Necrosian
Active Member
- Jul 26, 2017
- 875
- 1,516
- 387
I presume English isn't your main language, but the text block you wrote is hard to read, not to mention spelling mistakes and punctuation. So i suggest you write shorter sentences and split them up into separate paragraphs for each point.mkrudesign morning. I really, really wish in this will be presente Good Path Vampire for Mila, Becouse I love Vampire, good Vampire without turn or feed on enemy, becouse I think this will be more awsome too see this rout were see wekape early and and save live to her sisters without turning or kill them. Readng the introdution on the post, I think you don't wont doo route Were Mila like Ancient Vampire continue be good as Vampire saving live to inocence (i don't if i wrote right or misteken), she can gain trust from youma without killng or turning them. I think this will be mor intersting. But I think you love this GAME OVER, who I hate more in all rpg games. Please this will be more be interesting path, with save humans live from die miserely, in this case she can turn them into vampires if them aske her to save them, if ther no way to find a doctor or heling herb or potion or holy water to save humans life, Mila can turn them in vampire. I know you think this don't gonna hape, becous you love only game over in this game. But I think this will more productive in the future. Also I wish in this game have more Vampire path, one whe she gonna killed buy hunter if don't do right choise to avoid this path: like killing humans to feed her self to become stronger, no heve mercy to humans' lifes, don't heped them those action make this GAME OVER, like consequences to bad choise. I kkno You love this GAME OVER. GOOD VAMPIRE will be gain othervise , like save humans, help them or first to turn them she can aske If them vonna life like a vampire, and teach them how life without killing incencents humans. I Know you alredy lought at me becou I don't wont to main routes in this game, I'm relly relly hate GAME OVER, I hoe you understend me on my hops, to ply a this game without get engy on Game Over. If you like the idea I wish this will be implamente in the sistem in the game. Plaese it importans to me too see If she act well like doit in the past. this will be more usfull in her vampire life if also she save her friend and ally Iris. Becous I wish she survived in the and into corrupted villages, and this will more impacte on choise she make in previuse life makein good or bad choise, to gain a End or enother.
This will make it easier for others to understand you and you'll get your point across better.
Not trying to insult you just giving a bit of advice.