Others Corruption of Champions II [v0.7.32] [Savin/Salamander Studios]

[Cerneu]

So did some of the Miko content, and gotta agree with a lot of others here. The southern accent is atrocious. I'm not talking about, "I can't stand redneck slang" atrocious I'm talking about, "Where in the south / countryside do they talk like this?" levels.

Spoiler: rant

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TLDR - Another tick on the "theObserver's writing sucks" counter because he can't or doesn't know how to write dialog for a southern speaking / accented character. Every word doesn't need to be accented, just a couple staples.

Miko's page on the CoC2 wiki says that her accent is anglicised Kansai dialect.

 

[destroyerofassholes]

So did some of the Miko content, and gotta agree with a lot of others here. The southern accent is atrocious. I'm not talking about, "I can't stand redneck slang" atrocious I'm talking about, "Where in the south / countryside do they talk like this?" levels.

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TLDR - Another tick on the "theObserver's writing sucks" counter because he can't or doesn't know how to write dialog for a southern speaking / accented character. Every word doesn't need to be accented, just a couple staples.

He's really just copying anime/manga translators. They tend to use that exact same writing style to convey someone being a country hick.

So it's the translators being dumbfucks, and Tobs just following them because the man is an undeniable weeb.

 

[Sublop]

I looked everywhere, and I absolutely cannot find any of the other kitsune reacting to Miko's pregnancy. The update claims they have dialogue for it but it sure as hell isn't in their talk screens.

 

[Deleted member 3463984]

I looked everywhere, and I absolutely cannot find any of the other kitsune reacting to Miko's pregnancy. The update claims they have dialogue for it but it sure as hell isn't in their talk screens.

i read somewhere that it's only after she's given birth

 

[enumate]

TBF there are places down here where the people sound 80-90% like her. I agree it's a bitch to read, though.

True. My main complaint is there is a good way to translate that to readable dialog. Dialog isn't separated from the first person much and gets wonky to switch my brain from reading proper grammar to the southern drawl, pronunciation and syntax.

Spoiler: How Miko and Mai dialog would read better IMO

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Don't get me wrong, I find Miko and Mai's more country / southern dialog to be pretty endearing, but like you said it's a bitch to read and I end up skipping over most of it.

 

[lazydude]

And last but not least, we have a few stragglers to catch up on from May:

0.3.49 Patch Notes:

• There’s a new optional Good End if Infrith, Rags, and Hretha are all concurrently pregnant but Arona isn’t.
• Elthara’s Appearance screen has been updated to account for pregnancy, with a new CG by AnonArts as well!
• Zuzaan now finally has a pregnant bust.
• Ryn has a new combat headshot and appearance CG for her queenly garb.

And that’s all, folks! Thanks for boatloads of support from all you new backers during May — hopefully you’ll stick around through June as we launch into our next zone and get the main story rolling again!

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[Minipax84]

Man while doing Miko's new content (which was average, it's really boggled down by Tobs's prose) I visited Kiyoko's home as I hadn't done in some time...and some "event" about state matters popped up.

It's 4 pages of exposition about shit I don't give half a fuck about. Many of the sex scenes in this game are far shorter than that.

Who in fuck plays this game to read about make-believe pseudo-weeb fox deep state ceremony traditions?

People have said this already but yeah some of the writers have become a bit too enamoured with their own setting and 'deep' OCs. Like Opala they seem to have forgotten people play this game to get their dick hard or pussy wet, any story or gameplay ought to be organized around this fact. No one is going to take your worldbuilding seriously when you're one click away from a futa gangbang or something

 

[zwere]

People have said this already but yeah some of the writers have become a bit too enamoured with their own setting and 'deep' OCs. Like Opala they seem to have forgotten people play this game to get their dick hard or pussy wet, any story or gameplay ought to be organized around this fact. No one is going to take your worldbuilding seriously when you're one click away from a futa gangbang or something

Too true, I used to like Kiyoko when I didn't know she just existed to give birth to scuffed Ciri Kinu.

 

[namelessone22]

So did some of the Miko content, and gotta agree with a lot of others here. The southern accent is atrocious. I'm not talking about, "I can't stand redneck slang" atrocious I'm talking about, "Where in the south / countryside do they talk like this?" levels.

Spoiler: rant

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TLDR - Another tick on the "theObserver's writing sucks" counter because he can't or doesn't know how to write dialog for a southern speaking / accented character. Every word doesn't need to be accented, just a couple staples.

Not that I payed a lot of attention, but I just assumed the accent was Irish, for some reason?
And while an Irish accent can be sexy - I just thought it was an odd choice for japanese kitsune
(if I was wrong about accent - apologies)

 

[destroyerofassholes]

Not that I payed a lot of attention, but I just assumed the accent was Irish, for some reason?
And while an Irish accent can be sexy - I just thought it was an odd choice for japanese kitsune
(if I was wrong about accent - apologies)

It's meant to be sound like the US South accent. It's the first thing that comes to mind for an American writer when they think of "countryside accent."

And that is supposed to represent Japan's countryside dialects.

It's just dumb all around.

 

[Trteyewuwqiq]

Miko's page on the CoC2 wiki says that her accent is anglicised Kansai dialect.

So they unironically chose to make her accent a western interpretation (a very bad one mind you) of a Kansai dialect? This is bad anime dub levels of stupid. If I wanted terrible dubs I'd watch modern Funimation products.

 

[namelessone22]

heck yea another kitsune to breed, hopefully kohaku got the content too

Kind of looking forward to the next Mayternity (hopefully with Mai?)

Spoiler: small Mai spoilers from Miko's Mayternity stuff

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[goldenskyviper]

lets get the backer update already if you havent posted links do it please

 

[WaterH20]

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0.3.49 Patch Notes:

• There’s a new optional Good End if Infrith, Rags, and Hretha are all concurrently pregnant but Arona isn’t.
• Elthara’s Appearance screen has been updated to account for pregnancy, with a new CG by AnonArts as well!
• Zuzaan now finally has a pregnant bust.
• Ryn has a new combat headshot and appearance CG for her queenly garb.

And that’s all, folks! Thanks for boatloads of support from all you new backers during May — hopefully you’ll stick around through June as we launch into our next zone and get the main story rolling again!

 

[Doras]

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0.3.49 Patch Notes:

• There’s a new optional Good End if Infrith, Rags, and Hretha are all concurrently pregnant but Arona isn’t.
• Elthara’s Appearance screen has been updated to account for pregnancy, with a new CG by AnonArts as well!
• Zuzaan now finally has a pregnant bust.
• Ryn has a new combat headshot and appearance CG for her queenly garb.

And that’s all, folks! Thanks for boatloads of support from all you new backers during May — hopefully you’ll stick around through June as we launch into our next zone and get the main story rolling again!

Thank you very much

 

[destroyerofassholes]

So I finished Miko's scene and all, and Komari shits on you for "enabling her". Because the MC is somehow supposed to know about a made-up disease about being cum hungry. Even though she literally normally can't get pregnant and all.

The whole thing reads like a soap opera. She even goes as far as to go for fantasy racism.

Why man, just why would you write that.

 

[MogwaiKupo]

So I finished Miko's scene and all, and Komari shits on you for "enabling her". Because the MC is somehow supposed to know about a made-up disease about being cum hungry. Even though she literally normally can't get pregnant and all.

The whole thing reads like a soap opera. She even goes as far as to go for fantasy racism.

Why man, just why would you write that.

Did you just dare underestimate Tobs.

But no seriously, go through every one of Tobs characters, you're not going to find a single one that doesn't have drama-filled baggage added on to them. No matter how convoluted.

It's not Tobs if he's doesn't take every chance he can to throw potshots at you and your character. With your character sitting there and taking it of course. Which is why I feel he enjoyed every second of writing Elyon being hostile towards you.

 

[Furmilk]

Kind of looking forward to the next Mayternity (hopefully with Mai?)

I'm worried that we'll be seeing a preggo dryspell for months now though after all this. This burst was nice, but it still missed a few people I was really hoping for, and now I feel like they won't be touched at all for the rest of the year.

 

[sinfool]

Kind of looking forward to the next Mayternity (hopefully with Mai?)

Spoiler: small Mai spoilers from Miko's Mayternity stuff

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mai eh? kinda interesting too, well let's see if the content for mai released. and hopefully turn out to be good

 

[Hambo]

• Within the next month or two we’re going to start releasing the next major story areas for the game: the Undermountain, accessible through the minotaur gate in the foothills, which will lead down into the subterranean city of Khor’minos. Expect loads of content for Brint/enne and everything bovine. How convenient this ended up being the Year of the Cow!

Whatever happened to this?