- Jun 3, 2019
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I'm just irritated in the sense that the writing seems to force me to be an actual character. You can have your character do or say or think things that you wouldn't normally wouldn't. Made especially more annoying by Tobs not taking into account that the player can have different traits that would make his writing need to be changed to fit them. Like one of my favorite being that whenever tobs writes sex scenes you're usually an amazing lover even if you say, have a 3 inch dick or a ginormous dick that could pierce the colon.That is not how they worded it. They were speaking in absolutes. You do not need to read it. Most of kitsune writing that is related to there plot is related to Kinu. Which I think is a bigger problem here. Since some players could miss majority of content if, you know, they dared to play without a dick.
Most of the things that is written for rest of them as of now are character and culture related. And of sexual kind. Rindu is only one that really could make you feel uncomfortable since we are dealing with concept of you helping someone to get over there traumatic experience by fucking them. But we did that with Ryn so I feel nothing about it. Now, I am not writing off everything bad about him off. I have major problems with his writing, but I feel that most off it is not really related to his writing of kitsune. A lot of it feels like it belongs in the game. Since a lot of the game is talking about culture, its people then going about fucking them. Tobs is just the one that took it the furthest. And while this is obvious case of japanophilia, I do not see big problem here. The worst thing about it is that it is cliche. But to me it does bring down monotony of seeing creatures and cultures mostly taken from western influence.
With the kitsune though, I'd say the writing just made me annoyed because I feel it's just clunky. The writing is meandering and just prattles on. I don't really have an issue with the Japan theme, but boy does Tobs just bite off more than he can chew. Because at best it adds some interesting flavor to some scenes, but the rest of the time is honestly cringe or boring.