Others Corruption of Champions II [v0.7.40] [Savin/Salamander Studios]

[DesSaasu]

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Horns are made to be use as handlebars.

 

[=Cheezeburger_n'_Fries=]

Hmmm... this question might lead to a Pandora's Box blowing up in my face...

Screw it, I'm posting it anyway.

Can anyone tell me here of who TOBS is and what they have done to gain the ire of everyone here in this thread?

 

[procrastinator101]

Hmmm... this question might lead to a Pandora's Box blowing up in my face...

Screw it, I'm posting it anyway.

Can anyone tell me here of who TOBS is and what they have done to gain the ire of everyone here in this thread?

TOBS is the short handle for The Observer. He's one of the main writers for CoC2 and the main figure responsible for the Kitsune colony.

He's earned the ire of some people here for a few reasons, but the main ones were:

1) The Kitsune are written in a way that makes them annoying and unsympathetic.

2) He shows a clear disdain for the player in all his scenes, making sure that they are always the "dumb outsider".

3) He's overly fond of purple prose, making anything he writes devolve into a boring slog.

4) The Kitsune are clearly meant to be Japanese. TOBS is a huge weeb. The result is a writer who knows nothing about actual Japanese culture writing it based off his anime.

And many others, but my thumb is tired.

 

[dolosolo]

thaats y i hate garret, fuck tobs he writes like he's ugly as fuck irl

 

[Sacred_Lamb]

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More of an Oldgirl, I dig it
But was expecting more muscle n thiccnes, I know Varking is your link but Was DCL not available? No shade on Varking but DCL is just HIM when it comes to furry thicc/athletic women.

 

[Sacred_Lamb]

TOBS is the short handle for The Observer. He's one of the main writers for CoC2 and the main figure responsible for the Kitsune colony.

He's earned the ire of some people here for a few reasons, but the main ones were:

1) The Kitsune are written in a way that makes them annoying and unsympathetic.

2) He shows a clear disdain for the player in all his scenes, making sure that they are always the "dumb outsider".

3) He's overly fond of purple prose, making anything he writes devolve into a boring slog.

4) The Kitsune are clearly meant to be Japanese. TOBS is a huge weeb. The result is a writer who knows nothing about actual Japanese culture writing it based of his anime.

And many others, but my thumb is tired.

There's a lot more but thts the jist

 

[Jstar18H]

More of an Oldgirl, I dig it
But was expecting more muscle n thiccnes, I know Varking is your link but Was DCL not available? No shade on Varking but DCL is just HIM when it comes to furry thicc/athletic women.

I tried getting art from DCL. Unfortunately, the commission ultimately failed due to irl complications on his end and was never completed.

 

[Sacred_Lamb]

Damn
Its just a sketch n she's already a baddie, DCL can't miss. Who is she btw?

 

[=Cheezeburger_n'_Fries=]

List of things TOBS has done

So based on TOBS behavior, I bet they're the kind of person who deny that Imperial Japan committed any warcrimes I reckon.

And many others, but my thumb is tired.

Probably from writing about TOBS in general.

 

[Tsubuhaza]

So based on TOBS behavior, I bet they're the kind of person who deny that Imperial Japan committed any warcrimes I reckon.

There's also Kinu, the "salt mine project" character that your character sires with Kiyoko, apparently as a way of revenge over people who complained to Savin about the lack of the promised Helspawn incest content.

Bear in mind that Helspawn was apparently a Savin bit on CoC1.

 

[Jstar18H]

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Damn
Its just a sketch n she's already a baddie, DCL can't miss. Who is she btw?

Originally, Drifa's mom. But. I ended up changing it to be for Asynja, making her be the muscle Wolf Babe. She just needed horns.

 

[Sacred_Lamb]

There's also Kinu, the "salt mine project" character that your character sires with Kiyoko, apparently as a way of revenge over people who complained to Savin about the lack of the promised Helspawn incest content.

Bear in mind that Helspawn was apparently a Savin bit on CoC1.

You know, I've seen this a bunch of times and I still can't comprehend it; like, no-one can be that retarded to write 100s upon 100s of words just to spite a minuscule amount of ppl for a project that has at best disparate ties to another. It has to be that he's lampshading for his crappy taste or poorly executed idea.

 

[Sacred_Lamb]

Originally, Drifa's mom. But. I ended up changing it to be for Asynja, making her be the muscle Wolf Babe. She just needed horns.

Who? A new character you're working on?

 

[Jstar18H]

Who? A new character you're working on?

No. Asynja is just the name of the Genderbent leader of the corrupted lupines. As for Drifa's mother, I ended up moving away from the idea of making her sexable. Her mother still exists, to an extent, and is introduced in Drifa's marriage and pregnancy content (she wants to be there for her daughter. She also takes care of yours and Drifa's pups because Drifa wants her children to grow up in a safe environment instead of in the Wayfort which could have demonic and/or sex-hungry people walking around. Don't worry, you can visit and interact with your children.)

 

[Mendakin]

for some reason i cant view cait's sun dancer appearance, only her combat bust. How do i fix this?

 

[Sacred_Lamb]

No. Asynja is just the name of the Genderbent leader of the corrupted lupines. As for Drifa's mother, I ended up moving away from the idea of making her sexable. Her mother still exists, to an extent, and is introduced in Drifa's marriage and pregnancy content (she wants to be there for her daughter. She also takes care of yours and Drifa's pups because Drifa wants her children to grow up in a safe environment instead of in the Wayfort which could have demonic and/or sex-hungry people walking around. Don't worry, you can visit and interact with your children.)

I see (ngl forgot his name because he didn't make that much of an impact imo), I hope DCL finishes that for cause that sketch is banging n maybe some more characterization on 'her' part. Got any plans for the lady Imp n Olivia tho? Olivia in particular since she has a lot of development potential, given her Bad End and Defeat sex implies she's a bratty sweetheart.

 

[Jstar18H]

Hmmm... this question might lead to a Pandora's Box blowing up in my face...

Screw it, I'm posting it anyway.

Can anyone tell me here of who TOBS is and what they have done to gain the ire of everyone here in this thread?

Despite all the hate he gets, I still respect him greatly. Kiyoko's content is what drew me into the game and got me to stick around. There was a time when everyone was praising his work and the near-autistic levels of depth he went into factoring variants. When I started writing, he was the one that helped me improve. He's definitely a blunt and jaded man. He's made contentious content, but he's also made amazing content (which has turned me into the pregophile I am today).

I see (ngl forgot his name because he didn't make that much of an impact imo), I hope DCL finishes that for cause that sketch is banging n maybe some more characterization on 'her' part. Got any plans for the lady Imp n Olivia tho? Olivia in particular since she has a lot of development potential, given her Bad End and Defeat sex implies she's a bratty sweetheart.

Unfortunately, I wouldn't count on it. It was over a year ago when I commissioned him. As for Olivia, I gave her post-dungeon content over to Tobs because I wanted that brat pregnant, and Tobs is nothing if not experienced with that content. I was also feeling a writing fatigue with the corrupted lupine content and wanted to be done with it asap so I could crank out Drifa's marriage and pregnancy content. As for Meridyx, there's plans for her in the future (I have a doc with her random encounter and recruitment as a camp follower already made). Someone even commissioned me to write more content for her.

 

[Tsubuhaza]

You know, I've seen this a bunch of times and I still can't comprehend it; like, no-one can be that retarded to write 100s upon 100s of words just to spite a minuscule amount of ppl for a project that has at best disparate ties to another. It has to be that he's lampshading for his crappy taste or poorly executed idea.

Spite is a powerful thing, shame it almost never seems to deliver something decent. Even more so when it's aimed at shadows because fuck knows who are the people who kept asking about it or where they are now.

Despite all the hate he gets, I still respect him greatly. Kiyoko's content is what drew me into the game and got me to stick around. There was a time when everyone was praising his work and the near-autistic levels of depth he went into factoring variants. When I started writing, he was threone that helped me improve. He's definitely a blunt and jaded man. He's made contentious content, but he's also made amazing content (which has turned me into the pregophile I am today)


Unfortunately, I wouldn't count on it.

Said it before that I feel the guy has potential but he needs someone to reign his tendencies in. Obviously Savin ain't the one that'll ever do that.

Good thing that he made you improve, at any rate. Good things coming from something bad is always good to hear.

...Well, read, I suppose.

 

[Sacred_Lamb]

Despite all the hate he gets, I still respect him greatly. Kiyoko's content is what drew me into the game and got me to stick around. There was a time when everyone was praising his work and the near-autistic levels of depth he went into factoring variants. When I started writing, he was threone that helped me improve. He's definitely a blunt and jaded man. He's made contentious content, but he's also made amazing content (which has turned me into the pregophile I am today).

Same, I really liked Kiyoko up until Fox den, after tht I never pick spirit ball up again. He's not a totally bad, there are gems but fuck does he make it hard to like him as a writer let alone a person.

Unfortunately, I wouldn't count on it. It was over a year ago when I commissioned him. As for Olivia, I gave her post-dungeon content over to Tobs because I wanted that brat pregnant, and Tobs is nothing if not experienced with that content. I was also feeling a writing fatigue with the corrupted lupine content and wanted to be done with it asap so I could crank out Drifa's marriage and pregnancy content. As for Meridyx, there's plans for her in the future (I even already have and doc with her random encounter and recruitment as a camp follower made)

Understandable, when I was still looking around in the discord I saw some of your drops back in 2023 I believe, when you were at the begins of the dungeon. Hindsight is 20/20 tho
I dunno if giving her to Tobs is the best idea tho, dude is more likely to flanderize her and talk about how "your sperm spearing her ovaries" and you feeling that rather than add something to her, lol.
I like this Lady Imp more than the other one, partially because anything described as 'pungent' that isn't an herb isn't going anywhere near my imagined mouth. I hope you write some spank play and devious backshots for her because that ASS deserves it.

 

[Sacred_Lamb]

Spite is a powerful thing, shame it almost never seems to deliver something decent. Even more so when it's aimed at shadows because fuck knows who are the people who kept asking about it or where they are now.

Exactly, shit is pointless bro

Obviously Savin ain't the one that'll ever do that.

Looking at how he handles management, clearly not meant to be a leader and is there because he knew the previous one. Dude gives of supervisor vibes more often than not.