This game had the potential to be great, but the broken English and cringeworthy dialogue ruins it. The graphics are just generic Honey Select with no personal touch to them, so the game isn't even visually appealing enough for you to ignore the text.
It's almost as if the game was purposely written with the most basic caveman English possible in order to keep the text between sex scenes to a minimum. That's both a good and a bad thing, the bad thing being that the text is the most unsexy thing I've ever read. Sentences like "It was very good sex" and "we are the SLUT" are very prominent here. It's
almost English, but not quite. Everything is perfectly understandable, but very unsexy and sometimes unbearable to read. And it's not like the broken English is just an occasional mistake/typo. These weird, uncanny sentences are written
consistently wrong, meaning that the writer genuinely thinks people say "It was very pleasant sex" after having sex.
Another thing that bothers me is the lack of self-awareness in the writing. The MC is unironically portrayed as the SupremeGentleman™, unironically throwing the "my lady" around as the girls unironically call him a nice guy. It's the ultimate wish fulfillment of a redditor, and it's painful to read.
The dude also seems to have an irrational hatred towards underwear for some reason. I mean, it's kinda difficult to explain this if you haven't played the game, but
every single time the MC sees a girl wearing underwear, he basically just tells her to take the thing off and burn it. He doesn't make a suggestion like, "It would be pretty hot if you stopped wearing panties" or something like that. He just straight up goes "EWWW EWWWW GET THAT UGLY UNDERWEAR OFF MY SIGHT!!" as if his parents were murdered by a pair of panties or something. It's weird as hell. It's not even like he wants them to wear sexier underwear or anything. He just considers the very concept of underwear a capital sin.
The gameplay loop is extremely repetitive. Basically you corrupt Girl 1 until a relative, friend or coworker of hers starts interfering with Girl 1's corruption, then you corrupt her too. There's also an overabundance of netori in this game. Netori is good and all, but even your favorite food can make you sick if you eat it too much. Almost every single girl in this game is in a relationship with an abusive guy who either calls her an old hag, has a small dick or both; usually both. It's the same thing copied and pasted over and over again ad nauseam. When the guy sees his wife wearing a mask or something, he calls the unknown woman hot as if he didn't sleep next to that exact same body every single night. It's so fucking moronic.
The girls also look very ugly after being corrupted. The girls all get bimbofied with the worst makeup the dev could find in the Honey Select character creator. This completely kills any sense of uniqueness to any of the girls, as all of them end up looking basically the same. Not even their underwear is unique, since the MC pukes in his mouth whenever he sees underwear. Many cute girls are completely ruined by the goofy makeup and/or colored hair.
The game overall also feels very unfinished. You'll come across countless messages of "That's all for this version" because the dev forgot to remove them after adding new content, so you never know for sure when you've reached the end of a storyline. The repetitive gameplay loop and unfinished nature of this game are both traits of porn games that stay in development hell for years. It always amazes me how someone can develop a porn game for years and still leave things unfinished.
The only reason why this game gets 2 stars instead of 1 is because of the creativity with some of the poses during sex scenes. There's also quite a lot of content, although we can chalk that up to the game being bloated with the same repetitive sequence of events you've already seen three times only in the last hour.
And last but not least, I'd like to immortalize here a scene that made me laugh my fucking colon off.
The MC steals the girlfriends of two guys who then call a thug to beat him up.
The thug gets ready to beat up the MC and says "sorry bro."
The MC, silent and calculated like a master assassin, delivers a single karate kick to the thug's face, knocking him out in a single blow.
"You didn't have to say sorry to me... bro."