YogSothoth1982

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Yes, exactly. That's why I intend to work on this part. But the ntr route will be avoidable, even if you enter it by mistake.

Thanks for playing
Personally, my favorite way to avoid NTR is by having an option at the start of the game that allows me to disable it and then the game works as if it didn't even exist as a remote option.
 
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JenMistress

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Well, finally got to giving this game a shot. For a first day, very interesting introduction, on a few routes too. Looks like I would be doing several sets of saves. And very curious as to where all this goes. Thank you so very much for this, and totally looking forward for more!!!
 
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The Sonny

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Well, finally got to giving this game a shot. For a first day, very interesting introduction, on a few routes too. Looks like I would be doing several sets of saves. And very curious as to where all this goes. Thank you so very much for this, and totally looking forward for more!!!
Thanks for giving the game a try. I'm working on improving the design, scenarios, characters, etc. When I can, I'll update you with the new artwork.
 

cenor

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So I checked out your patreon on a whim and read the latest post about important changes. After seeing the images of the chiefs room and corridor I have to say that I actually preferred the previous look from the demo. The new ones look way more cartoonish and bright. I thought the original ones in the demo were actually pretty nice and unique. They had a more gritty and dark look that matched the games main menu image and detective theme.

I also saw you are designing the characters from scratch again. I liked Kimmy's look as is and hope you won't change her too much. Anyways I thought you had some good stuff going already and maybe just needed to be touched up to fix text and such. Just wanted to give some feedback.

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Apologies for sharing but the post was free to view and I wanted to show the side by side look.
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Left is original demo, right is the new preview
My first thought was basically what happened? The new preview corridor is a complete contrast from the original look and feel from the demo.
 
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So I checked out your patreon on a whim and read the latest post about important changes. After seeing the images of the chiefs room and corridor I have to say that I actually preferred the previous look from the demo. The new ones look way more cartoonish and bright. I thought the original ones in the demo were actually pretty nice and unique. They had a more gritty and dark look that matched the games main menu image and detective theme.

I also saw you are designing the characters from scratch again. I liked Kimmy's look as is and hope you won't change her too much. Anyways I thought you had some good stuff going already and maybe just needed to be touched up to fix text and such. Just wanted to give some feedback.

Edit:
Apologies for sharing but the post was free to view and I wanted to show the side by side look.
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Left is original demo, right is the new preview
My first thought was basically what happened? The new preview corridor is a complete contrast from the original look and feel from the demo.
It's okay to share. I made it public for that very reason.

As for the new designs, I wanted to make them more stylized because the characters will be drawn in an anime/cartoon format. So it would be strange, in my opinion, to contrast the more realistic scenery with the 2D characters (which was my goal from the start).

Not to mention that the old scenarios were purely AI. I didn't change anything, I just put it there. The new ones will have a better job, both in terms of painting and choice. The appearance of the characters won't be changed, I'll just draw them. I think it's better than having pure AI cgs.

Anyway, I appreciate your opinion on this matter.
 

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It's okay to share. I made it public for that very reason.

As for the new designs, I wanted to make them more stylized because the characters will be drawn in an anime/cartoon format. So it would be strange, in my opinion, to contrast the more realistic scenery with the 2D characters (which was my goal from the start).

Not to mention that the old scenarios were purely AI. I didn't change anything, I just put it there. The new ones will have a better job, both in terms of painting and choice. The appearance of the characters won't be changed, I'll just draw them. I think it's better than having pure AI cgs.

Anyway, I appreciate your opinion on this matter.
Hmm, well I'll see how it looks I guess with a couple updates but it's more cartoony than stylized to me. The demo version was a more fitting style in my opinion than the new look. I was really excited for this game with the demo but seeing the new look really toned that down, especially if the characters are gonna be more cartoony now too. I think you could have touched up the original ones and made them really good. Have you considered a poll to see what style would attract people more?
 
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The Sonny

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Hmm, well I'll see how it looks I guess with a couple updates but it's more cartoony than stylized to me. The demo version was a more fitting style in my opinion than the new look. I was really excited for this game with the demo but seeing the new look really toned that down, especially if the characters are gonna be more cartoony now too. I think you could have touched up the original ones and made them really good. Have you considered a poll to see what style would attract people more?
Got it. That demo design was created in a hurry, since I wanted to get the story out there. The style I envisioned would be something close to games like summertime saga, milfy plaza, etc., where there's an elaboration behind it. It's not just AI cgs thrown at the screen. But there's nothing stopping me from listening to people's opinions on this. I'll consider the poll idea.

But the characters will continue in the anime style. But they'll be drawn by me.
 

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Got it. That demo design was created in a hurry, since I wanted to get the story out there. The style I envisioned would be something close to games like summertime saga, milfy plaza, etc., where there's an elaboration behind it. It's not just AI cgs thrown at the screen. But there's nothing stopping me from listening to people's opinions on this. I'll consider the poll idea.

But the characters will continue in the anime style. But they'll be drawn by me.
Gotcha, playing the demo the style just seemed to fit perfectly with the premise and detective story. Especially in a netorare corruption game. I get more of a light hearted type game from the new look sorta like summertime saga like you said or leisure suit larry games.
 
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The Sonny

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Gotcha, playing the demo the style just seemed to fit perfectly with the premise and detective story. Especially in a netorare corruption game. I get more of a light hearted type game from the new look sorta like summertime saga like you said or leisure suit larry games.
I'll be adding interactive images to some scenes as well. This corridor scene will be one of them. But there's nothing stopping me from changing colors, or some designs. After all, the game is only just beginning.
 

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I guess I'll wait to try the game until you implement it.
I've added a choice menu at the start of the game + an alternative route if you want the NTR content to be disabled. So those who choose will have the same number of routes available. I'll implement it in the next update, along with other things.
 
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cenor

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I'll be adding interactive images to some scenes as well. This corridor scene will be one of them. But there's nothing stopping me from changing colors, or some designs. After all, the game is only just beginning.
Maybe if you change the color from the light blue to something more neutral like a beige or gray color, blue isn't really a color I would picture a police station. I am very interested to know what kind of drug this cronus is, if it's some sort of aphrodisiac drug that maybe gets used on Kimmy and others further in the story.
 
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The Sonny

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Maybe if you change the color from the light blue to something more neutral like a beige or gray color, blue isn't really a color I would picture a police station. I am very interested to know what kind of drug this cronus is, if it's some sort of aphrodisiac drug that maybe gets used on Kimmy and others further in the story.
I'm thinking of doing that too. Maybe it'll smooth things out more.
Thanks for taking an interest in the story hehe. I'll try as much as possible to keep it consistent.