drag Leon to the toilet and blow him no longer being drunk!
I would understand if this scene was at the end of the game where throughout the entire story Clara struggled with herself, but at the last moment she could not control her feelings and then Alan would have the choice to forgive her for betraying or not! But she will get f@cked repeatedly, while we, as players, cannot influence at this at all - how in such a situation should Alan forgive her and save their marriage?

At the same time, again, if NTR cannot be avoided, why make different paths?
Choice whitout choice for the sheeps?

The more you talk, the more you just prove you don't even understand the characters, let alone the story. Despite knowing the game isn't finished, you keep asking same questions as if someone here is from the future

What I don't get is if you say you are disappointed and already said your goodbyes, why are you still talking about it? This feels like a weird love hate relationship we see in thai dramas

 

[ItsNotUs]

The more you talk, the more you just prove you don't even understand the characters, let alone the story. Despite knowing the game isn't finished, you keep asking same questions as if someone here is from the future

What I don't get is if you say you are disappointed and already said your goodbyes, why are you still talking about it? This feels like a weird love hate relationship we see in thai dramas

These are hypothetical questions!

Lol
Because you continue to write under my posts - is everything okay with your thinking?
Apparently not.

 

[DIRTY Filthy RAT]

Look some of us are from “perfect marriage” thread and have been blue balled to death over there with that slowburn won’t even show nudity to the main character So Clara is the closest I’ve found (besides “itsnotus” fan art) of Anna being naked and naughty

 

[Avaron1974]

Clara cheating of her own volition came far too early, even if she was drunk.
Also a women who has only ever been with her husband, cheats so easily? it was a tiny kiss...
As a secret agent you have to be high IQ, discern patterns and kick ass, I would have only expected her to cheat only after some kind of mind break, months of pressure/stress or as a revenge move after seeing her hubby slide his cock in someone else.
It was a hot scene (visually) however, even if I didn't like the pretext that lead to it.

It couldn't have waited any longer.

The NTR isn't the plot, it's how the MC deals with it.

 

[xert13]

Terrific update!

 

[Sadowdark]

And I was supposed to play it, I did the right thing not to play it, it only saved me some nerves.

 

[truthpolice]

This update seems to act like a good filter to weed out haters