Others Corruption of Champions II [v0.7.32] [Savin/Salamander Studios]

[MogwaiKupo]

I have figured out why Tobs is on the team.
If you look back through this thread people will complain about many things, but if Tobs is doing something in the same update all hate will be focused on him even if there are other terrible problems.

Tobs is a lightning rod for all hate and discontent and if he was gone that would have to be directed somewhere else

That'd be true, but he's only really despised here. If you go to the Fen forums he's actually pretty well appreciated. Sure, even Fen fans have got fed up at times with Kinu Quest, but they play it off by saying he's a good writer if he can illicit that emotion.
I'm still of the opinion that he's only on the team to pad out patch notes. Just sift through each backer patch from Mayternity till now and take away The Observer and you see how much he adds. I was only able to count 4 times. Two of which the main draw the main addition was Eubicha and knocking up Elthara, and 1 was a literal glorified patch just adding images.

 

[zwere]

I do enjoy it on both ends. One loosing side, I do enjoy when I know that our character can suffer the consequences and it makes it all that more sweeter when you win. I also find it hot. But only for bad ends seems like a appropriate way to do it. Since, well, that way you do not rial up people. Being defeated is supposed to be a punishment. Just one that some people enjoy.

But on other hand, I also enjoy doing it to other people, since, it is a huge reward. Which Is why one of my favorite scenes in TiTS is you fucking that goblin couple at that garbage planet. Just making one watch while you screw another makes it seem more fucked up. Especially when a supposed "hero" is doing it.Do wish they would add one for latter case.


Eh, not first one. What is it? And does Brint have one.

Yeah people can say what they want about TiTS but it has a lot of scenes and a lot of variety, both for doms and subs. My personal favorite was getting to turn Sera into my bitch. I loved giving her the carrot and stick treatment. Somehow I don't see us getting anything nearly as satisfying in CoC2 (I think Wsan was talking at some point about writing a dom similar to Evelyn who you can turn the tables on which might be the closest). While on the topic of TiTS, am I the only one who feels that for the most part the writing in TiTS felt more uniform. In truth I haven't played any update since back when Fen was having a mental breakdown last year and the only updates were on his mental health situation and not the game, but I can only recall specific characters, like the Subscribestar ''nekomata'', which stuck out like a sore thumb. Meanwhile in CoC2, besides people mistaking Savin and Tobs, its more freeform and authors add their own personal touch, for better or worse. Not sure if I'm just biased but I thought I might as well throw it out there.

 

[destroyerofassholes]

Yeah people can say what they want about TiTS but it has a lot of scenes and a lot of variety, both for doms and subs. My personal favorite was getting to turn Sera into my bitch. I loved giving her the carrot and stick treatment. Somehow I don't see us getting anything nearly as satisfying in CoC2 (I think Wsan was talking at some point about writing a dom similar to Evelyn who you can turn the tables on which might be the closest). While on the topic of TiTS, am I the only one who feels that for the most part the writing in TiTS felt more uniform. In truth I haven't played any update since back when Fen was having a mental breakdown last year and the only updates were on his mental health situation and not the game, but I can only recall specific characters, like the Subscribestar ''nekomata'', which stuck out like a sore thumb. Meanwhile in CoC2, besides people mistaking Savin and Tobs, its more freeform and authors add their own personal touch, for better or worse. Not sure if I'm just biased but I thought I might as well throw it out there.

I'm pretty sure it's the other way around, Tits has far more writers and far more one-time subscriptions from one-off writers, it's far less cohesive than CoC. Part of why it has so much variety. That's a double edged sword, YMMV kind of a deal.

I also really liked Sera's content. Wish she just had more, or that her pregnancy scenes were easier to access. Can't wait to pull a Sera on Evelyn...though I clicked No for Evelyn once and now I can't meet her anymore so I wonder what they will do about that.

 

[zwere]

That'd be true, but he's only really despised here. If you go to the Fen forums he's actually pretty well appreciated. Sure, even Fen fans have got fed up at times with Kinu Quest, but they play it off by saying he's a good writer if he can illicit that emotion.

I wouldn't go as far as call tobs a hack. He's just aiming too high with his writing and fails in 2 regards: 1) I don't think he is at the skill level where he can do the type of character writing he's aiming for and he is using drama and tragedy as crutches; 2) He's trying to do it in a text based porn game;
As far as personality he likes to be a troll antagonist and live rent free inside people's heads but that usually doesn't end well for people like that. Just look at J.K. Rowling's fall from grace.

 

[zwere]

I'm pretty sure it's the other way around, Tits has far more writers and far more one-time subscriptions from one-off writers, it's far less cohesive than CoC. Part of why it has so much variety. That's a double edged sword, YMMV kind of a deal.

I also really liked Sera's content. Wish she just had more, or that her pregnancy scenes were easier to access. Can't wait to pull a Sera on Evelyn...though I clicked No for Evelyn once and now I can't meet her anymore so I wonder what they will do about that.

Yeah I guess that was probably my selective memory at work, especially because I didn't really interact with content I wasn't into, especially oversized stuff.

 

[Sleel]

I just got sick of nearly every char having tits bigger then their heads and cocks longer then their torsos. Never mind ballsacks that would immobilize someone. Hell, same problem with TiTS really. Is why I dropped both and removed the website from my bookmarks. Kept hoping things would get better, but it never does. So I bailed. If you aren't into massive tits cocks and ballsacks, you're in the wrong place.

 

[hater45]

I wouldn't go as far as call tobs a hack. He's just aiming too high with his writing and fails in 2 regards: 1) I don't think he is at the skill level where he can do the type of character writing he's aiming for and he is using drama and tragedy as crutches; 2) He's trying to do it in a text based porn game;
As far as personality he likes to be a troll antagonist and live rent free inside people's heads but that usually doesn't end well for people like that. Just look at J.K. Rowling's fall from grace.

He ain't really trolling chief, you can easily get under his skin like bubble and Savin. This is why echo chambers are bad because you can never improve when everyone is a fucking yes man towards you. If Savin was a competent project leader he would have a strict vision on the product and pull the reigns on people stepping out of line.

I would tell Tobs to ease back on how he treats the PC because at the end of the day, they are the ones who matter the most in this story. Name a good RPG where you are seeing special snowflake OC's constantly upstaging the PC without consequence from the PC. If the PC was like Shepard from ME, I would renegade all those shit talking foxes. Takahiro? My man gets a right hook to the face if he tries to shit talk after taking the L.

 

[redcynic]

"Hey! Are you guys excited for the minotaur city? Well too bad here's an obnoxious new wilderness zone you have to go through first. No we're not actually releasing the city too. Fuck you, suck on these bad ends."

Really do be feeling like the fen/sav crew put more effort into the losing than the winning.

 

[enumate]

"Hey! Are you guys excited for the minotaur city? Well too bad here's an obnoxious new wilderness zone you have to go through first. No we're not actually releasing the city too. Fuck you, suck on these bad ends."

Really do be feeling like the fen/sav crew put more effort into the losing than the winning.

"With Angsty Love,
TheObserver uwu"

 

[krappaclub]

I am not sure if this is a bug. I found that player cannot deal tease damage to Taldahs(Centaur chief/ahmri father), but companions can.

 

[robdawns]

All the Android links go to the Windows version

 

[Lolicon Kami]

We finally got new content! With the loads of breeding content last month and now this, it seems like Savin's a much more consistent dev than fenoxo. Still not worth paying, though. Lol.

 

[Lance Lot]

How do I trigger the pregnant 3some? I know mik has to be in advanced stages of pregnancy but I got there and sitll nothing

 

[Goddesslucy]

Will there ever be more male companions added? As a girl, it would be really nice

 

[Rickart]

I wouldn't go as far as call tobs a hack. He's just aiming too high with his writing and fails in 2 regards: 1) I don't think he is at the skill level where he can do the type of character writing he's aiming for and he is using drama and tragedy as crutches; 2) He's trying to do it in a text based porn game;

Yeah, that's basically my take on him. His writing feels very fan-fiction-y to me and I don't mean that as a shot. It literally feels like some of the higher quality work I've seen published on AO3 and FanFiction.net, and has a lot their conventions for good and ill. Chiefly is his habbit of referring to characters by some physical characteristic to freshen up the text (even if that pulls the reader out of the story), word bloat where he spends multiple sentences to say something that could be described in a couple words, and of course an overindulgence in drama and tragedy.

Still, I can't fault his work ethic, even if on some level I'm concerned that he's content being a big fish in a small pond rather than actually improving his craft.

 

[zwere]

He ain't really trolling chief, you can easily get under his skin like bubble and Savin. This is why echo chambers are bad because you can never improve when everyone is a fucking yes man towards you. If Savin was a competent project leader he would have a strict vision on the product and pull the reigns on people stepping out of line.

I should've been a bit more specific, I said he LIKES (maybe I should have gone with ''likens himself to'' instead) to be that, I wasn't trying to complement him but was rather stating the obvious, since he always says something to the effect of ''if I pissed people off I'm doing my job right'' and so forth.

 

[CratorH8er]

"Hey! Are you guys excited for the minotaur city? Well too bad here's an obnoxious new wilderness zone you have to go through first. No we're not actually releasing the city too. Fuck you, suck on these bad ends."

Really do be feeling like the fen/sav crew put more effort into the losing than the winning.

Every writer that's working on content for the city has been mentioning that there's going to be an area before it for months now. It's also not strictly wilderness, Brint/Brienne's family live outside of the city and there's a Kobold area outside of the city too.

 

[M0nte]

Will there ever be more male companions added? As a girl, it would be really nice

No. Only real companion remaining to be added is a mouse girl.

 

[Rreerrt66]

1) ntr s$it with Brienne - can't post it - i am against it - refuse to do it - don't like the idea
2) 2 or 3 times more frequent encounters than in any other location, imps/hopgoblins, sometimes every 2 squares travelled - can pay/bribe the hopgobbos for not fighting - meh! just kill them
3) YOU and two babes with a stick
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one time event - than they dissapear. No more meeting them.

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Edit: And i don't buy it. Where are her horns sticking out of helmet? She has no tail? Brienne looks much more mino-like than her... Oh common now - that is only the human-paladin, without-o-mino girls...

Someone need to post the bad end for the laughd

 

[destroyerofassholes]

Every writer that's working on content for the city has been mentioning that there's going to be an area before it for months now. It's also not strictly wilderness, Brint/Brienne's family live outside of the city and there's a Kobold area outside of the city too.

But neither of what you mentioned are in this update. It's a glorified shitzone with fight percentage amped up. You can't walk a step without meeting a doomstack of assholes.

It's so dumb.