Did the same for me, until I realized the error was with URM. If you have it, remove it. If not, could be something else.
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I did notice two more wrong gender pronouns popped up:
"That thought made him feel nauseous." ("her" This was in the new scene where Emily is watching Isabelle at the club. Appears twice too.)
"Following Isabelle, I saw him with Gus." = ("her" This is on Isabelle's phone history page.)
Also a minor thing, but the majority of the contact page history entries are written in the first person like Emily is narrating them using the pronouns "I/me", but then there are a few older entries still in second person that use the word "you", which should ideally be changed to make things more uniform?
Most of them are under Andrew's profile, but there are also these couple of entries under Gus/Marcus/Mrs. Harris
"Gus has lent you $[gus_debt]."
"Marcus and Mrs.Harris seem to know each other. You followed them to a private club, but you couldn't get in."
"Marcus and Mrs. Harris seem to know each other. You followed them to a private club, but you couldn't get in."
"That thought made him feel nauseous." ("her" This was in the new scene where Emily is watching Isabelle at the club. Appears twice too.)
"Following Isabelle, I saw him with Gus." = ("her" This is on Isabelle's phone history page.)
Also a minor thing, but the majority of the contact page history entries are written in the first person like Emily is narrating them using the pronouns "I/me", but then there are a few older entries still in second person that use the word "you", which should ideally be changed to make things more uniform?
Most of them are under Andrew's profile, but there are also these couple of entries under Gus/Marcus/Mrs. Harris
"Gus has lent you $[gus_debt]."
"Marcus and Mrs.Harris seem to know each other. You followed them to a private club, but you couldn't get in."
"Marcus and Mrs. Harris seem to know each other. You followed them to a private club, but you couldn't get in."
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This phone thing takes a long time to do for many reasons, mainly because it requires me to go back over everything months after writing it to figure out what impacts each contact and what doesn't ^^
At one point, I realized that I had written in the first person and in the third person, and I admit that I was too lazy to harmonize it.
But that's one of the secondary things I plan to do eventually.
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I'll add a little button for that in a future update, but it kind of spoils the fun of discovering the different paths
Will this game be on steam or other platform? I'm interested in buying it (I'm not a fan of patreon in general but I am open to buying games that I like)
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A lot of pronoun issues and some untranslated text. Also, how the devil do you get her to pose topless for the photoshoot? I tried upping her slut, sub and lust stats, none of that worked? I hate when you have to make every single "correct" choice to unlock things like that. I get making choices that start or end a relationship but needing a certain stat to be so high just to let them do something sexy, is annoying.
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It's very much a VN, just with a large number of potential paths. Going by tag rules for this site,
sandbox is for "free-roam type of games" and there isn't really any of this here.It's karma. That's, roughly, a stat indicating good girl/bad girl mentality, with the latter (negative karma) being more willing to push or even cross boundaries. The "slut" stat is for more explicitly sexual choices, like agreeing further to pose nude, e.g.:
Python:
menu:
"Agreeing to pose topless" (sensitive=(karma<=0), condition = True):
//...
menu:
"Agree to pose nude" (sensitive=(slut>=2 and karma <=-1), condition = True):bamachine
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That is weird. Karma means you are a good or bad person, not you are into exhibitionist activities. That would fit more with the slut points, even though that is still wrong. Liking to be nude in front of others does not necessarily make you a slut but it is closer to that than karma.
Like i said, karma in this game is used as indicator if Emily is a "good girl" who obeys all the rules, doesn't peep on people, doesn't steal, doesn't lie and certainly doesn't expose herself as a photo model. Bad karma here isn't so much she is explicitly a "bad person" but more of a "fuck the rules" person. Which may or may not be considered "bad".
Slut points are more tied to things more sexual than a simple topless photo. Like, taking a full nude photo in this particular example, where it does become part of requirements.
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OK, just finished the current build. Aside from all the pronoun issues, some untranslated lines, some syntax stuff plus the "karma" thing(that I got around using urm), I like the overall game and do not agree with those saying Emily is not attractive. I do hope that we can have her hook up with her "sister" in the future. Don't want Connor to get any of her. Also hoping for a Emily, Charlotte, Liam threesome. Charlotte hinted at it, after I chose to tease the idea when she caught them half naked in the living room.
This is already in the game. It can potentially happen on Monday of 2nd week, in the evening, depending on earlier choices. Can be a start of poly romance between those three, too.