On it's own his writing is fine but it's like bits and pieces of a novel crammed into a game. I'm aware of the "complaining about too much text in a text game" joke but there is such a thing as a sense of pace so reaching wall after wall of text is gonna burn people out. And I'm not even getting into the lack of choices, just that there's zero dynamicism or attempt to make the player feel immersed which should be priorities in interactive fiction even in moments where there are no choices to be made.
You're just a stand in for the specific PoV he wants so you can marvel at his prose & the lore and characters he's obviously so proud of. It's like watching someone play with dolls through text.
I come back for a while and now we have a tobs enjoyer? Looks like 2023 is going to be the end of the world.
A good writer won't need a bible's worth of text to be considered good, just enough should be fine because all it does is waste time on information that is never going to be important like fillers in a show that doesn't have any connection to the main story.
A good writer won't demand the players to care for characters.
This POV thing is something I'll agree on if it's only their characters that are interacting (basically kinu shenanigans) but making the PC look like a moron while being a genius when interacting with characters that aren't written by him is pretty much a retcon.
If there is something I'll give him credit, it's the fact that piece of shit gave me Kinu before they grew up.
A'ight my past suffering has come back to my head, time to go on a journey once more...
