It feels like a proof of concept as the game is very short and there currently being no enemy so to speak.
There's nothing wrong with the character model, I'm not personally a fan of extreme proportions but if the character looked like me people would be telling you "she's got the body of a 12 year old". You can't please everybody so go with what you like and if you add extra characters later you can use them for variety.
There really needs to be either a visible enemy or some kind of indication as to where it is, even if its just the sound of footsteps or scraping and a red pulse to the edge of the screen where the creep is that would at least give more of a sense that something is hunting or chasing you. Currently the panic state and death just comes across as random death for no reason.
The newspaper articles could do with staying up longer or staying until the player presses a key or clicks the mouse.
More content would also be nice although some form of save system would probably be needed if you expand the game otherwise people will just get frustrated and resort to complaining about the game design. Maybe a checkpoint system would work best.
I think it makes a change to see somebody taking inspiration from the horror genre, especially when you look at how many games here start with "you return home to live with your mother and 2 sisters after being away for x years"
Trixpix has the best Commentary of all.
The Title says Creepy Girl; Based on the commentary, That seems to be an accurate description of what you all felt. There is no promise of interactive Sex, so how can you be disappointed because you made an assumption.
All Trixpix suggestions for improvement mirror my own.
I'd like some indication of how to detect or avoid the monster, and maybe an explanation of game controls.
Since it is such a short game, maybe that's why there is no save.
All that aside, While they have been fun, if one more person releases a game where teenage boy moves in with his aunt and two cousins (or his teacher) but you have to modify it because Patreon has an incest ban, I'm going back to playing XBOX. Even the best of those Aunt Cousin Cousin Mom Sister Teacher games are getting stale and repetitive.
At least this guy has a new and different Idea.
Thanks for being original.
Red
