Without looking at it too deeply, it seems that no orgies happened and all EE came from tempts right? Looks hard to play from the day 30ish saves.
If I had to play it, I would be pretty sure that after the 2 tempts (assuming day 11), Cheer can force an orgy at Reign at 0 break, then next day break Reign to reset her angst, and get another orgy with Reign at 1 break, and then break her second T2 (day 15). That should get you to enough trauma to start T3s and hopefully get T4s to get maybe 101EE/day after day 20ish? (a bit less than 100% punisher progression per day, use Paladin to get it quicker), which guarantees that you can get big 4-type commanders at the end every day as long as the angst lasts. Just have to ensure to NOT tempt the chosens to avoid nuking their angst; with the T3s broken the chosens will get to high PLEA by themselves in the final fight anyways.
This obviously means that the entire loop would need to be replayed, and I am not even totally sure that what I suggested quite line up in terms of angst, since the orgies won't be that long with just Cheer, though maybe Stigma at lower disgrace can get a long enough orgy for the Ts?
Not sure how your first days are but no chosens sacrificed can delay you a bit, and every day counts vs. Undeads. Though if you used Orgasm in a Can on day 1 its less relevant.
Pretty sure Reign + undead is the worse version of the Reign fight at loop 7 though, generally one doesn't quite have the acceleration needed to get day 5 tempts yet and Reign's bullshit pretty much forces a long loop which makes the undead so much worse. Other things that might have helped (which have long term ramifications so I don't know if that's reasonable for what you want to do) would be taking Potable Portal at the start which can help to set up better orgies and avoid the undead, or to not skip loop 6 to try to get a Hardworking Publicist-punished forsaken before the fight.