Others Corruption of Champions II [v0.7.33] [Savin/Salamander Studios]

[sugouxxx]

So she is like nightmare Kiyoko but for real this time? interesting...honestly I haven't went through her content because Tobs is being Tobs with her and just...I don't like when my porn game becomes a Wall of Text the likes of which would make the Warhammer 40k wikia blush.

Her yandere scene is not from Tobs. Maybe. Or the one with Kiyoko

 

[Walk Cycle]

To be fair the weeb name should had been a big enough clue lol

Hoped it would've been one of JStar's foxes though. Didn't think it was Bubs' cause it doesn't sound like anything he'll write.

 

[Quintilus]

Tobs said he's chinese. Think of that what you want.

Im not sure.
I currently blaze through coc2 content to write ultimate 2 stars review and used one of the chatgpt to point tobs native language (copy-paste tobsed sentences and asking 'what asian language its translated from?'). Most of the times it says korean.

 

[Quintilus]

Dang that sounds hot, lemme-
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Fine, here you go

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Author Su btw

 

[jfmherokiller]

Im not sure.
I currently blaze through coc2 content to write ultimate 2 stars review and used one of the chatgpt to point tobs native language (copy-paste tobsed sentences and asking 'what asian language its translated from?'). Most of the times it says korean.

wait you mean that tobs possibly google translates his stuff?

 

[Nerozm]

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And KAS
Don't forget about Kas.
People always forget Kas.
Not that I blame em, her and the main story is basically an afterthought at this point.

ngl, I hope that once writters go back to her in year 2052 she will get de-futa path at some point. Shame that there is no permament succubss/demon girl companion in CoC2 and Kas is futa...

 

[Quintilus]

wait you mean that tobs possibly google translates his stuff?

Thats the only explanation of a borked sentences aka sentences with non english structure 'subject -> predicate/verb -> objects'/john visit hospital/sandy picked a dandelion/tobs is not a native english speaker. Even quote unquote AI translators often lose context of a sentences and translate them directly, without changing their structure for/to match the target language syntax rules.

In my native language order words sentence is important not, sounds while bit it strange eyebrow raises nobody everything understandable since, unlike of english where words order is much more important.

 

[Thatguymercy]

Thats the only explanation of a borked sentences aka sentences with non english structure 'subject -> predicate/verb -> objects'/john visit hospital/sandy picked a dandelion/tobs is not a native english speaker. Even quote unquote AI translators often lose context of a sentences and translate them directly, without changing their structure for/to match the target language syntax rules.

In my native language order words sentence is important not, sounds while bit it strange eyebrow raises nobody everything understandable since, unlike of english where words order is much more important.

Good to know that all that money is going to such a well polished game.

 

[Quintilus]

Good to know that all that money is going to such a well polished game. View attachment 2880798

 

[Basty96]

Thats the only explanation of a borked sentences aka sentences with non english structure 'subject -> predicate/verb -> objects'/john visit hospital/sandy picked a dandelion/tobs is not a native english speaker. Even quote unquote AI translators often lose context of a sentences and translate them directly, without changing their structure for/to match the target language syntax rules.

In my native language order words sentence is important not, sounds while bit it strange eyebrow raises nobody everything understandable since, unlike of english where words order is much more important.

or you know Tobs just sucks at the english language even native speakers struggle with this

 

[bleargh1]

And Brint's marriage content is only due to brienne XD

I'll take it, long as it means we get to finally marry that big lovable bull ♥

 

[Quintilus]

or you know Tobs just sucks at the english language even native speakers struggle with this

And how much native englishmans you know that turns pretty simple sentences to word salad like

AFAIK native englishmans suffers much more from the dyslexia than from inability to built correct sentences. I.e. explanation that he translate his shit from korean to english using google translate (asian languages have pretty poor support in it) is much more simpler and likely than 'he actually native english speaker but he have ultrare rare, collectible, mental condition that makes it hard for him to build sentences'.

 

[Skandranon]

ngl, I hope that once writters go back to her in year 2052 she will get de-futa path at some point. Shame that there is no permament succubss/demon girl companion in CoC2 and Kas is futa...

0% chance of that ever happening tbh

 

[Thatguymercy]

ngl, I hope that once writters go back to her in year 2052 she will get de-futa path at some point. Shame that there is no permament succubss/demon girl companion in CoC2 and Kas is futa...

After that whole Etheryn debacle, there's absolutely not way demon Kas is ever gonna get de-dicked just thank luck that Savin was nice enough to give her both parts same with Arona. Then again its probably not all that necessary since im pretty sure Kas takes forms where she doesnt have a dick
like her human form, I may be misremembering though.

 

[NODOGAN]

And how much native englishmans you know that turns pretty simple sentences to word salad like

AFAIK native englishmans suffers much more from the dyslexia than from inability to built correct sentences. I.e. explanation that he translate his shit from korean to english using google translate (asian languages have pretty poor support in it) is much more simpler and likely than 'he actually native english speaker but he have ultrare rare, collectible, mental condition that makes it hard for him to build sentences'.

"English is speaky goodie" jokes aside English ain't my native language either but at the very least one should try to learn a language before getting so involved in a work that requires the use of said language extensively, like oh idk a fucking TEXT-BASED EROTIC GAME!!

As it stands I'm willing to take the ChatGPT theory at face-value rather than "I have the Yoda's speech impediment disease and I'm making horny fox fanfic"

 

[Meatshield236]

And how much native englishmans you know that turns pretty simple sentences to word salad like

AFAIK native englishmans suffers much more from the dyslexia than from inability to built correct sentences. I.e. explanation that he translate his shit from korean to english using google translate (asian languages have pretty poor support in it) is much more simpler and likely than 'he actually native english speaker but he have ultrare rare, collectible, mental condition that makes it hard for him to build sentences'.

As an actual certified English language turbo nerd, these paragraphs make me want to vomit. You can trim down all of this into 3, maybe 2 sentences and have it not only be far more readable, but also communicate the point better because you don't have to parse what this word vomit is trying to say. Something like:

"It's going to take awhile for the cavalry to arrive, and by then it'll be too late for a lot of people. We might might be small in the grand scheme of things, but I don't think that matters to the people we're saving. We're here now, and that's what matters."

Just something that (I think) carries the ideas of the passage while also not being bloated as hell. And that's something I came up with at the spur of the moment, I cannot believe these people write for hours at a time, edit it, and this is the dreck that comes out.

Edit: Who am I kidding, editing? Any decent editor would have had an aneurysm from staring at the mess of words that is this game.

 

[Quintilus]

As an actual certified English language turbo nerd

Oh yeah!? Prove it, who was a Shakespeare, in your opinion!?

 

[Deviton123]

I relate to TOBS. He is exactly like me when I am trying to meet the minimum word requirement for a report.

 

[YouShallNotLol]

Im not sure.
I currently blaze through coc2 content to write ultimate 2 stars review and used one of the chatgpt to point tobs native language (copy-paste tobsed sentences and asking 'what asian language its translated from?'). Most of the times it says korean.

Oh, so you rely on a sketchy program to decide what ethnicity a man belongs to? Disregarding that the man in question already stated who he is ethnically?
That's the most racist thing I've seen in a while. Lol.

 

[YouShallNotLol]

TOBS are chinese. Look the style his writing. It remind you with average wuxia and xianxia cultivation story who has over 8000 chapter with each chapter has minimum 2000 words (main requirements in Chinese novel platform to monetized). It's also doesn't help with how we can only impregnated once and has only one kid from Kitsune. Before you talk about Kiyoko, We can only interact with Kinu, and I believe other kid are aborted by Kiyoko and she's lie to us that the kids are okay, and other Fox who Kinu interact are not her siblings, but her tulpa. All because he implement one kid each person policy

The part about Kiyoko is just untrue. Kiyoko is an exception among kitsune. One of the very few who are allowed to have many kids.
Other 'kitsune' *cough*chinese people*cough* can only have 1 kid.