VN Ren'Py Onhold Corrupted Hearts [v0.7 Part B] [Sinful Studios]

[UpravDom]

...one of the key points in the game (my opinion).
Clara is doing a penalty assignment.

...Alan - "C-Clara? Why are you saying such things?"
"I was taken aback and shocked to hear such rude words from her out of nowhere and they struck me harder before I could realise it."

Clara - "Are you seriously asking me after you failed to do even one simple thing for me after I did my best to please your tiny cock? It’s so frustrating that your useless tiny cock can’t even help me let off some steam after risking my life out there."

Alan "Why is she getting so worked up over this, especially when she said it was just a game. Is she that mad because of her stress? Even then, does she have to insult me like this?"

Alan - "Clara… please stop… I am sorry. I wasn’t feeling-"

Clara - "I can’t believe you call this a cock. It's more like a little worm, twitching around helplessly. No wonder it can’t even stand straight."

Alan - "That’s enough!"
"I felt as if my entire body was burning up and my heart heavy like a rock. I couldn’t remember the last time I felt like this."...

In fact, Clara morally castrated Alan. In such a situation, most couples break up And if Alan has even a drop of pride left, he will leave her like a burning brand, despite her subsequent apologies. Сross the red line - get the consequences.

I know a lot of guys in real life who have difficult relationships with girls! One guy in such a situation hanged himself in the garage! He didn't even talk , but left a posthumous note! Most guys agree with the statement that the best cure for unhappy love is another love! Because girls have the same problems and they are looking for their happiness! But there is a category of guys who have chosen a girl alone for life! And if a girl has chosen another guy, then they are waiting for them to break up! Perhaps Alan is the same and will be able to forgive Clara and continue the relationship... Such is life in its diversity! By the way, most centenarians adapt very easily to negative changes in their lives!They are like a low-growing shrub in the forest! The hurricane will break big strong trees with an iron character, but the shrubbery will survive!

 

[PML 021259]

Perhaps Alan is the same and will be able to forgive Clara and continue the relationship...

...most likely, Mom persuade Alan (mama's son) to forgive Clara (not my choice). Then Alan will get an unfaithful abusive wife who will cuckold him every time and call him "Oh, you're my fawn!"
And they will have children-none like Alan.

 

[Adhdclassic]

Looks like the Extra mouth the Alien from Aliens has.

 

[Forzatorna1000]

the game starts with the betrayal already set, the DEv itself says so, now, what happens during the game is very confusing, from what little I understood, with our choices of Alan we will lead Clara on the various paths of infidelity, true, in some cases, it is the mission, but in the case of Leon, it is Alan's indecisions that push Clara, therefore, that Clara betrays is certain, the game makes us decide at what level and what consequences, this depends on us players and choices, in the beginning it was not a bad idea, but then, too many POVs, too much confusion in the characters, too many disposable characters, the game has become a cauldron of senseless actions. in the end it seems that there are two paths, Alan forgives Clara, Alan does not forgive her and prefers Anna. a hypothetical third, that Alan does not discover everything that Clara has done, or worse, that Clara is killed. but the two main endings are those described first. a modest idea of mine.

 

[PML 021259]

but in the case of Leon, it is Alan's indecisions that push Clara

a classic link from the "cheaters' handbook".
"It's his fault that I cheated on him..."

 

[Adhdclassic]

a classic link from the "cheaters' handbook".
"It's his fault that I cheated on him..."

You don't understand I can explain.

 

[PML 021259]

the game starts with the betrayal already se

There was no penetrative sex at the beginning of the game.

 

[Forzatorna1000]

it's the game you wanted, it's like you said, a classic, but it's a porn game based on betrayal, so the way of the story can't be different.

 

[Forzatorna1000]

I was referring to the idea of the game, which is set with unavoidable betrayal, then it is subjective, it can be a voluntary betrayal, or due to the mission, in this sense, then Alan can decide whether to forgive or not.

 

[PML 021259]

I was referring to the idea of the game, which is set with unavoidable betrayal, then it is subjective, it can be a voluntary betrayal, or due to the mission, in this sense, then Alan can decide whether to forgive or not.

Do I really mind? I have never swore at the game, the plot and the DEV. hands and feet FOR... Only at critical points in the plot would I not like to see Alan as a complete moron...

 

[PML 021259]

I was referring to the idea of the game, which is set with unavoidable betrayal, then it is subjective, it can be a voluntary betrayal, or due to the mission, in this sense, then Alan can decide whether to forgive or not.

by the way, a logical error was made in one place in the game code (the minus sign was omitted in the IF comparison operator)

 

[Adhdclassic]

I have issues with this game but there is one redeeming quality which it has in common with another game APM. We can control if the MC has balls. Most games like this the MC is a pussy who doesn't do shit. The other is a happy ending. This game and APM you get a third option even if shit happens you aren't a pushover. The other thing is the male antagonist is a bull but not an Alpha. Leon is constantly apologizing or explaining himself. If you take the Alan has balls approach you see him confronting Leon when he leaves Claras room and he tells him don't come back her after hours unless you talk to me Leon of course tries to explain but Alan ain't having it. Brown son he confronted him when he got mouthy and also he defended and verbally shot back at Clara when she said that stuff to him. Other than APM the only other game which did it was a couple's duet of love and lust. That's refreshing to see. MCS are not utter weaklings.

 

[PML 021259]

In my opinion, the game can have 5 ends:
1: Alan forgives Clara and they live happily ever after.
2: Alan forgives Clara and they live happily ever after (raising Leon's child).
3: Alan abandons Clara. Clara goes to Leon.
4: Alan abandons Clara and commits suicide. Who is Clara with? He doesn't give a damn.
5: Alan leaves Clara and marries Anna. Who is Clara with? He doesn't give a damn.
The relationship with his mother is a separate story.

 

[FourtySix&2]

In my opinion, the game can have 5 ends:
1: Alan forgives Clara and they live happily ever after.
2: Alan forgives Clara and they live happily ever after (raising Leon's child).
3: Alan abandons Clara. Clara goes to Leon.
4: Alain abandons Clara and commits suicide. Who is Clara with? He doesn't give a damn.
5: Alan leaves Clara and marries Anna. Who is Clara with? He doesn't give a damn.
The relationship with my mother is a separate story.

6: Alan mans up, kill everyone who took advantage of his wife, steal their money and they both flee to a tropical paradise
7: Alan mans up, kill everyone , steal their money and he flees to a tropical paradise

 

[PML 021259]

6: Alan mans up, kill everyone who took advantage of his wife, steal their money and they both flee to a tropical paradise
7: Alan mans up, kill everyone , steal their money and he flees to a tropical paradise

as subvariants 1 and 2. cool

 

[UpravDom]

The correspondence on the site can be described as a comprehensive analysis and assessment of the development of the relationship between the main characters and minor characters , which in some episodes of the game look even preferable ... This is a purely subjective opinion! Well, the story is developing according to the Developer's plan! There is an opinion that the time has come for hot scenes that can completely paralyze the resistance of the mind of partners! This will raise the libido, types of lust and passionate attraction of the characters to the highest level! There will be a fresh topic for discussion!

 

[PML 021259]

There is an opinion that the time has come for hot scenes that can completely paralyze the resistance of the mind of partners!

and it's only day 8 inside the game. YEEES!!!

 

[DIRTY FILTHY Animal]

In my opinion, the game can have 5 ends:
1: Alan forgives Clara and they live happily ever after.
2: Alan forgives Clara and they live happily ever after (raising Leon's child).
3: Alan abandons Clara. Clara goes to Leon.
4: Alan abandons Clara and commits suicide. Who is Clara with? He doesn't give a damn.
5: Alan leaves Clara and marries Anna. Who is Clara with? He doesn't give a damn.
The relationship with his mother is a separate story.

5 Alan and Anna marry, Anna plants some c4 under Leon’s car and she gives the remote to Alan, he can either detonate with just Leon in the car or he can wait until Clara is in the car too

 

[MoBy28]

In my opinion, the game can have 5 ends:
1: Alan forgives Clara and they live happily ever after.
2: Alan forgives Clara and they live happily ever after (raising Leon's child).
3: Alan abandons Clara. Clara goes to Leon.
4: Alan abandons Clara and commits suicide. Who is Clara with? He doesn't give a damn.
5: Alan leaves Clara and marries Anna. Who is Clara with? He doesn't give a damn.
The relationship with his mother is a separate story.

1 and 2 are pretty much the same and all depends on if the dev wants Clara to be pregnant, so I would only count that as 1.

What I'm not seeing in any of those is the options to set Clara up with the bad guys for a revenge ending or even Alan getting set up to take the fall. It's ntr so we know there will be an ending for her to betray Alan and set him up to take the fall, seeing the way this story has went and is going I have my doubts about Alan being able to set Clara up as one of the bad guys. Then again I have my doubts about Alan being able to do anything other than be a stupid little wimp who lets everyone walk all over him. I mean honestly wtf is Alan gonna do if Leon ignores him and goes to see Clara again? Go yell at him again, confront them both and see he's been a gullible cuck, spy on them some more, go and tell Clara who ignores his advice and warnings anyways? If he tried to fight him Leon would easily beat his ass. So as much as he seems to be trying to be stronger, he's still the same stupid little wimp who can't do anything. Although now he can go tell mommy that the bad man won't stop seeing/fucking his wife.

 

[MoBy28]

5 Alan and Anna marry, Anna plants some c4 under Leon’s car and she gives the remote to Alan, he can either detonate with just Leon in the car or he can wait until Clara is in the car too

You know devs never give that kind of good ending in ntr stories.