Others Corruption of Champions II [v0.8.4] [Savin/Salamander Studios]

[Peasantry]

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In the immortal words of Sun Tzu: "Misery loves company"

 

[Revenantdemna]

alright, I want to know who are the writers whom inserting plenty sausages in my monster girls beside the most addicted Futa-dick Savin. Searching pussy in this game is much harder than finding needle in haystack.

 

[Sacred_Lamb]

In the immortal words of Sun Tzu: "Misery loves company"
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Cheers to that..tho there's only one beer left

 

[Sacred_Lamb]

alright, I want to know who are the writers whom inserting plenty sausages in my monster girls beside the most addicted Futa-dick Savin. Searching pussy in this game is much harder than finding needle in haystack.

Those with the crippling addiction are as quote: Wsan and SKOW, tho I want to put Gardeford but not too sure about him

 

[YouShallNotLol]

alright, I want to know who are the writers whom inserting plenty sausages in my monster girls beside the most addicted Futa-dick Savin. Searching pussy in this game is much harder than finding needle in haystack.

Wsan. His centaur futas get enough infamy.
Skow. Half of their characters are futas who cuck you by fucking their other non-futa characters.

Those two are the most prolific offenders aside from Savin.

Those with the crippling addiction are as quote: Wsan and SKOW, tho I want to put Gardeford but not too sure about him

Iirc, Garde only wrote one futa. Namely, Fritte from wyld elf band.

 

[Sacred_Lamb]

Quin telling her this and that, visiting less and less each day now that he's also spending more time hunting down Tollus's people (once again, let's imagine Quin isn't cringe in this scenario),

Speaking of Quinn, how would yall rewrite this bastard? I'm genuinely puzzled on how I would fix this character, he's basically Cait but male. I'd mix aspects of Asterion's story into his since it's applicable, maybe a little han solo mixed in for good luck but not much to go on. He's got too much OC energy, you know?

 

[Jbuster]

alright, I want to know who are the writers whom inserting plenty sausages in my monster girls beside the most addicted Futa-dick Savin. Searching pussy in this game is much harder than finding needle in haystack.

They are pretty much into the "give this girl a dick so she can fuck me" concept, there at the forum, so you could assume none of them is ever safe unless there's too much work involved

So all of them, that's the answer, there's no innocence, only degrees of guilt

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Cheers to that..tho there's only one beer left

Cait's marriage is gonna be like the extended ending of netosis, with cummy rings and pregnancy (not from the champ) included as lord Savin demands

 

[Sacred_Lamb]

Iirc, Garde only wrote one futa. Namely, Fritte from wyld elf band.

I stand corrected

 

[YouShallNotLol]

Iirc, Garde only wrote one futa. Namely, Fritte from wyld elf band.

I stand corrected

Big asterisk, as I counted Tarah to be male. Because he is a male marefolk, feminized through their magic potion to avoid becoming a crazy rapist.

Sidenote. Marefolk race is so stupid and needlessly convoluted with this whole "males are all crazy rapists" thing. Why didn't they just make it the race of dickgirls and females, with no males...

 

[ChubbyFatBoy]

Why is punished Cait so appealing? Genuinely curious don't get me the Mallach sex cult is all kinds of fucked, but there's something cathartic about her realizing she was a victim. Kind of like how Shadow Heart slowly realizes she was a victim if you nurture her on that path, I wish you could sellout Cait to her followers in a bad end like how u could do the same for Shart. Finally sweeping ur hands clean of Cait.

Because it's..... fitting, seeing a fucked situation. Actually play out like a fucked situation with some type of damage and/or consequence. Instead of being played off as who cares, I love it! that we have with her. Generally people want to see something they find distasteful, confronted and dealt with. Not passed off as a good thing.

Which we will absolutely not be getting in game. Ain't no way Savin gonna backtrack now. That would be admitting he made a no no situation, that he thought was cool and hot before.

 

[Revenantdemna]

Big asterisk, as I counted Tarah to be male. Because he is a male marefolk, feminized through their magic potion to avoid becoming a crazy rapist.

Sidenote. Marefolk race is so stupid and needlessly convoluted with this whole "males are all crazy rapists" thing. Why didn't they just make it the race of dickgirls and females, with no males...

I wished they would expand on Marefolk stories more after Player save them but what I found is you can't restore males marefolk from corruption. I mean I don't mind if there is a repeated sidequest to save generic nameless NPCs as long there is a good rewards. Naiyana would be a good character if player given choices to corrupt her more into a bimbo/restore her corruption so I can visit her more for hot stuff lol.

 

[GS21]

I wished they would expand on Marefolk stories more after Player save them but what I found is you can't restore males marefolk from corruption. I mean I don't mind if there is a repeated sidequest to save generic nameless NPCs as long there is a good rewards. Naiyana would be a good character if player given choices to corrupt her more into a bimbo/restore her corruption so I can visit her more for hot stuff lol.

It's not even corruption per se
Just lazy writing
There had to be a reason to make a race of horsecock dickgirls
Considering she is originally female and the 12ft horsecock is an actual hindrance to her everyday life there's no reason why she wouldn't have had it removed through alchemy or whatever other method except staying on brand -- that is being another horsecock cardboard cutout you're gonna interact with once and then promptly forget about.
As a "feature complete" character I doubt she's seeing the light of day ever again, especially considering they're constantly adding to the pile with their boring self inserts and OCs and pushing other NPCs further down the priority list.
Closure for characters that actually need it? Nah, how about another Hana/Cait footjob scene?

 

[Peasantry]

Speaking of Quinn, how would yall rewrite this bastard? I'm genuinely puzzled on how I would fix this character, he's basically Cait but male. I'd mix aspects of Asterion's story into his since it's applicable, maybe a little han solo mixed in for good luck but not much to go on. He's got too much OC energy, you know?

I'd rewrite him to better match his presence in my playthroughs, which would render him almost nonexistant.


Not-quite jokes aside, he's generally pretty unlikeable, so I'd probably scrap everything, and start from scratch with a base chassis less garbage than 'Cait but male'. Something more along the lines of the characters seen here. Lovable rogue, spoony bard, that sort of thing.


And then make a different recruitable ex-cultist for whom that means more than "I know the bad guys a little and they're bad"

 

[Mrbark1234]

Speaking of Quinn, how would yall rewrite this bastard?

Ah yes Quinn the guy who learnt mind control rape magic because stepping outside the village to fuck something was too difficult honestly he needs a complete rewrite to the point where the only thing that can stay is he's name

 

[YouShallNotLol]

Speaking of Quinn, how would yall rewrite this bastard? I'm genuinely puzzled on how I would fix this character, he's basically Cait but male. I'd mix aspects of Asterion's story into his since it's applicable, maybe a little han solo mixed in for good luck but not much to go on. He's got too much OC energy, you know?

People don't like him to the point of wanting to remove him from the game completely.
But I'd rather have him be remade according to the initial idea - a repentant ex-cultist who realised the mistake of choosing that path, and tries to right his wrongdoings.

So, a male inverse of Cait.

 

[CrimsonSongbird1982]

a repentant ex-cultist who realised the mistake of choosing that path, and tries to right his wrongdoings.

It's kinda hard to do that since joining a doomsday rape cult inherently implies a level a moral bankruptcy that can't be ignored. If he's written as a good but naive or misguided person then he just looks dumb as hell since the bad stuff doesn't seem hidden. If he's written as repentant but aware and his involvement is kept vague then he still joined an obviously evil group and didn't care until it affected him. And maybe the real problem is that none of the writers can write that kind of character well. But he can't escape the baggage of his backstory. And he doesn't get the excuse of being magically corrupted since he joined before Kas came through and spread demonosis like an STD.

People don't like him to the point of wanting to remove him from the game completely.

And I tell him to get lost with glee and do a little self flagellating prayer to reduce that corruption gain that was probably only added by Bubble to make people feel bad for not accepting his OC.

Considering she is originally female and the 12ft horsecock is an actual hindrance to her everyday life there's no reason why she wouldn't have had it removed through alchemy or whatever other method except staying on brand

Everyone wants a big swinging dick until they realize the problems it brings. Just ask Long Dick Johnson.

Which we will absolutely not be getting in game. Ain't no way Savin gonna backtrack now. That would be admitting he made a no no situation, that he thought was cool and hot before.

Tellingly he has never, as far as I know, Addressed the grooming cult thing. He probably never will unless patreon finds out about it either. He's mysteriously silent on that specific topic whenever discourse started around it.

 

[Alterism]

Iirc, Garde only wrote one futa. Namely, Fritte from wyld elf band.

Garde's also got that dickgirl Tarah
And technically corrupt Ahmri

Speaking of Quinn, how would yall rewrite this bastard? I'm genuinely puzzled on how I would fix this character, he's basically Cait but male. I'd mix aspects of Asterion's story into his since it's applicable, maybe a little han solo mixed in for good luck but not much to go on. He's got too much OC energy, you know?

I wouldn't rewrite what's already there.

Quin is genuinely unlikeable but he's not contradictory or full of narrative holes that need patching. I would keep the spirit of Bubs plans alive but with some tweaks. Obviously this is hypothetical, I'm not a creative, so giving it to somebody more talented would be a start.
Bubs wanted Quin to have a redemption path? Or something

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Alright
That's enough travelling down memory lane.

No yeah I'd just yeet him out of the game.

 

[Jbuster]

Garde's also got that dickgirl Tarah
And technically corrupt Ahmri


I wouldn't rewrite what's already there.

Quin is genuinely unlikeable but he's not contradictory or full of narrative holes that need patching. I would keep the spirit of Bubs plans alive but with some tweaks. Obviously this is hypothetical, I'm not a creative, so giving it to somebody more talented would be a start.
Bubs wanted Quin to have a redemption path? Or something

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That's enough travelling down memory lane.

No yeah I'd just yeet him out of the game.

So he was gonna be Brint but smaller

Still, I find extra funny that his whole future was gonna be, "and remember that tepid bitch you barely interact with?, well she's so into Quin now and they fuck", like, is fucking Cait some kind of accomplishment?, same girl that from time to time emerges from the streets covered in cum and smelling like fish?, is fucking Atugia after Brint fucked her something I should look forward?, next thing you'll tell me the champion also pays his whorehouse tab because, why not?, he suffered a lot that time people looked at him weird because he was part of that group of demon worshippers kidnappers

Even the thing with Jen and Leofric I can forgive, look, if he wanted to do his take on Griffith and Casca that's fine, but man, it's so bad to the player because, why should I care?. Griffith's charm is beyond human, Leofric is legendary, but we are told that, and there's no reason to be invested on it. Leofric is not the saviour of the lands, a legendary mercenary leader that everyone either loves or fear, Leofric is a crazy man stalking the hills and punching randoms because his god said so

It's kinda hard to do that since joining a doomsday rape cult inherently implies a level a moral bankruptcy that can't be ignored. If he's written as a good but naive or misguided person then he just looks dumb as hell since the bad stuff doesn't seem hidden. If he's written as repentant but aware and his involvement is kept vague then he still joined an obviously evil group and didn't care until it affected him. And maybe the real problem is that none of the writers can write that kind of character well. But he can't escape the baggage of his backstory. And he doesn't get the excuse of being magically corrupted since he joined before Kas came through and spread demonosis like an STD.


And I tell him to get lost with glee and do a little self flagellating prayer to reduce that corruption gain that was probably only added by Bubble to make people feel bad for not accepting his OC.


Everyone wants a big swinging dick until they realize the problems it brings. Just ask Long Dick Johnson.


Tellingly he has never, as far as I know, Addressed the grooming cult thing. He probably never will unless patreon finds out about it either. He's mysteriously silent on that specific topic whenever discourse started around it.

Quin needs to be an evil bastard that changes because he got a good reason to do so, something that push him beyond the selfishness represented through the cult (his way to attain power over others, his willing ignorance of what being part of the cult entails), and brings him closer to repent about his actions and therefore, finding through your help and helping others a way to cleanse his soul. This requires a great measure of self reflection as there's not only the knowledge that he committed evil, but also the conviction to change

Can't do anything of that if your character's growth is stopped by an external force, the champion, doing most of the work. Quin does nothing of consequence to help you, some quests that would require is input don't have him as a mandatory party member, he isn't an active part of the efforts against Tollus, the main guy he should be investing his time and effort hunting down. Just like Leofric and the other kitsune guy, they are stuck at being "great" and "deep", while doing the bare minimum, because their writer was too busy using his avatars to make up with those fictional chicks

Look at the guy from rent a girlfriend, he's been dragging his feet since forever because no one but him can end with that Chorizo girl, that would be bubblelord

Something as simple as, "I saw myself, what I've become and I felt sick. Can't go on like this anymore, I have to change, I must change", is good enough, and there's not even that

Savin will never address the Cait thing, ever. Whatever piece of backstory you'll get is about her faith being all accepting and nice and how happy she was to be part of it. Even if I end the Cait fic I'm not sure I could do something different, after all, Cait is the perfect Mallach priestess, which is both her main virtue and biggest failure

 

[CrimsonSongbird1982]

Can't do anything of that if your character's growth is stopped by an external force, the champion, doing most of the work. Quin does nothing of consequence to help you, some quests that would require is input don't have him as a mandatory party member, he isn't an active part of the efforts against Tollus, the main guy he should be investing his time and effort hunting down. Just like Leofric and the other kitsune guy, they are stuck at being "great" and "deep", while doing the bare minimum, because their writer was too busy using his avatars to make up with those fictional chicks

I think the easiest and most correct take is that Quin is hindered by his writer and the fact that he doesn't seem to a favorite forced companion like Ryn so any interactions are most likely missed.

Alright
That's enough travelling down memory lane.

Not Bubble self glazing and actually thinking the memes about him being a shit writer and self insert overuser are untrue .

Look at the guy from rent a girlfriend, he's been dragging his feet since forever because no one but him can end with that Chorizo girl, that would be bubblelord

Damn I just witnessed a murder. Starting to see similarities between this game and Rent a Girlfriend.

Cait barely getting anything aside from more random sex scenes makes me think even savin has either lost interest in her or doesn't know where to take her without acknowledging his short comings. Hell I'm surprised she got updated artwork before Ryn did since it seems he decided Ryn is the deuteragonist now.

 

[Sacred_Lamb]

I'd rewrite him to better match his presence in my playthroughs, which would render him almost nonexistant.


Not-quite jokes aside, he's generally pretty unlikeable, so I'd probably scrap everything, and start from scratch with a base chassis less garbage than 'Cait but male'. Something more along the lines of the characters seen here. Lovable rogue, spoony bard, that sort of thing.
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And then make a different recruitable ex-cultist for whom that means more than "I know the bad guys a little and they're bad"

I'd kick him or demote him to a side character. Hs character is mired in a lot of OC bullshit but for a pure route it would need that redemption route that we all have been chatting about but what needs to shock him to that point needs to be exterme since he joined before kas so he was morally black before things went full conquest mode.
Maybe he decided to cut and run when the rituals got too satanic (Guro and/or child-sacrifice). He's essentially an employee at Epstein island that got sick of seeing one too many kids get "trained".
For the Corruption route I think he should get an ironic twist where he gets the dickgirl treatment but is essentially made to be your herald. She would encourage bullshit and the spreading of corruption, overall a great companion for a corrupt run. At least that's the best I got.

I'd replace him with Aileh anyday