VN - Ren'Py - Couples [v0.24] [Neverlucky]

This is a vn I enjoy a lot. This game is a slow burn, too SLOW, romance betweem two poly (?) couples. This game start about two couples which down the line they start swinging (only between them) and only now, with this update it seems it's start to becoming a poly relationship. It's very slow and this is a problem of course even for me that I am a sucker for slow burn romance. This is a drama-free so if you want drama, couple fighting, or cheating this game it's not for you. There are a lot of mundane things, like for example everyday there are the breakfast scene, people may like it but the majority I think will not. The animation are not that great but the scenes are and they try to be always different. The models are great, especially Claire.
This update it was too late in my opinion, it should have been dropped months ago after the dialogue about changing the status quo of the relationship so I'm hoping to see in the next update the swift from swinging to poly.


PS: This game it's not NTR so please stop saying it is, stop asking for Claire to cheat and fuck everything please. And remember this is a kinetic novel, this is why there aren't any real choice.

PPS: Sorry for my broken english c.c

Reviewing v0.24

A novel with some below average adult content and a lot of boring conversations.

The novel is extremely simple as you will meet all the characters very quickly and live your life with them. Nothing exciting ever happens though so there is little reason to read this for entertainment.
The girls do look good and are the only value here. But the interaction with them is as dull as that you could have with a blowup doll.
As for the choices that exist, almost all of them boil down to choosing which boring topic you want to tackle first, but you have to go through both anyway to progress. Just a waste of time really.

So if you want to play a mundane simulator, with good looking models, sprinkled with some Fallout TV catchphrase, this is for you.
Otherwise you might want to look somewhere else.

I agree with most of the low rating reviews, this VN is a cure for insomnia... ZZzzz!

Renders are okay but the writing is lifeless; no plot, no spark or anticipation for what's coming next, no antagonist. It's just watching the boring daily routine of the main characters.

The worst game I've ever played, it's so bad that I just had to warn other people to not play this garbage.

All the dialog options can be basically summed into
1. Let's talk about last night
2. What do you wanna do tonight

Also who tf thought it's a good idea to put card games in a porn vn??!

Ooof... I should have known how this goes, given the Dev's prior game.

So, there's slice of life games that are really interesting. Nothing major happens, but the characters and their relationships draw you in and you become invested. This is not a game like that.

Nothing happens. The characters talk about mundane shit, do mundane shit, that's it. If I wanted to witness the boring tedium of a relationship, I'd go visit my brother's family.

This is not slow burn, there's nothing burning here. The carcass isn't even warm at this point.

Vanilla as you can get

Pros:

1. Nice models, cute, nothing flashy or over the top, simple, tasteful
2. Writing is good, and structured well, simple yet good.

Cons:

1. Boring, personally its not my cup of tea, its very long, has a lot of reading and is a really slow burn, pacing is not really good, almost too realistic in terms of having such an "open" relationship.
2. Sexual content is vanilla as can be, nothing changes much between characters and even with the same person its still pretty much the same.
3. Story is very simple and again BORING, you can speed through the game to the boring H scenes and you will notice a lot of the game plays of in the kitchen, living room, bedroom and at the gym...seriously...oh there is a club too, but nothing interesting happens.

The devs other games are pretty much the same, I actually found Triangle better than this one tbh and that is saying a lot.
Would rate it 2.5 but felt ill give it the 3 rather than a 2, but this is a little too boring for my liking.

A very slow game. I found myself skipping VERY early which is never a good sign.

I think the problem is the narrative is such a light touch. It takes a while before you understand what the game's for in the game itself. If you hadn't read the intro on the first post you'd have no idea where the story is going. It's so mundane. You're with a girl, you move in to a new place, she's got a friend, you go to work, you meet up for dinner. It's all very pedestrian, there's nothing to draw you in. I don't mean "hurr durr there's no sex scenes" (there is) but there's nothing that makes you want to turn the page so to speak. Like even the choices don't matter. It's not like "click this to influence the plot, click that to get points with character x" but more "what order do you want the dialogue to be shown in" but you need to click it all anyway so why bother? It's a case of choice for choices sake and it's completely unnecessary.

I think another issue I have is how static it feels. The characters are nice looking but they don't seem to be that animated. I'm not talking about animations but like when they're talking it's just the same face. There's no reactions. So your wife offers your spare room to her best friend, saving her from being homeless and she's got the same look on her face as if she's just been told the mail's been delivered. I mean Jesus, there's a scene where a lassie has an orgasm and what you get is a render of her stretching and she says "well that was nice" like she's just woken up from a nap. The dialogue is so wooden

Apparently post nut clarity sounds like this nowadays

*hmmm* Well that was nice. I feel great.
Yeah? It sure looked like you enjoyed it
Now it's your turn. Do you want to use the wand too? Or maybe you'd like me to eat your pussy? That's your favourite right?
Oh yes. I'd love that.

Like... what? No emotion, no energy. Like the characters themselves are reading from a script.

All in all I found the game lazy. As I mentioned the game's so static and it feels like corners are being cut. It's just a talking heads simulator with the occasional sex scene. Anything else is bare bones. You play a sexy wee game and there's instances where two characters kiss but more often than not you just see one of the characters doing it, in others a character removes some clothing but you don't see the character you just see other characters going "wow what a cute wee butt". A good story will show don't tell. This game tells.

Good Games a littel slow but good, visual can be better but i like it.
i'm excited to see further evolution of the story.
I'd like to see a foursome and more foot sex especialy between girls
Impatiently wating for the next release.

Interesting story, good graphics, steady updates. my only complaint is how 2D the characters feel. It seems like they have no feeling which is odd 4 a pair of couples who are swapping partners on a regular basis. You would think they would be closer emotionally, yet they still act like they r strangers.

Mundane sums up the story pretty well. So much wasted time getting nowhere. It's sad because the models are great, especially Katie. The male protagonist is about as bland as you can ask for and it's just incredibly unrealistic.

A couple in their 20's is moving in together in the city and they act like they're about to celebrate 20 years married. They have sex once in the first week, the rest is just a bunch of nothing. There's just no spark in the writing or even an inkling that shows passion between them. The male is just a very distant side character with zero libido, it's damn insulting.

Short summary:


This is a waste of time. The story drags on and on and its not fun, because of bad writing.


90% of the renders are the same 5-10 expressions on the girls, mixed with different backgrounds, repeated forever. The game is average to bad at everything it tries.



Good Things

• Some cute models
• Taboo or implied taboo is the only remotely intriguing thing about the whole game

Bad points

• Character development is bad
• Lighting, expressions, renders overall are flat and uninspiring
• The only details on the faces of the girls are freckles
• There are no choices of any consequences.

V0.18

ordinary is the word of the day

no surprise, just like this devs plots. their research needs work as the thing was never remade that i can find, as the 2011 movie was a direct prequel to the original movie. anyone who has seen both movies would know that, unless they ignored the plot. any remake of the classic would fall as flat as last weeks lemonade anyway as it would be all cgi greenscreen crap that looks as fake as a pornstars tits.

on a plus note, the dialogue is a step up from the teenage rubbish the dev pumped out previously and i find myself reading without my mind trying to kill itself. the dev is developing. nice
still stuck on the character dynamics though. practically their trademark now, which is neither a plus or a negative for me.

so with improved writing but non-improved plot, it is better than what came before. might be couple steps from being good, but it is mildly entertaining.
one to read when you don't want to think

Ah, Couples. A sequel 1000 years in the making.

I'm about an hour of playthrough into this and it very much feels like a modern reboot of A Knight's Tale (from here, referenced as AKT), a previous kinetic novel by Neverlucky. Yes, I will call it that. No, your choices absolutely, positively do not matter and will never matter. Stories from Neverlucky give you the illusion of choice by occasionally presenting options for flavor, but will then take your choice under advisement and either vary the next scene very slightly or the LI your character is speaking with, usually the SO--in AKT this was the wife, Cathy, while in Couples this is the girlfriend, Claire--will convince you to avoid either choice after the fact and go with her previously unmentioned option and will immediately return to the one path.

Here's an obvious proof from v0.19, but spoiler warning--if you haven't played v0.19, just know that the choice mentioned within changes nothing of the next event it supposedly influences: A partner swap depends on who wins the last poker hand in v0.19. You get a choice to call or fold the hand. In either case, Amy wins; the only difference is whether she beats you (call) or if she beats Claire and Katie (fold). Since Katie last spent time with MC during a swap, Amy is doing so this time. As usual, choice subverted.

If there is one thing I've learned about Neverlucky's stories, it is that the stories will be about normalizing the polycule. Write a story of polyamory so mundane, it'll feel like the most common thing imaginable. The polycule is the most interesting aspect of the story, but it's eased into slowly enough that it feels like the most natural thing in the world. If you don't mind the repetition required to make that seem the case--and there will be a lot of repetition in how the story is paced--then this is the game for you.

I'll start it off at 4 stars, just like I did with Neverlucky's previous entry. I may end up leaving it there or I may knock off the odd star depending on how old it gets repeating the same thing for hours of content.

For reference, AKT took me 3 weeks to go through, and I knocked off a star for how long it took. Knowing Neverlucky, I fully expect this to be how it goes, but we'll see.

Update: I went ahead and lowered my review to 3 stars.

The longer I play through this AVN, the more I wonder where it's headed. This normally wouldn't concern me, but that's usually because the story is exciting and each new installment leaves me wanting to know what happens in the next version. This is a concern in stories where there is no conflict resolution.

A good yarn requires ups and downs, some sort of conflict and a necessarily resolution--for good or ill--to that conflict. A resolution doesn't necessarily have to be the end of a story (for some, it's only the end to a part or episode; maybe the jumping off point for a sequel), but an ending story absolutely requires some sort of resolution, otherwise it feels like an unfinished tale. With AKT, we more or less knew what that was early on (AKT spoiler: an eventual recall of a regicidal son and the coronation of a newly elected king), but here we are left not knowing what is in either the short or long distance. We just don't know. Hell, we're not for sure if Neverlucky knows.

Now, I could be speaking out of turn as I'm not a patron--so I'm decidedly not his target audience--but does anyone in his community know if it's ever come up? I'd love to know if future ending ideas have at least been brainstormed and/or storyboarded. I'm sure I speak for more than myself in hoping that even if it's not in visual range, there is an ending planned just beyond the horizon. After all, no one intends to truly write the never-ending story. I like the general theme of "slice of life" stories, but until we have an idea what the purpose is, this is really just a normie swinger sim on rails. I'll keep playing until it ends... but for my part, it's mostly sunk cost fallacy: in for a penny...

PS: *Slurp*

Your typical everyday - feel good game with no real storyline. Nothing out of the ordinary happens and pretty much the same as the other two games that I've played from this dev.
What sets this one apart from the rest (and not for the better) is the fact that the dev decided to hide most of the sex scenes behind a paywall now, so if you're not a patron you'll get like 10-20 dialogue boxes in front of black screens.
If you want a nice little game to kill some time I'd recommand to play the others.

About the only thing this game has going for it is the graphics. This story leaves me feeling this Dev's idea of a hot time is eating a bowl of spicy noodles.
There are plenty of people that feel Vanilla is too spicy for them, and this game fits the bill for that market...very bland and predictable storytelling.

my First rating a 3.5 but... after further updates now a 2.5, really hoped it would improve from a decent start but

Pros:

Started with Pretty good writing with a decent plot. Characters were relatable and look pretty good.
Scenes and settings make sense and the characters and story feel believable but...

Cons:
Becoming less interesting with each update, repetitive with no character growth.

A bit too wordy and bland, more intensity /risks needed.
Sex scenes are below average and seem short like they are not a priority.

This definitely could be better as the story comes off a bit boring and stale with no real intensity. Quite predictable unfortunately and not being rescued by the sex scenes which should be the reward for putting up with the wordiness but instead makes you feel quite bored.

Hopefully the Dev will spice things up a bit, throw some curves into the story-line. The characters swinging should have a bit more of a risk factor, new neighbours or introducing a main characters parents/inlaws into the mix would help perhaps. But gee make them more believable and less boring.

Definitely not ready to give up on this one yet as the Dev shows some writing talent and that seems more rare nowadays.

Based on version 0.10, it seems like this game is not for me. It features multiple protagonists, with the majority being your girlfriend's ex-girlfriend who is a lesbian. The game mainly functions as a visual novel with limited pseudo choices focusing on how the main character got convinced by his girlfriend to let her ex-girlfriend with her new girl stay in their apartment. Unfortunately despite having some enjoyable moments with the hot GF, the storyline revolves around the ex-girlfriend's life but also winning back your girlfriend and she will eventually succeed. Why is the game not tagged as NTR ? Because you can also have sexual encounters with both your girlfriend and apparently her ex-girlfriend at a much much later point, and that should balance it out ? Nah. A weird mix of elements.

I thought the main character might make a move on the ex-girl or her gal or they could've pursued the MC, ya know? It's supposed to be a chill situation, but it's just weird. I can't even explain it. Like, you still get to get down with your girl, but the lesbian couple is all about each other. Then the ex-girl snatches your girl, but you're cool with it but you don't have your time with these two. There's no pay-off or fun in it. It's just really odd.

Models look good tho.

The game is utterly boring.

At this point, I'm not sure who the dev is trying to appeal to either.

The characters are nice looking, but that's no surprise since they're the same as the previous game. So, this is not deserving of an extra star.

The choices seems all but meaningless, at which point, they might as well not be there, and the game going full kinetic novel.

There's a more lesbian content than straight, which might please some, but I personally find it boring, which for me, is not helping keeping interest in the game.

There's no story to speak off, nothing interesting happens... just... talking about their days and food.

Fap value wise, well, it depends on the person I guess. If you're into lesbians for whatever reason, it might excite you somewhat, if you're straight, you'll likely get bored very quickly.

This one seems like it'll suffer the same fate as the previous game: death by boredom due to fuck all actually happening, despite the many updates.

Good render
Kinetic novel
pretty women

shame it's a lesbian story with a 4th wheel male mc

the premise is your girlfriend is excited to move to a new town where her ex-lover is, this ex-lover of hers is conveniently in need of a place to stay because her dorm is being renovated, so you offer her and her gf a place to stay, the player has no choice, and for whatever reason, this dev loves making lesbian stories with a male protagonist, as I said before this is a kinetic novel so you have no choice and your gf will have sex with her ex whether you like it or not, there are people on this thread who defend this dev for being drama free but that's just pure delusion, this game is setting up the mc to get cucked but at least the lesbians will be willing to get dicked down coz that makes sense, I much rather prefer my lesbians with a female protag not a male one

I like the Game but their are some Things i woud Change.
Story is simple but ok for me. A Game like this doesn`t need a complicated Story.
Characters are acting like real People.
The Cameraposition in some Scenes are not so great. Only show the Back and Shoulders.
Also the Privatzones from some People look Fake, without any Privatehair the look like Puppets.
Katie looks good but i woud give her atleast a Little Bit Privathair.