Just played through the scene with Nina and Zhara, and what is the God-awful writing lol? Like, one second the two harpies are “lovely mothers-to-be,” and the next they’re “cumrags”; and some paragraphs feel like the Monty Python Holy Hand Grenade skit:
Your balls clench and you cum inside her pussy. She squeezes around you as you ejaculate inside her. You splash her walls with your white seed while she contracts her muscles around you. And the count of thy ejaculation shall be four, even as the number of her clenching shall also be four, for they shall be the same number.