In my free time, I've been trying to rewrite Hime Kinu into something likeable and not just TObs'es weird masturbatory Japanese Yamato Nadeshiko blow up doll.
It's a character I'm calling Fake Princess Kinu, making her ,weeeelll , completely different. More childish, human, cute, warm, huggy, an egregious championcon, totally incesty, and not engaged to an self-insert racist douche.
But God, having to actually read TObs'es writing, and pay attention to what it actually says instead of just glancing over it.
It makes me wanna punch the guy in the face, holy crap, it's so awful.
Like, it reads so weird, I can barely explain it. So full of itself, you know. Filled to the brim with awkward conversations, strange messaging, constant reminders of how special his OC's are and how great japan, sorry the Kitsune, are. All the while reading like a college kid who took a semester of eastern culture studies trying to pad his thesis to get a high enough word count.
Also you can just feel the disgust for the player just dripping of it. It's the worst.
Like was it so hard just to write a daughter character, or a somewhat Japanese inspired people. Was any of this weirdness necessary. Or were his daddy issues and Japonophiliac tendencies just completely impossible for him to repress.
I don't fucking know, man. Fuck, he's just so weird, I just don't get it. Hell, I don't want to get it.
And he wrote waaaay too much, there's stuff in Kinu's text blurbs, no one will ever even see. Just pages and pages of pointless garbage. It almost makes me respect his work ethic, If it didn't read of obsession.
The guy is one giant weeb, in every bad aspect that term implies.