VN Ren'Py Cronus [v1.0] [Sonny]

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The Sonny said:
The worst thing is that I'm planning to find a way out of this route hahaha. Even if you enter it by mistake
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You should do vice versa too. Like if someone fails and enters one route, they have to play it for awhile then there is a way to get put into the other route.
 
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Sossse said:
premise seems interessting and the aicg seems... acceptable. but the mc is kind of hard to place. introducing someone who is suppsoded to be the city´s "top detective" (a rather well respected job mind you and a position usally hold by a very headstrong person) in a potantial ntr plot can easyly become even more senceless then this ntr plots usually are... i mean, you dont need to be batman lvl of detective to see this 1. day and think:

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Yes, exactly. That's why I intend to work on this part. But the ntr route will be avoidable, even if you enter it by mistake.

Thanks for playing
 
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13325 said:
You should do vice versa too. Like if someone fails and enters one route, they have to play it for awhile then there is a way to get put into the other route.
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Got it. I'll try my best to make sure the routes aren't completely linear
 
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OhGodNotAgain said:
More AI shovelware.
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I was a little worried about using cg there. Not least because it's difficult to control and the images may not come out well. But I intend to change in the future, I don't want to get hung up on it.

Anyway, I'm trying to mask it more in the plot and in the number of routes to follow.
 
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Interesting start, though shouldn't notify NTR yet, the demo didn't contain a single bit of it. But it was funny how Kimmy get jealous and have sex with you, when speak the new secretary of Marcus, but if you go directly to Markus for the case, she only give you a footjob. I'm already intregued how these 2 paths will develop further.
 
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Pretty good start. The story has potential.

Hopefully, the characters get more substance pictorially.


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The "Don" in this case is a nickname. It will be explained better in the next few days.
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That's fine, but it only confuses the player now. You are asked to pick a name, but then he's "Don." Confusing. :unsure:

A few punctuation issues.
i'm = I'm
i = ( I ) when by itself.
No period at the end of a sentence drives me crazy, but that's me and my OCD. :LOL:

I wish you much success.
 
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Saint Blackmoor said:
Pretty good start. The story has potential.

Hopefully, the characters get more substance pictorially.



That's fine, but it only confuses the player now. You are asked to pick a name, but then he's "Don." Confusing. :unsure:

A few punctuation issues.
i'm = I'm
i = I when by itself.
No period at the end of a sentence drives me crazy, but that's me and my OCD. :LOL:

I wish you much success.
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Thanks for the feedback hehe.

So, I'm thinking of putting in a little interaction between the MC and Kimmy, to give a better background on this nickname right at the beginning. I think that way it won't confuse the players so much.

I'm also going to improve the punctuation of the text hehe. But natural dialog in English is complicated in my case. I'm far from fluent hahah.

Thanks for giving the game a try!
 
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