- Nov 21, 2017
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Wow... That was quite emotional. I wonder how you'll feel about your outburst when you realize I'm not asking for money and the game is neither new nor devoid of contentSo tired of these "games" that can be slapped together in an afternoon going up with a Patreon already set up to milk the audience. It's already a coin toss if this game will be abandoned or not. They finished the game that had a publisher. They didn't finish the game that didn't, bc.. there are a lot of financial justifications. If you have a publisher, you're guaranteed some level of financial reward so long as you actually deliver a finished product.
This isn't even a proof of concept or elevator pitch. It's fucking nothing. It's 3min of text, a few dozen renders where the characters are constantly shifting all over the screen and then its over.
I'm so fucking tired of saying this - your initial release needs to be your most expansive. You need to get people hooked into the characters or the plot as well SHOWING us what type of content you're expecting to deliver. That doesn't even need to be H-scenes. None of this half of all dialogue is exposition bullshit. Not 5,000 fucking tags that you will never deliver on. Show us the foundation of the fucking story you intend to tell. THIS?! This isn't even a boundary marker. It's not a single brick. It's not even the septic tank for the shit that's inevitably coming out of this.
If you want my money, YOU have to show me that you're invested in what you're doing. You failed to do that. That's the only job you had. It didn't need to be a masterpiece, it didn't need to give anything away, you just had to even just fool me into believing that you believed in the story you wanted to tell. You were too lazy to even bullshit your way through the assignment, ffs.
The original game by Hvostt has 13 released chapters (plus the prologue), and I've made a mod that replaces graphics and adds extra content to 12 of them. At some point I decided to go with a full-blown remake that improves the renders further and adds even more content. I'm releasing this as I go, starting from, well, the prologue. As for the lack of sex scenes, I've considered putting some in the prologue, but it just didn't have much sense story-wise. They will start appearing in chapter 1, though.
And just to be clear - if you don't like this kind of dialogues, easy-going plot, sprites shifting around, huge boobs, etc. That's totally fine. My aim here is to clarify the nonsense before it scares away someone who might have enjoyed the game otherwise, not to dissuade you of anything. Keep your money, brother. I'm good.
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