So I checked out your patreon on a whim and read the latest post about important changes. After seeing the images of the chiefs room and corridor I have to say that I actually preferred the previous look from the demo. The new ones look way more cartoonish and bright. I thought the original ones in the demo were actually pretty nice and unique. They had a more gritty and dark look that matched the games main menu image and detective theme.
I also saw you are designing the characters from scratch again. I liked Kimmy's look as is and hope you won't change her too much. Anyways I thought you had some good stuff going already and maybe just needed to be touched up to fix text and such. Just wanted to give some feedback.
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Apologies for sharing but the post was free to view and I wanted to show the side by side look.
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Left is original demo, right is the new preview
My first thought was basically what happened? The new preview corridor is a complete contrast from the original look and feel from the demo.